YEH PYAR HAI(ss) pt 10 pg 24 jan 20 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: logambika

wow yaar... nice update... it deserves a wait...



thanks a lot loga...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: kp_yasharan

wow... aswome update di love it wating for next part



thanks a lot khusbhoo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: heer_85

nice update Nikki

dat kesav 😡 how dare he
nice twist at temple a lady n a boy said thy r khanak family
wow!! shaan married khanak by apply sindoor on her forehead 😃
now she is my wife kya baat hai



thanks a lot heer...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: minnu345

wow Shaaadi...
beautiful update khanak



thanks a lot minnu...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: kaya23

😊Wow they r married now & Take care di & Keep Updating ur ff's & ss r all nice

love u,😛



thanks a lot kaya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
hi friends...

pt 6

doctor : shaan wat have u done...

but shaan was looking at natashas pic in the wall...

savitha : bhaiya...

shaan turned and saw savitha with the tray with coffee...

savitha came and placed the tray and shaan signaled with eyes to go out...

savitha went out...

doctor : shaan...u should have called me...

shaan : wat r u saying ...they would have took her and gone...(angryly)

doctor looked at shaan for a min r so...

shaan composed himself...

shaan : sorry doctor...u know the situation there...there no one was listening...

doctor : u should have called police...

shaan : that time i dont know wat to do...they were pulling her and going ...

doctor looked at him ...

doctor : okay shaan i can understand ur situation...but...

shaan looked at doctor...

shaan : but...wat doctor...

doctor : if she was already married...

shaan : doc...no..u said she is virgin...

doctor looked at him with a smile...

doctor : there r possibilities...if she had met with accident on the wedding day...

r if she had loved someone...wat will happen...if she became normal getting

her memory back...wat will u do shaan...did u thought about it...

and after she gets memory its not sure she will remeber u...

shaans face frowned...he kept his hands on his head...and his head is down...

doctor : shaan...

shaan slowly raised his head and saw doctor...

shaan : doctor this is only for safety for her..when there relatives come..

i will move out of it...

doctor : how shaan ...u both r married now...she is ur wife...did u tell these things to ur parents..

shaan : no doctor they dont know...u also dont say to them...it will be over when she gets her memory back r

when her relatives come...so dont want them to bother about this..and...

shaan : i will get a divorce doctor...(firm look)

doctor looked at him in surprise...

shaan : s doctor...i am just taking care of her...thats it...nothing else more...

khanak : shantanuuu...(yelling from garden...)

shaan : khanak...

he quickly ran outside to the lawn...

shaan : hey khanak wat happened...r u alright(breathing heavily...)

khanak : look here ...how beautifull it is...(with a broad smile showed him a small

baby chicken)

shaan : umm its beautifulll...(with a smile)

shaan : where did u get it...

khanak : ansh brought ...cute na...

shaan : s cute...

doctor : shaan ...

shaan : oops sorry doctor ...she shouted ...so only i came...

doctor : its okay shaan ...i have to go...

shaan : umm okay doctor...

shaan walked to doctors car and while doctor was about to start the car...

doctor : shaan...

shaan : s doctor ...

doctor : its not care..its love...

doctor drove the car and went away...

shaan was standing there itself...

shaan thought wat..wat did he say...i am in love...his mind no..no...my love is natasha...

his heart no..it is love...his mind no no..it cont be...

meanwhile khanak came and called him so he went inside...

shaan took care of khanak very well...when he has work he leaves with savitha...

when he was there he used to talk with khanak and ansh telling them some intersting stories

r telling them some intersting things...sometimes he will busy in home also..

during that time he does work while khanak draws something...when ansh also not there...

a week passed very nicely...

one day afternoon...

savitha : bhaiya...ansh is having fever...i am taking him hospital...

i cannot come in the evening...

shaan : its okay di...i will takecare...u takecare of ansh...

savitha went to house...

khanak : shantanu...when will ansh come...

shaan : he will come tomorrow...

khanak : oh...then u come and play with me...

shaan : no khanak...i am having work...u watch tv...after finishing my work

i will come and play with u okay...

khanak : sure...

shaan : sure...

shaan switched a cartoon show for khanak in the room and he came

out to the hall and he was working in his laptop...

while inside the room khanak was watching tv...

khanak : i have watched this show...let me change...

khanak changed the channel with the remote...channel was changed to

a loacl tv channel...khanak was about to change she was stopped...

she watched the tv...it was a film...she does not know know the language but

she continued watching the film...

in that film a persdon tied the mangal sutra to the girl and kept sindoor on her forehead

khanak : uh...shantanu did this to me on the temple na...she touched the mangal sutra

that was haldi coated one...

she continued watching...after 20 minutes r so...current went...due to bad weather...

it was cloudy and rain has started to pour...

shaan came inside the room...

shaan : wat khanak ...

khanak : ummhmm...

shaan : lets play something ...a board game...

khanak : no...shall we dance...

