if Wishes were horses Part 30,Page 79,3rd November

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Hi Friends!!!Joined this forum in July last year and have got hooked on since.Just when it seems that the charm here is waning,some writer comes up with an OS or FF,and this place buzzes back.My maiden attempt is an ode to the incredible writers on this forum namelySimi,Manita,Jessica,Aditi,Beeni,Saaz(Katra Katra being my most favourite till date),Rooj,Prerna,Afiya and everyone else who've inspired me to take this bold step.

This is a lame attempt and please let me know if it is worth your while.criticisms in all forms are most welcome.

Have tried to infuse some reality into the story so the backdrop is Kolkata from where I belong.There are lots of stuff which either I have experienced myself or have seen happening in other people's lives.

Presenting the character sketch:


If Wishes were horses


Khanak Banerjee : An ultimate definition of a tomboy.Her sexuality has never bothered her because the guys with who she moved around with never thought otherwise.Born in a liberal bengali family,she was given a free hand from the time she attained her teens.a brilliant student throughout,has just finished her bachelor degree this year.with english as major,has again topped in her class.


Gunjan Kejriwal: Khanak's next door neighbor and her only girlfriend.extremely elegant,beautiful, academics has never been her forte.Has graduated with Khanak this year.A type 1 diabetic since the age of 2,her lifestyle has been very restricted.Khanak ,her best friend has always been her window to the outside world.


Shantanu Goenka : A lawyer by profession,working in one of the most renowned law firms in Singapore.Engaged to be married to Gunjan for over a year,he is any girl's dream come true in every sense of the word.


Sunil Goenka :One of the most reputed businessman of Kolkata,an affectionate dad and a man of strong principles.


Madhavi Goenka : a woman for whom her family means the world.Shantanu,being the apple of her eye.


Daadi Maa : Gunjan's grandmother who dotes on her and Khanak equally.For her Gunjan and Khanak both are her grand daughters.


Pinaki Banerjee : An indulgent father whose only aim in life is to spoil his daughter to the hilt.An engineer,extremely successful but still with a fire in his belly.


Swagata Banerjee : An extremely worried mother who is sure that her daughter would never settle down with anyone or anything in life.

P.S:Eagerly awaiting your feedback

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Looking goood! :) please continue!

but wait, shaan is engaged to khanak's best friend? :O

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Posted: 13 years ago
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sangi bring it on..shantanu engaged to gunjan for over a year..hhhmmm..
now am eager to know how shanak will get together..
do continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh love it so far! Even though, Shaan's engaged to Gunjan, I still like her character! Can't wait to read the first part! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good! shaan already engaged... interesting!...it nice to see how shanak will be together?...continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A new ShaNak FF with bengali tadka...kya baat hai, bring it on Sangita!!

Character sketch sounds very interesting...Shantanu already engaged, that too, to Khanak's Best friend...Hmmm..and Khanak a tomboy..All set to read it...Parda Utthaya jaaye...

One humble request dear...update on regular basis... Adi and Saaz ki tarah two updates a day milley toh Kya baat hai!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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eeekkksss😍


cant wait fr it to start dear

:)👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you all for the response!!!am touched.i'll try and update on a regular basis.but two updates a day wouldn't be possible because i'm absolutely raw at wriring.

hope to update the first part by tomorrow!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sangitasengupta

Thank you all for the response!!!am touched.i'll try and update on a regular basis.but two updates a day wouldn't be possible because i'm absolutely raw at wriring.


hope to update the first part by tomorrow!!



no worries sangi..but do it on regular basis..thats it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow i really liked dis concept tomboy khanak...😆
n shaan is engage to gunjan?????
do continue soon...😉

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