MY THIRD OS PG 8 PT 1,2,3,4,5,6, PG 9 PT 7,8. (20/10)

CHARCHTAR NAME : SHANTANU KHANAK AND ADI

Part 1
khanak is wating at
laksmi devi maki temple
for adi to come. She is
still thinking about
shantanu felling maang
with sindoor. She is so
engrossed in her
thoughts that she
doesn't notice that adi is
standing
right behind her. Adi bout
to hug her from the
back when she turns
aroud. She realizes what
he was about to do and
is annoyed. She ask
him adi yeh tum kya kar
rahe ho? Adi is
embarrassed and he
stutters "
wo khanak main..." wo
main kya adi ?" adi is
suprised with the
reaction of khanak's
and say " itne gussa
kyun ho rahi ho kanak
main
tumesa pyar karta hu
aur tum bhi mujhsa
pyar... Mujhse ? ... Adi
maim tumse pyar nahi
karti... Aur tum tho
simran se pyar karte
ho..."
" simran aur main... Tum
pagal tho nahi ho gayi ho
khanak, main tumse
payar karta hu... Aur
maine apne pyare ka
izhaar us letter main lika
tha.. Jiska jawab tumne
mujhe diya tha.. Aur use
tumne apne pyar ka
izhaar kya tha ...''
khanak's confused and
says "letter, wo letter
tho
tumne simran ko diya
tha, muje nahi... Aur who
jawab bhi simran ka
taraf se tumhare liya
tha.. " ya baar baar tum
simran ko hamara beech
main kyun laa rahi ho..
"he hold her tightly by
the elbows and tell "
main sirf tumse pyar
karta hu.. Aur tumse
shadi karna chahtha hu..
Simran se nahin. Adi,
mujhe chod do, tum
mereliya sirf ek dose ho,
us
se badkar kuch bhi nahi..
"nahin khanak, tum
jhoot bol rahe ho. Adi,
leve me... You are hurting
me" the elbows and
shaking her, while
khanak is begging him to
leve her. Just then,
shantanu voice booms
out, adi khanak ko chod
do.. Adi turn and see
shantanu standing on
the first step with fire
in his eyes. Adi shouts
at shantanu, "
shantanu ya mere aur
khanak ka mamala hai..
Tum isse door raho" adi
tumne suna nahi ke
maine kya kaha, khanak
ko chod do.. " stut up
shantanu and stay out
of this .. " adi tumse
akhri baar keh raha hu,
khanak ko chodo varna
kya. Kya karage tum
shantanu arre tum kya
karoge. Main hi kuch
karta hu he pushe
khanak out of the way
and goes
to shantanu and hold
him by the coller. Yeh
aakhri baar hoga
shantanu,


MY FRIST OS
PART 1,2,3,4 PG 1
LAST PART PG 3

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PG 5

MY THIRD OS PART 1,2,3,4,5,6. PG 8
PART 7,8 PG 9

NEXT PART 2 CONTINUE

ab tum khanak aur mera
beeh interfere nahin
karoge he is about to hit hin when khanak tell
stop it adi, shantanu ko
chod do. Shantanu
smirks while adi say nahin khanak this will be the last time, shantanu
comE between you and me for
which shantanu say,
"first of all, there
should be a you and
khanak, for me to come
between both of you.."
what
the hell are you going on
about shantanu. khanak
love me shantanu
sarcastically tell him love
my foat khanak doesn't
love you adi and
you batter accept that
morever, how can she
love you when she is
mine.. Adi was suprised,
what.. What the hell are
you talking about..
" as shantanu is about
to reply khanak says
shnatanu what are you
talking about ?

NEXT PART 3

what are you taking
shantanu about? Kissi ki
maag ko sindoor se
bharne
sa who tumhari nahi ho
jayegi shantanu arre
tum kya jane pyar kya
hota
hai shantanu, shaadi kya
hoti hai.. Meri maange ko
sindoor se bharne
sa tumne socha ki main
tumharh property nahi
ban jaungi shantanu
shaadi koi gudd guddi ka
khel nahin hai shantanu
jo gusse main aaker,
possessive ho jaakr kiya
jaye . Shaadi tho do
dilon ka milan hai wo
shaath pheree jo shaadi
ka waqt liya jaate hai..
Wo un saath vachano
ki nishani hai jo pati
patni, ek dusre ko agni
ko saakshi maankar
karte hain.. Who sindoor
jo pati apna patni ki
mange main bharta hai,
wo patni ke liya pati ka
pyar aur commitnent ki
nishani hai.. Arre tum
kya jaano, commitment
kya hota hai, tumhare
liya kissi ladki ki
sharerpar sindoor se
apna naam likha
commitnent hai hai na..
Par mere
liya nahin shantanu...
Mere maang main
sindoor bharke , nahi
main
tumhari patni hu aur nahi
tum mere pati... Just
then, wind blows and
her which had parted
sideway, settles along
her middle partition and
the line of sindoor which
she has applied is clearly
visible. Shantanu
see this and smile
sarcastically khanak
now knows that there
is no use
pretending so she just
turn around, her back to
shantanu... Shantanu
" wah khanak wah really
amaze me you know
that.. Kitni achchi tarah
se
tum apne feeling ko
apne ape se hi chupa rahi
ho.. Tum apne aap se
jhoot bol sakte ho, lekin
mujhse nahin tumhari
maang mein wo sindoor
hi is baat ki gawah hai ki
tum dil se mujhe apna
pati maanti ho aur
apne aap ko meri patni..
Main jaanta hu ki tum
sirf mere ho khanak,
sirf mere .. Maim tumse
use din kaho tha ki adi
tumhare liya kuch bhi
nahi lagta, aur main
theek tha.. Sirf mujhsa..
Aur agar baat rasmon ki
hai tho main wo saari
rasmin abhi pura karth
hu.. He takes khanak by
hand to the agin kund of
the temple and take
saath phere with her..
He
then takes a magalsutra
from devi ma ki murti
and puts it around her
neck.. He fills her maang
with sindoor and look
her in eyes and tell
her, khanak ab maine
tumhe us saari

PART 4

rasmon se apna bana
liya ... Tum
abse sirf meri ho khanak
sirf meri he look at adi
who was standing
there silently and tell
him " romeo, ab tumhare
khanak ki zindagi main
koi jaga nahi hai.. Tum
khanak se door rehna
samjhe he takes a still
shocked khanak by her
and then they both go
from temple.

THIS MY FIRST OS I HOPE YOU ALL LIKI IT FRIEENDS AND NEXT PART CONTINEU SOON

Loved all 4 part Khushboo
1st part : Shaan filled her maag n she was waiting for Adi. Adi loves her bt she didn loved shaan entry
2nd : Adi is shocked when Shaan said Khanak loves him n then khanak interrupt him lovely part
3rd : lovely again Khanak told him she is nt her wife even if fill her maang bt then wind blow n her maag show filled with sindoor, shaan hold her hand n complete all rasam kya baat hai shaan filmy entry bt it was too gud.
4th: Adi stand in shocked loved shaan dialogue Romeo lolzzz ab tumhare khanak ki zindagi main
koi jaga nahi hai..
Khanak was stil shocked hehehehehe
waiting for next part
update soon

hey very well written khushboo...

wooow love it but obviously shanak all yhey way lool xxx

OMG very nice story shanak and adi

hi khusbhu...its really lovely...u written it nicely...i liked it man...

good one kp_yasharan all the parts were good liked it