if Wishes were horses Part 30,Page 79,3rd November - Page 24

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update... poor guy.. culdnt confess his feelings.. waiting for him to do that & her to start falling for him..


Thanks Shalini!!! Me too feeling sorry for him...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update sangi di...😃
khanak is nw part of goenka family...
awee poor shaan hes so desperate fr her...dat room describtion lovely...she was unaware dat he was luking at her..it wnt be easy fr him to make her fall frhim..he will hav to wrk hard...😃
dey r sharing bed wid huge gap...
waiting fr nxt part...😉


Thanks Snigdha😃.

Shaan's in love and has admitted so but the road ahead is tough.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Oohhh lala Brishti!! Loved it!!!

Am surprised that this tomboy has such long hair..LOLzz.

Me too believed that I was a boy for the longest time...sported short hair, always wore jeans and trousers, and took on male roles in school plays..LOL

So for Shan it was love at first sight..hmmm

Shall we soon get to see some X rated material??? (sorry am borrowing yr words ;)


Oohh lala Pundu!!! glad you liked it!!!


You know what... my father never allowed me to wear anything other than trousers coz he believed that I was his son. but when it came to my hair,I was only allowed trimming. at times I wanted to revolt and once did but the end result was so disastrous that I went back to my long braids. I love long hair on women. It adds that extra ounce...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update. wish it was a lil long ahh only if wishes were horses :D. keep wrting
thanks,
priya p


Thanks Priya! will try and write a longer one next time...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sangita🤗
I love you😃
Tsk tsk looks like Shaan baby is gonnaa have a tough time keeping his emotions under check 😊 but I do see a respose from Khanak's side,I don't think she can be indifferent to him for long😃
Ooo she really has such long hair...Tough job maintaining it😆
Looks like MIL is very happy but I a m not so happy with her cause she was apprehensive towards a sweet girl like Gunjan though I cn't blame her, after all she is a mother...
Hmmm I am hoping that Khanak will continue with her PG now, it might help her go on with life 😊
Loved it but u made me wait so long for this😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sangita🤗
I love you😃
Tsk tsk looks like Shaan baby is gonnaa have a tough time keeping his emotions under check 😊 but I do see a respose from Khanak's side,I don't think she can be indifferent to him for long😃
Ooo she really has such long hair...Tough job maintaining it😆
Looks like MIL is very happy but I a m not so happy with her cause she was apprehensive towards a sweet girl like Gunjan though I cn't blame her, after all she is a mother...
Hmmm I am hoping that Khanak will continue with her PG now, it might help her go on with life 😊
Loved it but u made me wait so long for this😭



Sharon,I love you too🤗.

Shaan is neck deep ,almost😉.

You are right!! Madhavi's a mother after all. She had nothing against Gunjan...


Will try and be more regular. my aim is to post an update once a week!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sangitasengupta


Tsk Tsk lets increase the frequency to two a week😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi girls!!! Would like to apologise for this delay. Was out of town hence couldn't update. A big thank you to everyone who bothered to read and comment and those sent pms declaring that they are silent readers. Would request them to follow my blog and comment there!!

My blog address: sangitasengupta@wordpress.com


Back with Part 13. Have a feeling that it's sounding a bit too melodramatic 😕.


Please read and comment😃.




Part 13



Silence was the only common between them. They shared this intimately,so much so that it was hard to believe that these two were tied in a wedlock….



Swagata has been at her wit's end since last night. She wanted everything perfect for her daughter and son-in-law who would be visiting in the morning.


Clad in a crimson Kanjeevaram with matte gold border and ornate gold thread work all over,her hair tied in a knot, her bangles jingling all over; her parting complimenting the colour of her attire; a radiant dot between those frowning brows made her look adorable!!!



Madhavi spent an entire hour meticulously helping Khanak get ready and her efforts bore fruit in swapping this tomboy with a picture perfect bride……. though acutely uncomfortable,she thanked her lucky stars for her mother-in-law!!!



Ashtmangala,an eighth day ritual where the bride and the groom were to visit the bride's home; untie the threads on each other's wrist tied on the day of wedding.



Gunjan stood mesmerized looking at the girl once unaffected by her feminity, a headturner today!!! For the first time ever, Khanak freezed in her tracks looking at her…. how she wished it didn't happen! Inhibition took over and she dreaded facing Gunjan for the first time… was she guilty about what happened? But she never wanted this…..



