MY THIRD OS PG 8 PT 1,2,3,4,5,6, PG 9 PT 7,8. (20/10) - Page 4

Originally posted by: aasma1

loved it babe, please writw ore ff's like thus or os, ss

THANAK U SO MUCH AND I WILL TRY FOR NEXT STORY.

Originally posted by: snigdhanagar

awesome...write more soon...

THANK U SO MUCH AND I WILL TRY FOR NEXT STORY.

Originally posted by: maneesha28889

lovely update...😊

nice confession...

THANK U SO MUCH.

Originally posted by: janavi07

hi khushboo

sorry for the late replay...

i m so busy in my work now i m back...

and Read your First OS...

hey very well written khushboo...

<font size="2">now its a triangularlove story...wow shanak and adi...superb...😊</font>

<font size="2">all parts r the great</font>

<font size="2">and the last part</font>Loved the end, they confessed

Khanak finally confessedand the kiss

Love them Lot!!!!

plz come with other OS...waiting for u...

Love u Khushboo...

with Love janavi

THANK U SO MUCH JANAVI LIKE MY STORY AND I WILL TRY FOR NEXT STORY .

MY SECOND OS
AND THIS OS WRITEN BY HEER AND ME


OS SHANAK CONFESSION


Shanak marriage took
place 6 month ago but
for khanak this
marriage was only for
her family sake, she
was attracted to
Sujoy , she thought she
loves him and suroj love
him too
Shaan knew after
marriage that khanak
doesn't love her and he
tried his best to make
her fall in love with him.
He became his friend
first and Khanak
started to like him but
was confused, was it
love no she like suraj
Suraj doesn't love
khanak and he knew
may be khanak does
the way she looked him,
so he played with her
and act like he loves
Khanak because he
wanted to take revenge
to shaan
Suraj and shaan studies
together but suraj was
rich arrogant guy , he
used to behave badly
with girl, one day shaan
stop him when his gang
started to behave badly
with girls and had a
fight with him
So from that day suraj
thought he wil make
shaan pay for it so
when he married
Khanak ,this was a good
opportunity to make
him suffer by using
Khanak
Shaan came to know
that Khanak doesn't
feel for her, he got to
know Khanak had
attraction toward suraj
from the day he met
him accidentally in
suraj's office and
khanak was forced to
marry him by her
parents
Shaan and Khanak
became a very good
friends, shaan loves
Khanak so much, he
tried many times to
make her aware of
suraj but they end with
fight and khanak left
talking to shaan for
many days
One day Natasha Invite
shanak to her b'day
party
Sam came to
Khandelwal house few
days back to meet his
friend shaan
Sam: Khanak are u
ready , aur shaan kaha
hai we r getting late
Khanak: yeah sam I m
ready, lets go
Sam: Khanak !!! Shaan
kaha hai , who nahi
arahahe kya
Khanak: ha woh…..
And the same time
Shaan came there, he
was ready looking very
handsome and dashing ,
for a moment khanak
heart started beating
fast and just looked at
him, he wore a suit, red
shirt, white paint and a
coat on it
Khanak thought is he
my prince charming then
she came back to
reality , she saw shaan
was staring at her
Sam: aabh chale tum
dono, baad mein ekk
dusre koh jeebarke
dekhena
Khanak lower her gaze
both Khanak and shaan
got embarrassed
Khanak blushed little
and had a good feeling
for shaan, she wanted
to hold his hand and go
with him
Shaan: yeah chalo
At the party
Natasha welcome them
and they hug each other
