OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Forgiveness (completed) - Page 10

Originally posted by: devsum

OMG>>>it's too good...and makes me regret even more the incomplete ones...

Originally posted by: napstermonster

THANK YOU! An honest opinion, one which makes me think, I HAVE to write more, to get feedback from Shagun that will make her feel better! I will have to try and see if I have it in me to give some redemption to the man I've created--one way or the other, its a challenge, and one I am going to do my very best to achieve!

I am not at all offended--you need to see the smile on my face right now---because I want to know your visceral reaction, and how far I can go, before swerving the boat back into calmer waters.

I don't know if you should or shouldn't read Part 3 of Forgiveness, though I do hope you will, if only to see Rudra's fall--I will be closing the loop on what has happened with Parvati in this episode with what I hope will be the first salvo to end the frozen, cruel Jallad that is Rudra right now. But please do read Yesterday and Tomorrow: Part 11, Redemption (appropriately titled, I hope). That will be this weekend's post, and in it i'll try to make up for the anger and disgust you are feeling right now.


Once again, dont know if the violence of this piece will fade for you--but I am glad to have your honest feedback, and you real take. More importantly, I am glad I know who I have to keep in mind as I work on Part 3, on the off chance she reads it...