Pinaki couldn't believe his eyes! Was this the same girl whose wardrobe had only tattered and worn out clothes? But her gait summed it up for him….. his tomboy wasn't lost after all!



Swagata requested Dadi Ma to arrange for the ritual to be performed. They sat next to each other. An eager Shaan led the way when he took her left hand gently in his. This physical proximity was wreaking havoc inside her! The scandalized expressions and prying eyes all over choked her senses… what are they thinking? Do they believe that she was Gunjan's substitute; did she steal her best friend's man; did she cheat on her best friend?




Very subtly he unfastened each knot. He loved the smooth skin caressing his rugged wrist sending shivers down his anatomy. The more she wished that this got over quickly, the more he lingered on wanting this propinquity to never end. It was her turn and it took her no time to free him from the shackles.



"Khanak, chal beta tere se kuch baat karni hai".

"Jee Dadi Ma".



It was more than ten minutes that they were sitting at the same position and no one could decipher the reason. It was Pinaki who noticed her demeanor and understood.



The hue on her face was crimson hopelessly trying to free her fingers knotted in his. He was immensely relishing the sudden closeness and mischief took over. He wasn't ready to let go his bride so soon….



She pulled,he tightened! She swore under her breath while he sniggered. He kept playing with her hand,fondling her fingers,squeezing her palm and caressing her knuckles as if he was romancing her!!



"Shaan,let's have lunch,son! Please come". Pinaki's intervention cut short the thrill and khanak fled the room,utterly embarrassed to face anyone….




The lunch was an extraordinary gourmet affair with the choicest of bengali cuisine. the menu consisted of :



Pulao(sweetened rice)

Fish fry

Cauliflower and potato curry

Bhapa Ilish(Hilsa fish steamed in mustard paste)

Mutton curry

Sweet chutney made out of dates and mango papad

Rajbhog

Nalen Gurer sandesh(sweet made with jaggery and cottage cheese)

Papad

Mishti doi(sweetened curd)

Mishti paan(betel leaf containing sweet spices)



Hailing from a vegetarian family,Shaan was a strict non-vegetarian and savored every item on the menu even picking the fish bones immaculately which amazed everyone,even her. Dadi Ma alongwith Khanak and Gunjan went back to the Kejriwal House. Pinaki and Swagata settled Shaan in Khanak's room asking him to rest for sometime.




"Kaisi hai meri laado". "Wahan sab kuch theek toh hain naa"? "Koi mushkil toh nahi hai"?




"Main theek hoon Dadi Maa".




"Dekh beta main jo kehne jaw rahi hoon, woh shaayad main Gunjan se kehti." "Vivaah ek bandhan hain jise jodnaa ishwar aur bhaagya par nirbhar karta hai par ise todnaa sirf pati aur patni pe nirbhar karta hai". "Bakwass karte hain woh jo kehte hain ki kisi aur ki wajah se unki shaadi tooti". "Isiliye is rishte ko sambhaal kar rakhna aur yeh sochna chhod de ki tune Gunju ki jagah li hai". "Koi kisi ki jagah kabhi nahi le saktaa"." Wohi hua hai jo hona thaa". "Aur ek baat,yeh suhaag ki chooriyaan main apne laado ke haathon mein ek saal tak dekhna chaahti hoon".





"Dadi Maa went into a pravachan(sermonizing) mode today"."But you know what,she's right".




"I know that Gunju". "It's just that I'm a puzzle who doesn't fit in this entire jigsaw".




It was late afternoon and her aching muscles had given up wanting to re-unite with their favourite nesting ground. Blissfully unaware of his presence,she decided to change. She had only dropped the pleats of her saree when he stepped out of the washroom!!!




She was petrified and he thunderstruck!!!






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Posted: 13 years ago
hahahaha..that was so shaan to not miss a chance to romance with khanak's fingers and taking eons n eons of to remove the thread from her wrist..
ur menu made me hungry..i wish to eat all those now.. :'( unfortunately cant have all those now..
shaan resting in her room..daadi ma's advice..
ahaaa..there there there..wat a moment..shaan would be thinking dhanya ho gaya..LOL!!!!
forgetting the fact that shaan is in her room she is changing her dress n there comes pati dev out of washroom..
she is going to hide to the nearby place as fast as she could..
now am enjoting it more n more..
shaan is not going to leave khanak till she understands his feelings n reciprocates that..
will wait for the next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hahah that what reallly goood plz try to upload regularly cause I wannna stilll atay connnected to it

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