Khanak gave her a
bouquet and wish her
Happy b'day followed by
shaan and sam
They chat for
sometime, music played
and invited were
dancing
Suraj was too invited as
Natasha's dad and suraj
dad were friends in
business
Natasha didn't knw
about suroj behavior
and she thought he's a
nice person and started
to love him, their parent
were planning their
union ( engagement )
Suraj saw shaan in the
party and then looked
for Khanak, he saw her
and move toward her
Suraj: Hiii Khanak!!! Kesi
ho
Khanak usually felt
happy when she sees
Suraj but today it
wasn't like dat
Before suraj met
khanak in the party, she
saw shaan surrounded
by girls who wanted to
dance with him
Khanak left very bad as
Shaan was not with her
and he was talking with
other girls, she left like
someone is taking one
part of her life, his
shaan is going far from
her
Khanak: hii ( with out
any interest and looking
at shaan)
Suraj: khanak kya huwa,
wil u dance with me
Shaan excused from the
girls and saw Suraj with
Khanak, he left very bad
and wanted to go to
khanak and pulled by his
side and said to Suraj "
Khanak sirf meri hai ,"
but he couldn't
Khanak left from there
suraj was shocked first
Shaan followed Khanak,
Shaan: Khanak muhje
tumse kuch baat karnu
hai
Khanak: kya baat karni
hai
Shaan took a deep
breathe and said "
Khanak, suraj acha ladka
nahi hai, tum kyu nahi
samaj rahiho woh sirf
tumare saath khel
khelrahahe."
Khanak: shaantanu
muhje kuch nahi sunna,
aur aapki problem kya
hai , kyu baar baar wohi
baat kartehe. Mein janti
hu woh acha ladka hai
Shaan: Khanak try to
understand ( hold her
upper arm and said little
angrily)
Khanak: shaantanu
choriye muje
At the same time
Natasha came to them
Natasha: areh tum dono
yaha kya karraheho,
come on dance floor par
jao
Shaan: yeah hum
jahirahethe
Natasha left from there
and Khanak excused her
self and went to
washroom
Sam came to shaan
after shaking on a
dance floor
sam: shaan !! Khanak
karahe
Shaan: woh abhi ajaegi
Sam : ok its so fun yaar
Shaan : yeah ( n looked
for khanak)
Shaan excused from
there and tried to locate
khanak
Khanak came back from
a wash room and spot
some one shouting to a
girl she move in the
direction of that sound
and found suraj
Khanak thought suraj is
tara , ese kese baat kar
rahahe
Suraj cheated that girl,
he was telling her how
he just used her, he hold
that girl very firmly and
tried to slapped her but
at the same time
Khanak hold his hand
Suraj tum and saw
Khanak in shocked she
looking at him with full
anger in her eyes
She left his hand and
slapped him very hard ,
that girl went away
from there
Khanak: tumne muje bhi
cheat kiya , how dare u
She wanted to slap him
again but suraj hold her
hand and push her
toward a nearer wall
Khanak: leave me ( she
shouted )
Suraj: how can I leave u
after waiting for u for
so many days, aabh
shaan koh pata chalega
suraj kya hai, jab mein
uski khanak keh saath
…..
Khanak eyes filled with
tears which where now
sliding on her checks
Khanak: choro muhje
( she slowly called
shantanu)
Suraj move closer to her
hold her upper arms
Khanak: dur raho mujse
Suraj tried to move her
dupata
But a voice stopped him
and he looked back,
shaan was standing
there with full of anger
in his eyes
Suraj loose hold on
Khanak's arm, she ran
to shaan and hugged
him very tight, she
