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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Brishti!!

It was damn cute..LOL loved the contrasts between Shan and Khanak's feelings. Keep 'em coming.

Love,

Simi
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sangita😃
I love you🤗
I am happy that they got married but sad cause it holds no meaning for Khanak😕 Ummm i wonder how she actually bore all the hatred and got married to him,she is really great...
Ummm Gunjan is pretty disappointing to me I really hope she proves herself with watever is remaining of her life cause otherwise it just seems like she lived to die so plain...
Im pretty excited to see how love blooms between the two cause Khanak is not someone who will fall for sum guys charm so easily after all she is one cool tomboy😃This I feel makes the story really exciting😊
Loved the update Sangita...Waiting for ur next🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
simiv

Hi Brishti!!

It was damn cute..LOL loved the contrasts between Shan and Khanak's feelings. Keep 'em coming.

Love,

Simi




Thanks Pundu :). glad you liked it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
sharon18

Sangita😃
I love you🤗
I am happy that they got married but sad cause it holds no meaning for Khanak😕 Ummm i wonder how she actually bore all the hatred and got married to him,she is really great...
Ummm Gunjan is pretty disappointing to me I really hope she proves herself with watever is remaining of her life cause otherwise it just seems like she lived to die so plain...
Im pretty excited to see how love blooms between the two cause Khanak is not someone who will fall for sum guys charm so easily after all she is one cool tomboy😃This I feel makes the story really exciting😊
Loved the update Sangita...Waiting for ur next🤗


I love you too Sharon🤗

As of now the marriage holds no meaning for Khanak. Let Gunjan not disappoint you.she'll carve her own path and traverse on her own journey! Remember,she's a fighter :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi!!! hope all of you are rocking😃. This update marks a new beginning for both Khanak and Shaan. The journey they are embarking on trying to be each other's support system. Do let me know if there's anything you like and dislike. It will only enhance my effort!!!


A sincere request!! Silent readers: please put in a word or two after reading. With the ff now 12 chapters old,I think I deserve this much. I can see only 15 like buttons and hardly 10 comments when there are more than 250 hits per chapter...


What to do!!! My greed is gradually building up!!!



Chapter 12


The dialogues are in purple and thoughts in red



The colossal Goenka House for the past few days has been flaunting itself in all it's finery which dazzled the eyes of every passer-by and onlooker!!! Decked up in grandeur and splendour, she was brimming with pride and satisfaction'.



It took her sometime to realize the enormity of the house which from tonight, she was legally a part of; even the corners would cloak her completely without anyone realizing.



Dressed in a white Kanjeevaram( a particular south indian silk saree) with a red and golden border,Madhavi looked every bit the quintessential mother in law; mother morphed into one. Khanak was made to enter the house after throwing over the rice pot with her right foot and surprisingly the rice fell into a perfect heap.



The next ritual made her dip her dainty feet in a red liquid(called alta in bengali) and walk on a white cloth imprinting her footsteps forever promising to usher in prosperity and good fortune!!!



The house was buzzing with relatives; the moment Shaan walked in with her,everyone thronged to see the wonder called Khanak..



"So this is the switchover bride"'someone murmured, writhing her drums in pain'.



Unopposed,Shaan found the ring concealed in the huge silver bowl filled with milk n rose petals. Forcefully she put her hand inside but made no attempt to find. The subtle touch of his hand numbed her to the bones!!



"This is Shaan's'your bedroom Khanak. Make yourself comfortable and yes' change into your nightwear and get some rest." "Don't worry! I'll make sure that no one disturbs you."



Madhavi's elusive peck on her temple worked as a balm on her frayed and tattered soul and nerves'..



The room looked magnificent to say the least. The drapes on the window were in lavender paired with silverish grey ones. The king size brown teak bed was ornate with silver colored linen with the canopy above falling like a virgin bride's plait, woven in ropes of blue and yellow roses. The intoxicating aroma of the candles enhanced the ambience further.



All that she could manage was a wry smile''



She unpacked her suitcase and found a baby pink camisole with a capri'.



The bathroom was as huge as the room with a jacuzzi and stored all the available brands of toiletries that could last her a lifetime!!! Did he get all these?



The warm bath soothed her till the pores. As much as she wanted to take off all the bangles, she couldn't. Dadi Ma's face loomed large over her psyche!!!



It was just when she had closed the bathroom door behind her that Shaan knocked and entered the room. There she was as fresh as the roses in the room dressed in an outfit which covertly revealed her slender and seductive figure,completely unaware of the storm and upheaval she has caused in someone's heart!!! As she walked towards the balcony, he noticed something he was completely unaware of. There she was with her darker than midnight cascade reaching way beyond her hips almost till her knees. Even the gusty wind managed to do little to ruffle them'..



Wow!!!! she has the most loveliest hair I've ever seen and how unlike of someone like her!!!! How I wish I could drown myself in them and feel paradise!!! Not bad for a starter Shaan. You'll list many more such wishful thoughts in days and months to come''



Shaan's room boasted of one of the best views of this captivating city!!! She soaked every bit of the breathtaking view oblivious of someone else in the room hopelessly waiting to get a glimpse of her lovely chiseled face!!!



It was only when her eyes were sleep drugged that she decided to move.



She was petrified realizing that she'll have to share the bed with him as the room offered nothing else beside the bed and a single couch!!!!



Her feet were stone!!! Sensing her uneasiness,he suggested that they could sleep on the sides with a huge gap in between'.



Two strangers bound by sanctity,on either side of a bed with an endless vacuum waiting for their future to unfold'..



It took no time for her sleep laced eyes to transport her into another world and lying beside her was the other pair sleep starved'.



All that he wanted to do right now was to cage her in his arms and confess his undying love. Rest in the shadow of her lustrous mane,tease her lips, caress her neck and hold her forever. He believed there would be a day when she would long for him but till then he has to wait''.






Edited by sangitasengupta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sangita lovely update. Waiting to read Khanaks feelings,belongingness and togetherness develops for Shaan in their new journey
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely sangi..
now lets see wat khanak will actually do in the given situation..
poor shaan..u penned down his emotions so well..how he wants to say her abt his love for her ad to have her in his arms..
sabar ka phal meetha hotha hai shaan so u must wait for her to know u n love u..
khanak's entry to goenka house n the description abt it n their bedroom..nice one..
madhvi's kissing her on her temple making khanak feel better..that was nice gesture..loved it..
khanak standing in the balcony unaware of his eyes on her..
hhmmm..they r sharing bed with a huge gap between them..waiting for the vacuum to gayab n let there be no place for vacuum between them..😳😳😳😳😳
awaiting the next part..

PS: Sangi while quoting for posting ur reply for our comments dont delete anything there so there ur reply can be seen distinctly..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Woww sangita...!LUVD d part...!
wt elz cn i say..just luv d way u write...
esp d last line...

''All that he wanted to do right now was to cage her in his arms and confess his undying love. Rest in the shadow of her lustrous mane,tease her lips, caress her neck and hold her forever. He believed there would be a day when she would long for him but till then he has to wait…….''

*Sigh* Beautiful...

But inna short??😔..cnt wait to read more...this is gonna b a wonderful journey fo sure...!!😍😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update
penned amazingly all details of khanak entry in Goenka house
love hw Madhvi gives peck on her temple which made khanak feels gud
king size bed n single couch WOW! so they have to share the bed
shaan wants to hold her n confess his love hahahaha! have patience shaan
waiting for next update n s how they maintain the gap😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wooow love the update sangi
Cmon I thi.k khanak shud start feeling someth ij ng know
Plz csn u try and update rrgular xx

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