MY THIRD OS PG 8 PT 1,2,3,4,5,6, PG 9 PT 7,8. (20/10)

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Heer

@heer_85

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

thanx khushboo🤗

The concept was urs, i just helped u in writing

ok coming to the update what shall i say, Its was lovely 😊

yeah the first part was touchy. Khanak felt for him but push her thought a side and thought about suraj, she felt something when shaan is away or talking with other girls. their confession was vry nice

and the last part was omgeee!!!!!!!!!! sizzling hawt!!!!!!! ☺️☺️ it burn my lappy screen 🤣

two love birds meet n became completely one

love the concept of this os khushboo 🤗

I m waiting for next 😊

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ktymfan

@ktymfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

both OSs r great khushbu...and dis one was sizzling hawttt...waiting for more...-saroj

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janavi07

@janavi07

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Hi Kushbou😊

Second Os that one very Nice...

about the update i Love it!

khanak merraige...shaan and suraj collage fight,suraj revenge...

all great...at the party scnene... jealous khanak...and same jealous shaan so nice...shanak hug after the fight with suraj so beautiful...she confess her Love and the First kiss that one hottt!!!!!!!!!!!

after the teasing part so cool...the Room scene so romantic and hot!!!☺️

great update...

Love it all update...

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niki_rbo

@niki_rbo

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

hey khusbhoo..wat a lovely update yaar..it was very nice...second part was very hot man...

u r writting nicely..u can try an ff.. we will love to read it...try it yaar...

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kp_yasharan

@kp_yasharan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: ktym
Wow its awesome...so refreshing!!!!!!!!!

continue soon...😊

THANK U SO MUCH MONIKA 😃 U LIKE MY OS. BUT NEXT OS I DONE NO WHEN BUT I TRY MY BEST FOR GIVE U SOON.

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kp_yasharan

@kp_yasharan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: snigdhanagar

superlike...:)
OMG last part was...☺️☺️

THANKS U SHOW MUCH. 😊

Edited by kp_yasharan - 13 years ago

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kp_yasharan

@kp_yasharan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: aasma1
Who j loved it cant,wait for a new os

THANKS U SO MUCH AASMA 😊 AND NEXT OS I DONE NO WHEN BUT I TRY TO GIVE SOON.

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kp_yasharan

@kp_yasharan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: jaisyjazz
WOW !!! the first part was so emotional
shan loves khanak and khanak only attracted to suraj shan knows this and he tries to clear her thoughts about suraj at the same time making her fall in love with him and feel his love for her
then the confession it was quite a bit filmy but i loved it their hug peak everything
SIZZLING HOT !!! the second part was damn hot very very sensual i just loved this small os
ur both os were fantastic do come up with next one soon😊

THANK U SO MUCH 😊 AND I DONE NO WHEN NEXT OS BUT I TRY GIVE U SOON

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kp_yasharan

@kp_yasharan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: heer_85
thanx khushboo🤗
The concept was urs, i just helped u in writing
ok coming to the update what shall i say, Its was lovely😊
yeah the first part was touchy. Khanak felt for him but push her thought a side and thought about suraj, she felt something when shaan is away or talking with other girls. their confession was vry nice
and the last part was omgeee!!!!!!!!!! sizzling hawt!!!!!!! ☺️☺️it burn my lappy screen🤣
two love birds meet n became completely one
love the concept of this os khushboo🤗
I m waiting for next😊

THANKS U SO MUCH HEER AND ALSO HLPE ME 😊 AND YOUR LAPPY SCREAN BRAN 🤣 AND NEXT OS I DONE WHEN BUT I TELL U SOON.