shaan : wat dance...

khanak : ha now...

shaan : ummm okay...wait..he took his cell phone ...

shaan : oh no all r melody songs ...nothing she will like...

khanak : come on put shantanu...

shaan : ummm..okay..he oned a song...

it was khuch khass hai song...

rain was pouring outside ..cold breeze was coming ...

shaan : do u know to dance...

khanak : ha...

shaan was looking at her surprised...

shaan thought how she know it...he was surprised more...

khanak was holding his shoulders and standing very close to shaan...

shaan looked at her in shock...

khanak was smiling at him lovingly...on seeing her face shaan felt something inside...

khanak was just making steps to and fro...shaans hand slowly holded

khanaks waist and they both started to move...khanak was smiling and

dancing with him...shaan was awestruck on seeing her beautifull glorious smile...

they were dancing very closely to eachother...song ended they were standing very closely to eachother...

khanak was thinking something while shaan was looking at her face and her lips...

khanak smiled and then she moved her face more closer to his face..

while shaan also moved his face close to her ...while khanak was about to move

from him shaan kissed her lips...khanak did not know wat is happening...

shaan kissed her deeply...khanak was not able to breath she started to beat shaan...

her hands peirced his necka nd she tried to push his face...

there was a loud thunder shaan came back to reality...he moved away...

khanak fainted down in the floor...

shaan : khanak...shit...

shaan quickly grabbed her and went placed her in bed...

shaan : khanak...khanak...

tried to wake her...rubbed her hands ...sprayed some water on her face...

shaan : khanak...khanak...

khanak slowly opened her eyes...

khanak : why did u do that...it was not in the film...

shaan looked at her confused...

shaan : wat...wat...

khanak slowly sat in the bed...

khanak : i want water...

shaan took water and gave to her...khanak drank the water...

khanak : it was not in the film...

shaan : wat...wat r u saying...

khanak : i saw changing channel that time i saw a boy tied this ...(showed her

mangal sutra ) to a girl then they both danced and then both there faces were

near and current went...its paining ...touching her lips...

shaan : sorry khanak ..i am really sorry...(holding her hands. and made her beat him..)

khanak : shantanu...leave...stop it...it will pain for u na...

shaan looked at her and placed his face on her hands and tears rolled down from his eyes..

khanak : leave my hands...then u have to allow me to eat two icecreams now okay...

shaan left her hands...khanak went to kitchen to take icecreams...

later at night khanak was sleeping in the bed..shaan was sitting besides her...

in his hand there was natashas pic...

shaan was thinking a lot and fighting over his mind and heart and then...

shaan slowly placed the pic in the side table and then looked at khanak...

shaan : s khanak...as doctor said i am in love with u...i thought it was care but the truth is

i am in love with u...

kissed her forehead and he layed besides her and slept...

next day morning they both were standing in the pooja room...

(usually after getting ready they both pray and the only they both eat..)

khanak was standing there eyes closed

khanak : i want to get alright soon god...(she said as usuall as shaan told her)

shaan in his heart she should not get alright..and no one should come in search of her




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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Aww lovely update niki...
OMG now shaan praying that khanak should'ne get her memory back and no one should come in search of her...Lol too cutee :)))
Hayee its nice that shaan realized his love for khanak...superb update...
wish no one comes between them lol...
waiting for the next update niki...
Plzz update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Wow thats amazing that shaan married khanak and he loves her now...
loved the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Loved the update so much di.. 😃 Doctor is so shocked knowing Shaan married Khanak!!! Like Shaan said he had no option and couldn't think much to save Khanak from those fakers!!! 😊

Doctor is right..What if Khanak love Suraj.. Hope that is not the case..Shaan will be heartbroken!!!

He ready to give divorce if her relatives come.. He is just caring..Awww..He rushed when she care and she showed him the cute chickens.. 😊

Doctor is right..Shaan is in love with Khanak!!! ❤️

She wanna dance and not play..ShaNak dance on Kuch Khaas Hai..😃 😳

Shaan staring her lips..😳 Someone does that often..😉 Awww..He kissed her..😳 And she hit him back and fainted!!! Poor Shaan..Got scared seeing her faint!!! So she did all this dance from watching movie!!!

Yippee!!! 🥳 Shaan finally accepted he loves Khanak!!! ❤️ [:D/]

Awww..He doesnt want her memory to be back..Love makes a person selfish sometimes!!!

Looking forward and thank you for writing an amazing update di.. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Niki lovely update
Doctor and Shaan convo is nice and also doctor said shaan is in love with khanak ...loved it.
Shaan wants to play but khanak wants to dance and both danced Kuch khas hai and when shaan kissed khanak she says its not in the film...cute
Shaan realized that he loves khanak...superb
While shaan and khanak praying god shaan prayed that khanak should not get memory back and no one should come in search of her...loved it
No one should come between shanak . If it happens, shaan will be heart broken again
Waiting for next update

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