YEH PYAR HAI(ss) pt 10 pg 24 jan 20 - Page 7

Originally posted by: kp_yasharan

WOW BEAUTIFLL UPDATE DI 😊

OMG THAT KEASAV MISBEHAVED WITH KHANAK THANK GOD SHAAN IS COME AND SAVE KHANAK AND SHAAN SLAPPED KHANAK IN ANGER .

THANKS FOR ASWOME UPDATE DI

WATING FOR NEXT PART

thanks a lot khusbhoo...

Originally posted by: poo_j

Loved it di.. 😊 Khanak not even leaving Shaan for a minute..😳 And he said everything to Kesav..

Khanak is scared to sleep alone and got promise from him not to leave..So he slept along with her!!!

They need Khanak photo to find about her and he smartly managed to take it.. 😊 Awww..She wants to take photo with him alone..❤️

OMG!!! Kesav tried to misbehave this Khanak!!! 😡 How dare!!! 😡 Thank God Shaan came at the right moment..He felt something in office too!!!

And he that Kesav so badly!!! Deserve it!!!

Oh..No..Shaan slapped Khanak!!! Poor Khanak!!!

Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update di.. 😊

thanks a lot poo...

Originally posted by: minnu345

Whats a B**s**d was that kesav...shaan should kill him ya...

but out of anger she slapped khank... So Saad dont know what he is gonna do to get rid of khanaks anger

thanks a lot minnu...

Originally posted by: Maneesha_Shanak

Awe lovely update niki...
Thankgod shaan came on time...otherwise that kesav would have harmed khanak...
Aww shaan slapped khanak...
Waiting for the next update

thanks a lot maneesha...

Originally posted by: logambika

nice update yaar...

thanks a lot loga...

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

New Story By you ...Awesomeness 👏👏👏

Sorry for Being MIA ...life is getting Busier with every passing day but Promise to Read and Comment soon

THnaks a ton for posting awesome FF's.

thanks a lot pranjal..no problem..whenever u r free read and tell ur views ...everyone r busy

Originally posted by: ktym

Lovely update niki:))

update the next part soon!!

thanks a lot mounika...

hi friends...


pt 5

khanak : shantanu chocolate...

khanak : ahhh...

shaan has slapped her...

savitha was looking at shaan in shock...

khanak looked at shaan in shock and then she started to cry...tears started to flow...

shaan looked at her...closed his eyes and he closed his hand in fist...

he opened his eyes and he moved near khanak...

but khanak moved back from him went and sat near a corner and started to cry...

shaan went out of the room...savitha tried to pacify khanak..but she was crying ...

shaan : savitha di...shaan called from outside...

savitha went outside to the hall...

shaan : di...is she okay now...

savitha : no bhaiya...she is crying a lot...

shaan : i am sorry di...i lost my control...

savitha : i know bhaiya...my mistake also..i should not have left them alone...

shaan : di..where is ansh...

savitha : he is in kitchen...

shaan : di u continue ur work...

shaan went to kitchen and called ansh and came to hall...

he did some phonecalls...after 15 minutes r so...

shaan and ansh went inside khanaks room...khanak was lying down in

that corner...she saw them enter the room but she did not get up...

shaan signaled ansh...ansh went near khanak and sat besides khanak...

ansh : aunty come...lets go and play...

khanak shook her head in no ...

shaan : ansh...

ansh : ha uncle...

shaan : u like chocolate icecream cake...

ansh : wow...that will be superb...

shaan : i have brought a very big one...

shaan saw khanak...khanak looked at him...then turned her head...

then again slowly looked at shaan...shaan smiled at her...

ansh : aunty ..come lets go and eat...

khanak : ummhmmm...i dont want...(while sitting in the floor)

shaan with a smile went and sat beside khanak...khanak was about to move...

shaan holded her hand...

shaan : i am sorry khanak...

khanak turned her head otherside...

shaan slowly touched her chin and turned her face...

khanak looked at shaan ...

shaan : i am really sorry...i wont slap u herafter please ...please..i will

do anything u ask please please...

khanak : uh...anything...

shaan : ha anything...(with a smile)

khanak : uh...(thought for sometime...)

shaan : wat..wat to do...

khanak : ha...like monkey u should do somersault...

shaan : wat...

khanak : do like monkey...

ansh : ha uncle u do...

shaan : umm...

shaan started to do somesault...khanak and ansh clapped there hands and laughed...

then they came out to hall and they saw the cake that shaan has ordered...

ansh : wow...its beautifull...aunty look its our pic in cake...

shaan saw khanaks face..it was in full happy...she was reallly happy...

shaan felt happy...they all started to eat the icecream cake...

while they r eating...

shaan : ansh...

ansh : s uncle...

shaan : will u follow watever u say...

ansh : ha..i will follow...

