YEH PYAR HAI(ss) pt 10 pg 24 jan 20 - Page 11

Created

Last reply

Replies

172

Views

14.4k

Users

19

Likes

247

Frequent Posters

niki_rbo thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago


thanks a lot man...
niki_rbo thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: logambika

tat was a nice update yaar... thnx for the pm



thanks a lot loga...
niki_rbo thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ONAego

Awesome story niki ⭐️👍🏼
Loved it❤️
After so long i'm again here n can't stop myself to reading shanak story all over again😳
Feeling nostalgic
ThanQ 4 pm...
Update soon! 🤗



thanks a lot ona...
niki_rbo thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shonai

lovely story Niki di and a unique one.👏

loving the concept so much.😃 thanks for sharing.😊
keep writing :)😊

~
Priyasree



thanks a lot priya..talking to u after a long time...
niki_rbo thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago


thanks a lot minnu...
niki_rbo thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jaisyjazz

eeekkksss

hayeee the kiss confession omg i m very happy
love it very much:)
awww he praying she should not leave him so sweet :)
update soon :)



thanks a lot jaisy...
niki_rbo thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
hi friends...

pt 7


next day...

savitha : khanak di...no..wat r u doing...

khanak was having the mangal sutra in her hand...

savitha : u should not remove this ...

khanak : why...i dont like this...its coming inbetween while playing...

savitha : di first put it in ur neck...

khanak : no...

savitha : di...please put it in ur neck...

khanak : will u give me icecream...

savitha : ummm okay...

khanak : then okay...she weared it around her neck...

shaan : wat is happening came from office...

savitha : nothing bhaiya..i will bring coffee..

shaan : no di...i am going to temple...

savitha : wat bhaiya wat happened...

shaan : nothing di...i felt like going...

khanak : shantanu i will also come...

shaan : umm okay...

they both went to the temple...after prayin g shaan and khanak sat for sometimes..

shaan : khanak...

khanak : ummm...(she was eating a laddoo)

shaan : will u leave me if anyone comes and call u...

khanak : no...(was continuing eating laddoo..)

shaan : sure...extended his hand...

khanak placed her hand on his hand and shook her head in no and said no...

then they went to restaurant and after finishing there dinner

while returning to house...shaans cell rang...

shaan : hello doctor wats up...

doctor : shaan its a good news...

shaan was little nervous...

doctor : shaan...hello..shaan r u there ...

shaan : ha doctor ...

doctor : khanaks parents r found..

shaan was shocked...his face became frowned...

khanak : shantanu...

shaan turned his head...

shaan : khanak...no..give it...

(khanak has removed her mangalsutra and she was about to throw out...)

doctor : they...r...

shaan and khanak :ahhh...

while trying to grab it he did not see the road and they met with an accident...

after some hours...shaan slowly opened his eyes...

shaan : ouch...he felt pain...

he looked around..he was lying in a hospital room...there was bandage in his one hand...

a small bandage in his head...the clock showed next day morning...

shaan : khanak...he got up from his bed...he felt pain in his hand..

riya : shaan..no...(She entered the room...)

shaan : doctor riya..where is khanak...is she alright...(tensed and worried look)

riya : umm she is alright..first u take rest...

shaan : i want to see her..please where is she now...

riya : she is in that corner room...u wait ..i will call doctor...

riya went outside...shaan also walked outside the room...

riya was also going to khanaks room..he also went there...

he stopped at the entrance itself...he was standing still...

he saw khanak was lying in the bed with small bandage in head

some small scratches in her hands...a lady was sitting and holding khanaks

hand and another man was standing there ...

shaan thought omg ...they r khanaks parents...is they going to take her...

doctor : sharma dont worry...she is alright...

lady : khanak beta..khanak...

doctor : mrs vidya dont worry...

there was movement in khanak...all looked at her...

shaan also looked at her but he was still standing outside...

khanak : ahh...umm...

khanak slowly opened her eyes...she looked around...

khanak : m...mom...dad...

vidhya and sharam holded khanaks hand and said beta...

khanak tried to get up...

doctor : no..no..u just lay down...

khanak looked around ...

khanak : mom...dad...wh..why am i in hospital...

sharma : nothing beta..small accident...

doctor : do u remeber who they r ...

khanak : they r my parents...

doctor : do u know who i am ...

khanak : u r doctor...

doctor : wat do u remeber last...

khanak : uhh...i went to a party at my friends house...

doctor looked at sharma...

sharma : that was the day she met with accident...

doctor : then u remeber anything else...

khanak : i was coming home in my scooty...then...then i dont remeber...

khanak looked around and see saw the calendar...

khanak : mom in four days my college is going to start..how come...

its really been a month how come...she tried to think...

khanak : ahhh...my head is paining...

she fainted down...

sharma and vidhya : khanak...doctor...

doctor : nothing to worry ...riya...

doctor told somethings to riya ...the turned towards sharma...

doctor : sharma...she has now became normal...she does not remeber wat happened after

that accident...dont ask her about anything...if she thinks she is getting disturbed..

then it may result in bad conditions...so dont make her recall wat happened

these days okay...takecare of her...

doctor came out...and he was shocked...he saw shaan was walking and going

to his room very sadly...doctor quickly followed him...

shaan went and sat in the bed very sadly...

doctor : shaan...r u alright...

shaan did not talk...he became very sad...

doctor : shaan...

shaan : so she does not remeber me na doctor,...

doctor : shaan...slowly pressed his hand...

madhavi : shaan...shaan...

madhavi and sunil came inside the room with worried face...

madhavi stood near shaan...shaan hugged his mom...and tears fell down from his eyes...

madhavi : shaan no...(gently patted his head...)

madhavi also cried...sunil touched shaans shoulder...

doctor was standing near sunil...

sunil : doctor raj u should have told me about this before itself...

shaan controlled his tears and was sitting in the bed..madhavi was sitting with him...