sobbed in his chest
Khanak: shantanu ………..
Shaan hold her tight and
looked at suraj, he
adjust khanak dupata
and cupped her face to
look into her eyes, he
moved her a little side
Shaan walked toward
Suraj
Shaan: how dare u touch
my wife ( angrily )
Suraj: wife!!!!! kaab se
yeah tumari wife hai,
btw ur wife loves me
Shaan hold him from
collar and then give him
a hard punch on his face
Suraj too tried to punch
shaan, they both had a
little fight and them
people gather from the
party
Shaan was holding suraj
again and people were
trying to separate him
Natasha came to know
about suraj and she too
slapped him
Shaan looked for Khanak
but she wasn't there,
he got worried and
move from the party
He searched her every
where and later find her
near by the park where
party was held
Shaan: Khanak !!!!!!!!!!
Shaan find her sobbing
and gather her in his
arm to give her a warm
hug
Khanak while sobbing "
shantanu I m very sorry
mein neh ………."
Shaan: shsss!!!!!!!!!!!
Baas abh rona band
karo , mein hu nah
Khanak: mene kyu pehle
aapki baat nahi mani …….
Shaan : khanak meri
taraf dekho aur batao
……….. , kya tumeh meri
aankhone tumare liye
pyaar nahi dekhta
Khanak looked at him
tears roll down her
cheeks
Shaan: kyu muhje
tumari aankhone meri
liye pyaar dikhta, lekin
tum bohut ziddi ho
Shaan: bolo Khanak u
love me nah …..
mmm!!!!!!!! N I know
u do . suraj sirf ekk
attraction tha …………. M I
right ?
Khanak looked at him
stunned, some how
shaan is right she loves
him n not suraj.
Shaan: aapne dil se
pucho Khanak , tum
kihse pyaar kartiho ,
apni ankheh baad karo
aur dekho mein hi nazar
aunga
Khanak closed her eyes
and saw only shaan,
she got all those
flashes which she spent
with him as a friend,
the way he touched her,
she was feeling electric
current run down her
spine, but at that time
she pushed the though
back and said he is just
a friend but no he
wasn't just a friend , he
was her life , her true
love Shaantanu
She opened her eyes ,
shaan cupped her face
and wipe her tears, he
kissed her teary
cheeks , Khanak felt
shiver at his kisses
She hugged him tight
and said I LOVE
SHANATANU , I love u
so much I m very sorry
Shaan grined and said I
love u to meri jahsi ki
rani
Khanak move a part and
slowly slap him arm and
said I hate u
Shaan: o really
now!!!!!!!!!!
Khanak smiled and said I
love u my burthal
They sat there and
talked for a long time
Shaan: khanak u are
very very beautiful, uss
dress mein u were
looking like an angle
Khanak looked at him
and question " kaab
apne muhje dekha "
Shaan: first time in
rahul's wedding
Khanak: koun Rahul
Shaan looked at her and
khanak remember rahul
Khanak: ha who Rahul
mere adda ke dost ka
beta, aap theh shadi
mein
Shaan: yeah he is my
collage buddy, aur jab
mene tume pehli bar
dekha I fall in love with
u , tumare eyes, hairs u
were just perfect in
that dress
Khanak: toh aap logo ne
isiliye mere adda se
rishte ki baat kih thi
Shaan : yeah coz I love u
khanak
Khanak looked at him
with teary eyes
Shaan wiped her tears
and said " I hate these
tears and from now I
don't want u to shade
tears
Khanak mein tumse
bohut pyar karta hu aur
meh tume hamesha
kush rakhunga
Khanak: I m sorry
shaantanu mene aapko
Shaan: wese Khanak
aab tumbhi mujse pyaar
kartiho toh phir …………….
( naughtly )
Khanak lower her gaze
and blushed

