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SJ6...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#611

loved it

p.s. only have time to write this at work.. x

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Heer

@heer_85

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Posted: 13 years ago

#612

lovely update chandu and the pictures are wow!!!!!!!!!!! 😊

loved it thanx for posting yaar

khanak wanted to go for artificial beach and shaan did't want

both had the little game on beach that was awesome yaar

khanak is very smart what a reward 😆

if he catches her, he wil take her to artificial beach 😆 and if not she wil take him

whats the difference 😆 lovely reward khanak keep it up

the last part was hottt!!!!!!!!!!! shaan is never tired to love his wife loved that dialogue

uske baad toh cough cough 😉 shaan took the charge ☺️

😭 Hm khatam now back to reality but wil get to see Aayush i love him 😊

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

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Posted: 13 years ago

#613

it was fab
the picz were lovely
i actually found it cute that he didn't make a wish
true they are together and thats perfect
hmm she is complete mystery at times
the artificial beach part was cute
and the end was superb... the actual shanak
update soon

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niki_rbo

@niki_rbo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#614

hey doc lovely man..all places u said r beautifull...they r returning back...HM overed...

its really nice..they had a superb HM...

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snigdhanagar

@snigdhanagar

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#615

wow nice!!!!! loved each n every place description...

soo deir last day is over...loved deir honeymoon...baq to mumbai!!!!!!!

waiting fr nxt...,

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virika01

@virika01

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: chandu8881

Thanks😊
may i know your name?

hi m gia...m silent reader of ur ff...😛

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Chandana. H

@chandu8881

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Posted: 13 years ago

#617

Hello:D
thanks gia, and everone:)
sorry i won't be able to update, i've got a test tmrw, will surely update tmrw:)
please oblige:)

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: chandu8881
Hello:D
thanks gia, and everone:)
sorry i won't be able to update, i've got a test tmrw, will surely update tmrw:)
please oblige:)

Best of Luck Dear for your Test ,,,,,,,,Just Rock it 😃

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#619

Wonderful Update Dear 😊

The Pics were really awesome ...i was mesmarised by its beauty 😃
Loved the way Shanak speand their day ...it was lovely 😊 theie bet regarding Artificial beach & khanaks cleverness was superb ...enjoyed reading it 👏 khanak teased shaan instaed of running she left from there 😕 & poor shaan was depressed by it ...I loved the way you discribed his expressions ...awesomeee !!!! 👏

I loved the Possessive wifey Khanak ...she left the place as she saw yong girls looking at hubby 😃 & than they come back ...LOved it ...So ow BTP ...I am gonna miss such fundoo updates 👏 but now Mumbai ,,,,wanted to see aayush reaction on meetng his Mom dad 😃

waiting for next part ...Continue soon 😃

Love
Pranjal.

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Priyasree

@shonai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#620

Hey Chandu

loved all the chapters... awesome!!!!!👏

loved Khanak's 1st day in K house, the reception & lovely dress, u added the song Raabta...it's 1 of my favorite songs❤️. shaan showed her his apartment where he used to live for study, he talked about Kiya with her...that's very well written...& they spent the night there☺️...the morning scene was also good. shaan decorated a room for Aayush...that's so sweet.😊 He is growing up & u've showed it brilliantly👏. loved the bond between K family & with his father.😃

Dhruv's mom entry...hmmm I didn't like her.😡

Shanak in HM in Maldives ...yeeyyy...& HM finish bhi ho gayi😒. lolz

but loved & enjoyed their HM...lovely pics , each & everything was beautifully described, with the tarka of their HOT romance😉☺️. one more thing... Khanak talked to Shaan about Dhruv & his mom...& I loved the way he responded.

love this possessive Shanak.

Hey do you Know I also love Enrique???😛 Shaan, jealous of Enrique & sang 'on top of u' for her, they danced together& I love her saying that she has found her Enrique...

i loved Khanak's surprise for him...showing pics. & hayee hayee...kaise baataye how much I love their romance😉☺️. he toh doesn't even leave a chance to show his besharmi...😉

and truly saying, you have improved a lot in your writing... I've noticed it. right from the 1st chap till now u can clearly see the improvements ... so keep it up👍🏼 & loads of love.❤️❤️

Chandu, this is for u muuuaaahhh...🤗

PS; can u plz pm me whenever u update???😳

Edited by shonai - 13 years ago