(doctor has called anad said everything to sunil a day before only)

shaan : no dad..i only asked him not to say to u...

sunil : now wat to do..does she remeber him...

doctor : no...

madhavi : can we make her to try to understand...

doctor : no ...if she starts to think she is getting headache...it may leads to..

shaan : no...i want her to be happy...

sharma : doctor...

everyone looked at the entrance...

sharma : uhh..u r sunil...

sunil : ha...hey sharam..how r u man...

they both hugged each other...shaan and doctor and madhavi looked at them confused...

sunil : hey madhavi ..he is sharma he is my best friend..we both studied together

till ug..during pg he went to chennai...

sunil : sharam she is my wife and he is...

sharma : he is my son in law...

sunil looked surprised...sharma walked towards shaan..

sharma holded shaans hand ...

sharma : thanks beta...thank u so much for saving my daughter..

i am really very gratefull to u...tears rolled down from her eyes...

shaan : uncle no...dont cry...please...

sunil : sharma...

sharma controlled himself...meanwhile vidhya also came and madhavi and

she started to talk aboutr their families and so on...

sunil : doctor raj wat can we do now...

sharma : ha doctor wat can we do now...

doctor : i dont know wat to tell...

shaan : i know wat to do...(with a smile)

after a week...

in xxx college...

(khanak was studing in first year MBA)

neha : mam when will mam come...

lab assitant mam : she has gone to hod room she will come now...

(lecture has gone to hod room so lab assitant was in the class room as incharge)

neha : nisha did u finish...

nisha : near end...

neha : before mam comes we have to finish...

nisha : hey ...did u finish all the programs...

khanak : ha...i finished...rohit is coping...

nisha : thank god mam has gone to hod room...

neha : hey wat r u doing...

nisha : hey she is drawing something...(while writing in her note)

khanak was drawing in her note book...

neha : eat r u drawing man...

neha and nisha peeped inside...

neha : hey whose lips is this...

nisha : where is the eyes and all...

khanak : wait...

she continued drawing...

neha : hey its a boy...

nisha : his eyes r looking beautifull...

neha : who is he...

khanak : i dont know...it was in my heart...i thought of drawing so i drawed...

its just my imagination...its not real...

nisha : even it is iimagination he is looking really cute...

khanak : ha..he is reallly handsome...(smile)

excuse me mam...

every one looked at the entrance...they all were shocked...

they looked at the note...then they looked at the person at the entrance...

there eyes were wide opened...

lab assitant : who r u...

i am shantanu...

sudhareddy thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
Niki nice update
Loved when shanak went to temple and shaan asking khanak not to leave him even any one comes for her
Shanak met an accident and khanak gets her memory back and she forgets Shaan ( it reminds me kamal Hassan and sridevi movie). I feel sad for Shaan
Thank god doctor told everything to Sunil and Madhavi and Sunil and sharma are freinds. Khanak parents also accepts Shaan as their son-in-law.
Khanak unknowingly draws Shaan's eyes and lips and their friends saw the drawings and Shaan they are shocked.
Why shaan in college ? As a student or lecturer
Waiting for next update
poo_j thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it di..😊 Khanak removed her mangal sutra as its disturbing her while playing.. In our Tamil culture its a big no..

ShaNak went to temple and Shaan asked her not to leave him!!! 😃 Awww!!! Oh..No..Shaan got shocked hearing that Khanak's parents are found from doctor..Khanak again removed her mangal sutra.. And they met with an accident..

And Khanak's memory returned back but she forgot other things..Poor Shaan..😭 Good..His parents came to know about ShaNak marriage..Nice..Sunil and Sharma are friends..😊

Khanak doing MBA first year..Cool!!!😊 On lab assistance looking after class..It happens so often..😆 She drew his eyes and Shaan entered her class..👏

Is a Khanak's classmate or lecturer???

Looking forward and thank you for updating a fabulous update di..😊
jaisyjazz thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
OMG what a twist
shan taking promise from khanak is so sweet very touching
his nervousness when doc called and then accident first i thought this is bad but at the end kuch achha hua
first i was tensed khanak doesnt remember anything awww he was heart broken :( shan was crying so much :(
then as a surprise sunil and sharma r childhood friends yayyy tab hi pata chal gaya its going to be alright
thank god both the parents know the truth and bcoz of friends they agreed also they have no complaints :)
wowww shan what a plan
eekkkss khanak drawing shan's picture this is romantic lets c how what shan will do to make her remember everything love toh khanak pehle se hi karti hain dikha raha hain ;)
plzzz try to update daily niki :)

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".