khanak : wat ..wat to follow...

shaan : no khanak..no..u cannot...(shook his shoulder)

khanak : no..i will shantanu...i will follow...tell me...

shaan : uh...umm okay...i will tell u both some instructions u should just listen

and then u should follow it okay...

ansh and khanak : ummm...okay...

shaan : first of all u both should not talk with strangers...

ansh and khanak : umm okay...

shaan : if strange peoples give anything u should not get from them...

khanak : chocolates ..icecreams...

shaan : ha..nothing should be got from strangers...

shaan : do u guys get from strangers..

khanak and ansh : no...(loud)

shaan : next one is important one...u should not allow anyone to touch u...

khanak : why...

shaan : if they touch u they r bad people...r u a good girl r bad girl...

khanak : i am a good girl...

shaan : then u should not allow anyone to touch u...do u allow anyone to touch u..

khanak : no...

shaan : if they tried..then u should shout for a loud and run from that place..

khanak and ansh : ummm...

shaan : wat do u guys do...

ansh and khanak : run ...they both started to run around the sofa...

shaan looked at them and smiled...

a week has passed ...shaan appointed new ladies that r known to savitha for work...

he made sure that savitha left home after shaan came home ...and asked security

not to allow any boys inside the house...

shaan : savitha di...takecare of her i am going to temple...

khanak : temple... i will also come take me...

shaan : no khanak...u stay ..i will be back...

khanak : i will also come...ansh also not here...

(ansh has gone to his relatives house with his granny there a small birthday function..)

shaan : ummm ...but u should listen wat i say okay...

khanak : umm okay...

while going in car...

khanak : why r we going to temple...

shaan : today natashas birthday...

khanak : oh...

they reached the temple...

pandit : come beta...

shaan : is everything ready...

pandit : ha beta..as last year foods for homeless r ready ...

shaan : u should not have waited for me...

pandit : u r one donated..u should start with ur hand...

shaan : its okay u ask them to start...

foods were distributed for the poor...

while shaan and khanak went around the temple...

suddenly two to four peoples came near them shouting khanak...khanak...

khanak and shaan was shocked...

khanak holded shaans hand tightly as she was afraid...

there was a old lady an oldy man and two boys ...

shaan : hey ..hey wait..who r u...

old man : i am rishi...khanaks dad...she is my daugter...

old lady : i am her brother...

two boys : we r her brothers...

old lady : khanak...khanak beta..how r u..how did u came here...

they all started to touch khanak...

khanak was really afraid and she holded shaans hand very tightly...

shaan : wait...wats the proof ...

one of the boys showed 5 to 6 pics ...

shaan looked at the pictures...it was khanak standing with them...

and some she was standing alone...

old lady : is the proof okay...beta come lets go home...

she started to pull khanak from shaan...

khanak : no...i wont come...

but the two boys removed her hands from shantanus arm...

while shaan was in real shock...he felt sad...

khanaks hand was in shaans hand...

they pulled her...shaan looked at her and her hand that was in his hand moving

away from his hand...he was in shock...

his eyes saw the pics that was on another hand...

his mind omg..all the pics photoshopped face of khanak was that one i send to

doctor by kesav...so kesav ...

he looked around..they were pulling khanak and going...

he ran and holded khanaks hand...

old man : look leave our daughter..

shaan : no...i wont...

two brothers tried to beat shaan...

shaan gave a punch on them meanwhile people gathered around...

old lady : see here ..she is our daughter showed pics to the gathered people...

a person in group : hey leave her..r we will put u jail...

shaan : shit...listen they r not real parents..

another in group : they r showing pics as proof...

shaan : damn...

old lady : come lets go..pulling khanak...

shaan : u dont have wrights one her...

shaan quickly pulled khanaks hand and then went to n ear the tree...

(in southern side temples in trees they tie the haldi coated thread with haldi in it

to the tree(unmarried girls tie it in trees in temple so that

they get married soonb)...that is mangal sutra in southern sides... )

he pulled a thread from it and tied it around khanaks neck...

and took the sindoor that was in the floor near the tree..and placed it on

khanaks partings...

shaan : now she is my wife...

Niki lovely update

Loved it di..:) Poor Khanak..She is crying as Shaan slapped her..Awww..He too is upset as he lost his control!!!

He bought chocolate cake for them..Nice!!! He asked sorry too.. 😃 Cool!!! She asked him to dance like that.. 😆

Good..He asked Khanak not to talk with strangers,etc..He is going to temple and she too wanted to come..Awww..Its Natasha's birthday!!!

OMG!!! All those people are acting as Khanak's relative..Good..Shaan found out from the photos..

But the other peoples believeing them and not Shaan..

Wow!!! Shaan married Khanak!!! ❤️ 🥳

Looking forward and thank you for writing an amazing update di.. 😃