MY THIRD OS PG 8 PT 1,2,3,4,5,6, PG 9 PT 7,8. (20/10) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
OMG the best confession ever and the last kiss haye ayeee main toh mar gayi
i loved it but it ended soon koi baat nahi will wait for ur next story u should continue writing like this u r very good 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: chandu8881

Hey khushbu😊
nice OS!!!
Loved all the parts...
They are married!!! you have described the scene very well, loved it!!
Continue soon!!!

THANAK YOU SO MUCH CHANDU FOR LIKE MY OS AND NEXT PART POST.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: snigdhanagar

awesome khusbooo...update soon plzzz😃

THANK U SO MUCH SNIGDHANAGAR FOR LIKE MY OS AND NEXT PART POST.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Lovely OS...

keep writing...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Loved the end, they confessed
Khanak confessed when shaan was abt to leave, she hugged him n told him how much she loved him, shoo sweet ending
keep writing more Khushboo
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
loved it babe, please writw ore ff's like thus or os, ss
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
lovely update...😊

nice confession...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

hi khushboo
sorry for the late replay...
i m so busy in my work now i m back...
and Read your First OS...
hey very well written khushboo...
now its a triangular love story...wow shanak and adi...superb...😊
all parts r the great
and the last part Loved the end, they confessed
Khanak finally confessed and the kiss
Love them Lot!!!!
plz come with other OS...waiting for u...
Love u Khushboo...

with Love janavi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: jaisyjazz

OMG the best confession ever and the last kiss haye ayeee main toh mar gayi

i loved it but it ended soon koi baat nahi will wait for ur next story u should continue writing like this u r very good😊

THANAK U SO MUCH . AND I WILL TRY FOR NEXT STORY.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: heer_85

Loved the end, they confessed

Khanak confessed when shaan was abt to leave, she hugged him n told him how much she loved him, shoo sweet ending
keep writing more Khushboo

THANK U SO MUCH HEER AND I WILL TRY FOR NEXT STORY.

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