MY THIRD OS PG 8 PT 1,2,3,4,5,6, PG 9 PT 7,8. (20/10) - Page 2

Originally posted by: heer_85

Loved all 4 part Khushboo
1st part : Shaan filled her maag n she was waiting for Adi. Adi loves her bt she didn loved shaan entry
2nd : Adi is shocked when Shaan said Khanak loves him n then khanak interrupt him lovely part
3rd : lovely again Khanak told him she is nt her wife even if fill her maang bt then wind blow n her maag show filled with sindoor, shaan hold her hand n complete all rasam kya baat hai shaan filmy entry bt it was too gud.
4th: Adi stand in shocked loved shaan dialogue Romeo lolzzz ab tumhare khanak ki zindagi main
koi jaga nahi hai..
Khanak was stil shocked hehehehehe
waiting for next part
update soon

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Originally posted by: maneesha28889

hey very well written khushboo...

now its a triangular lovestory...wow shanak and adi...superb...😊

plesae continue...

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Originally posted by: aasma1

wooow love it but obviously shanak all yhey way lool xxx

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Originally posted by: jaisyjazz

OMG very nice story shanak and adi

i loved it very much

so shan is in deep love with khanak but i m confused about khanak whether she loves shan aur adi bcoz reading shan's lines it shows that khanak loved him then why she is talking like that to him she should be happy na can u clear it to me ? :)

and adi loves khanak and he is totally shocked right now

aww loved each and every word of shan cant wait for the next

its very interesting and brilliant plz continue soon :)

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Originally posted by: niki_rbo

hi khusbhu...its really lovely...u written it nicely...i liked it man...

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Originally posted by: AwesomeYashAran

good onekp_yasharan all the parts were good liked it

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Hey khushbu😊
nice OS!!!
Loved all the parts...
They are married!!! you have described the scene very well, loved it!!
Continue soon!!!

awesome khusbooo...update soon plzzz😃

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LEST PART OF OS

Shantanu's mind is till to
grasp at the reality
around him & the
consequences of his
action. He look over to
his left side and sees
khanak was staring
outside the window,
silent tears flowing
down her cheeks seeing
her like this he hate
hinself and he knew
that his action that
take place in jelous
raging possessive fit
had led him to get
married to with him but
i can do when i seeing
adi pour out his feelings
to khanak that time
make me something he
could not bear. So he
gave in and did the firs
thing that come into his
mind. Shantanu see that
they were getting close
to his house, he turns
his car and heads to the
beach, the one place he
always found peace ,
and a place where he
hoped that he and
khanak could come up
with a solution to the
sticky sitution he had
placed them in. Sighing
he say khanak " "don't ..
She bites out. " dont you
dare mr shantanu
khandalwal... Tum kya
samajhte ho.. Haan kya
samajhte ho apne aap
ko.. You can do
whatever you want
and? Won't say a word?
"khanak.. Marri baat tho
suno... " sunne ke liya ab
bacha kya hai shantanu..
Jo kuch karna tha tum
ne kar dikhaya.. Bina yeh
soche ke tumhari in
harkaton se doosron par
kya guzaregi... Tum ne
kya socha tha
shantanu , saath phere
lekar, mangaltsutra
daalkar, tumne mujhe
apna banaliya.. Main koi
cheez nahin hoon... Jise
jab chaha apna liya aur
jab chaha chod diya...
Aakhir yah sab tum
mere saath kyun kar
rahe ho... Kyun
shantanu.. Mujhe takleef
ma dakar kya tumhe
khushi aati hai? "
shantanu is deeply hurt
by these harsh words
of khanak.. He softly
says, " tumhe takleef
dene ki mere koi eraada
nahi hai khanak.. Main
nahi jaanta ki main yah
sab kyun kar rahahu..
Bas itna jaanta hu ki
tumhe kissi aur ke
saath nahi dekh sakta..
Mein tumhe apne pass
rakhna chahtha hu is
tarah se tumhara
mujhse door chale jaane
mujhe manzoor nahi hai
khanak.. Main yeh nahi
jaanta ki man jo
tumhare liya mehsoos
kar raha hu kya wo tum
bhe mera liya mehsoos
karti ho ya nahi muja
nahi pata khanak par
main tum sa bohut
pyaar karta hu main
tum phaleya bar tuja
daka tabi sa main tum
sa bohoat paayer karta
hu aur hamesa tumsa
hea paayer karta rahuga
khanak you are my first
and last love in my life. i
love you forver jab main
tum kal adi ka shaat
daka da itni kush hota
hu aur muja ignor rahi de
tab muja bhot gussa iya
aur guss main a kar
main na tum a sindoor
sa maage bhardiya aur
jab tum na kha ki tuma
sindoor maang parna sa
koi tumra nahi hota hai
to main soch ki main
tumra shaat rasmosa
shaadi karlu.. Koi baat
nahi khanak agar tum
mujasa payar nahi karti
to koi baat nahi main
tumra liya shari zindagi
main tumara intazar
karuga khanak aur ya
fasla shif tumhar hi
hoga ki tum mara shaat
puri zindagi rahna chati
ho ya nahi par meri
zaindagi main shif tum
ho aur koi nahi hoga.
Khanak was stunned by
this sudden outburst of
shantanu.. She doesn't
know what to do but i
love him so much and i
cannot live without him
and he also love me and
she could see in his eyes
were h love him so
much. And shantanu
wait foq 10 min but she
did not riple him then he
disite to go from there
when shantanu about
go khanak ran to hin and
she hug shantanu and
tell him.. i love you
shantanu i love you so
much and shantanu turn
to him and hug him
more tiet both hug each
other where huging
shantanu khanak tell
him main bea aap sa
bhote paayer karti hu
main apko apna zandagi
sa bea jada pyar karti
hu par jab main apko kisi
aur ka shaat daka tab
muja laga ki ape us
payaar karta aur mara
shaat shif natak ka liya
meri maag bhari hai.
they both hug broke and
shantanu take her face
in both hand and tell
khanak main shif tum
sa pyar karta hu and
tread come form
shantanu eye and from
khanak eyes 2. they
both hug again
eachother both tell
them we both not leve
eachother and now
shantanu broke the hug
and take khanak face in
her hand khanak can i
kiss you khanak with
out telling close her
eyes shanatanu smile
and he kiss him khanak
also kiss him back . End

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