Last part
Shaan: wese Khanak
aab tumbhi mujse pyaar
kartiho toh phir …………….
( naughtly )
Khanak lower her gaze
and blushed and said "
dhaat"
Shaan : kya dhaat
khanak ( teased her )
Shaan take her face on
his palm and make her
look into her eyes , she
looked at him, and saw
his eyes land on her lips.
He touch his forehead
with hers , khanak
move little and cupped
his face to give a peak
on his forehead, shaan
smiled and hugged each
other tightly, they stay
in hug for few minutes
and broke apart. Shaan
traced her cheeks and
near her lips khanak felt
shiver when shaan
touch her lips, he move
his lips to her and seal
the gap between their
lips, shaan kissed her
passionately , khanak
respond to his kiss in
the same way, after 2
or so minutes they
move apart to catch
their breath.
After sometime they
came back home holding
each other hand. Shanak
moved to their room.
They enter the room
and Khanak left
nervous. Shaan moved
to the washroom and
khanak nervously stand
at the window, after
few minutes shaan
came back and saw
khanak standing at the
window in deep
thought, she thought
what will be shaan's
next step as they both
confess their love each
other, she blushed
when SR thought raise
within her but at same
time she got scared and
became nervous again.
shantanu came near
her, Khanak felt his
presence around her and
became nervous again,
she intertwined her
fingers tightly, shaan
more toward her, he
circle his arm around her
tiny waist from back
and hugged her tight
and said " Khanak kya
huwa , why are u
nervous mmh!!!!!!!!
Touched his cheek with
her n caresses slowly ."
Khanak: kuch nahi
shantanu
Shaan turn her to face
him and cupped her face
and said "don't be
nervous sweet heart, i
will wait until u become
ready
ok .." he gave her peak
on her temple, khanak
closed her eyes, when
she open her eyes she
saw shaan moved apart
facing his back to her,
khanak rush to him and
hug him from back.
Shaan felt her hands on
his chest clutching his
shirt. He felt different
sensation when she
touched his bare chest
from where his three
button of shirt were
open
khanak: shantanu aap
to meri zindagi ho, I love
u … aur muhje koi………..
shantanu then turn to
her and hold her face
and they both hug
each other. They broke
the hug and he take
khanak's face again in
his
hand , he kiss her in
forehead, her eyes and
move slowly to her lips,
her lips trembled when
he touch with his, she
felt current run down
her spine, she detached
herself and move near
the dressing table.. He
walked behind her..
smiling naughtily and
hugged her from back
his hand caressed her
stomach slowly, khanak
closed her eyes and felt
shiver by his touch,
shaan tucked out her
saree pleats from her in
skirt and let it spread on
a floor, he careses his
hand on her upper arm
to her hand
and intertwined his
fingers with hers ,he
kissed her on her neck.. ,
She leaned back on his
chest to give him more
accesses to her neck..
His lips moved to her
neck.. Hands moving up
on her stomach, toward
her chest .. She shivered
at his touch on her
stomach.. His hand
slowly moved towards
her shoulder.. He slowly
moved her blouse from
both her shoulder.. She
turned towards him and
hugged him.. She was
feeling weak at her
knees.. She held onto
him .. He moved her
away from him to take
off the blouse.. But she
crossed her arms. On
her chest .. He lifted her
chin upward and looked
into her deep eyes.. Full
of passion and love..
Then her one hand
moved up to his face..
She caressed his face
and moved her hand
down on his hard
muscles.. She removed
his shirt from his
shoulder he gasped at
her touch.. He pulled her
hand away from him his
lip were sealed on her
skin biting.. Kissing and
licking.. She moan in pain
and pleasure.. He picked
her up in his arms and
gently placed her
one bed and removed
her blouse.. He saw her..
Her creamy assets
exposed to his eyes she
turned her face to the
other side to hide her
shyness she was
beautiful.. He explored
her body with his
hands.. She stiffed at
his touch but then
relaxed he moved on
top of her he kissed on
her neck.. Moving from
one side to the other
side her hand bare back..
Her nails digging in his
hard muscles to control
her feeling. He turned
and now she was top
him . She looked into his
eyes. And kissed him on
face moved down to his
neck.. She licked his skin
at his throat.. Then on
chest.. He gasped
heavily at her touch.. He
pulled her face away
from his chest and
captured her mouth his
tongue travel into her
mouth.. Then he turned
with force, again she
was under him..his hand
and
mouth touched every
part of her body.. She
arched with pleasure
and clutched bed sheet
in her hands.. Breathing
heavily.. His hand landed
on top of her hands..
Hands intertwined.. Her
nails pierced through his
skin she whispered his
name and moaned
loudly, and a lone tear
escaped her eye .. He
entered in her.. She
moaned and cried out in
pain . They become one
completely as husband
and wife, In every single
spore they both
whisper in I love ………..
and both surrender in
each other arms and
sleep peacefully

Wow its awesome...so refreshing!!!!!!!!!

Who j loved it cant,wait for a new os

WOW !!! the first part was so emotional