if Wishes were horses Part 30,Page 79,3rd November

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

lovely update... poor guy.. culdnt confess his feelings.. waiting for him to do that & her to start falling for him..

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snigdhanagar

@snigdhanagar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

wonderful update sangi di...😃
khanak is nw part of goenka family...
awee poor shaan hes so desperate fr her...dat room describtion lovely...she was unaware dat he was luking at her..it wnt be easy fr him to make her fall frhim..he will hav to wrk hard...😃
dey r sharing bed wid huge gap...
waiting fr nxt part...😉

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Simi

@simikr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

Oohhh lala Brishti!! Loved it!!!

Am surprised that this tomboy has such long hair..LOLzz.

Me too believed that I was a boy for the longest time...sported short hair, always wore jeans and trousers, and took on male roles in school plays..LOL

So for Shan it was love at first sight..hmmm

Shall we soon get to see some X rated material??? (sorry am borrowing yr words ;)

Edited by simiv - 13 years ago

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ppriya_11

@ppriya_11

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#224

Lovely update. wish it was a lil long ahh only if wishes were horses :D. keep wrting

thanks,

priya p

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sangitasengupta

@sangitasengupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#225

Sangita lovely update. Waiting to read Khanaks feelings,belongingness and togetherness develops for Shaan in their new journey.

Thanks Sudha!!! Shaan will have a huge role to play in inculcating these feelings in his wife.

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sangitasengupta

@sangitasengupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#226

lovely sangi..
now lets see wat khanak will actually do in the given situation..
poor shaan..u penned down his emotions so well..how he wants to say her abt his love for her ad to have her in his arms..
sabar ka phal meetha hotha hai shaan so u must wait for her to know u n love u..
khanak's entry to goenka house n the description abt it n their bedroom..nice one..
madhvi's kissing her on her temple making khanak feel better..that was nice gesture..loved it..
khanak standing in the balcony unaware of his eyes on her..
hhmmm..they r sharing bed with a huge gap between them..waiting for the vacuum to gayab n let there be no place for vacuum between them..😳
awaiting the next part..

PS: Sangi while quoting for posting ur reply for our comments dont delete anything there so there ur reply can be seen distinctly..😊

Love you Ramzz!!!🤗. my heart swells everytime I read your comments.

Haaye!! Shaan's in love and a li'l impatient😆.

I so want the vacuum to fill up asap☺️.

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sangitasengupta

@sangitasengupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#227

Woww sangita...!LUVD d part...!

wt elz cn i say..just luv d way u write...

esp d last line...

''All that he wanted to do right now was to cage her in his arms and confess his undying love. Rest in the shadow of her lustrous mane,tease her lips, caress her neck and hold her forever. He believed there would be a day when she would long for him but till then he has to wait''.''

*Sigh* Beautiful...

But inna short??😔..cnt wait to read more...this is gonna b a wonderful journey fo sure...!!😍😍

Thanks Shama!!! love the way you've commented!!

will try and write longer,par kya karoon dono ki kahaani aage badhne mein thoda waqt legaa😉.LOLLZ

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 13 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: simiv
Oohhh lala Brishti!! Loved it!!!

Am surprised that this tomboy has such long hair..LOLzz.

Me too believed that I was a boy for the longest time...sported short hair, always wore jeans and trousers, and took on male roles in school plays..LOL

So for Shan it was love at first sight..hmmm

Shall we soon get to see some X rated material??? (sorry am borrowing yr words ;)

@bold: simi.. r u asking?? hhmmm... humare torture se bore ho gyi kya?? as we always demand such updates.. so a writer needs to read wat other writers write hai na..😉
😉
bring it on sangi..we r waiting..

Edited by RB81 - 13 years ago