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@The_May_Rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

OMG *runs to read the update*!!!!

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Loved it Beeni👏⭐️...ShaNak as their adorable selves...Loved how Khanak was thinking herself into a state and I just grinned thought-out their nork-jork too😃...

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Oh and the flashbacks are a nice touch😊...And all the scenes with Natasha, Mitul and Geeta etc...The only thing I would want now is, I hope the others stop discussing ShaNak's personal things so much in future 😳...Sorry, but I feel the same as Mitul in that sense😆...

Edited by The_May_Rose - 13 years ago

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ONAego

@ONAego

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Hehehehe 34 n 35 both part r superb bennish ! Keep it up! Lolz bechara shantanu

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ONAego

@ONAego

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

U updated today thanQ nthng 2 say much u r briliant writer :)

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karishma

@shanakyasharan

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

beenz back to back 2 awesome updates👏

enjoyed them alot

cant wait fr d next one...sure going to b a killer😉

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Sonam

@Sonam17

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Woah! I've missed out on a lot! I'll comment later, have to catch up! :)

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Sonam

@Sonam17

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Wow 👏

I just want to say that this forum has some amazing writers! And you are exceptionally marvelous! I just love how Shaan-Khanak is portrayed, their dialogues and everything is just perfect! Especially Shaan 😳 Keep it up! Love your writing!

Edited by Sonam17 - 13 years ago

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smitha

@SPN_JD_Addicted

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#139

Okay posting my thoughs on part 35 without reading your update (imagine ho difficult it is to wait to read lol)

Goes without saying loved it. Shantanu's excitement which he so desperately tried to hide when Geeta gave the signal to go ahead was so adorable. Khanak's dilemma and apprehension was understandable I guess. Recreating the same atmosphere to the point of wearing the same dresses, may be SHan's way of making her comfortable but poor Khanak was terrified. Holding her from back and flattening his palms, once again proves how perfect they are in each others' arms. Shantanu understanding her fear and trying to ease her was so good.

Of course Geeta's outburst and Mitul's reactions were superb. Geeta after her initial sputtering, once again hoping to see Khanak as her next 'customer' was hilarious.

Now I am dying to read how spontaneous its going to be. After all ShaNak are so known to be spontaneous. They fight, they argue, they spport each other which somehow leads to some romance lol.

Just remembered. Shan flirting!!! Made me think of something else lol

Loved it

Edited by SPN_JD_Addicted - 13 years ago

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smitha

@SPN_JD_Addicted

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#140

OMG!!! Its absolutely mindblowing. I just love it when Shantanu says 'madam' and he dressed and she still in her night clothes make everything fantastic. Hmm.. a surprising progress. A cheek kiss and demanding a return one lol.

Oh how I loved this."Don't make me wait too long----the longer you make me wait----the rougher I will get----the more restless I will get too-----and I know you don't like either----" So screams arrogance, superiority and so alpha lol. And I too really wonder what exactly that he would do that she wouldn't like lol.

Khanak's reasoning and her final outcome that Shan would have an affair and that was what she meant enhanced by Boo's words was so realistic.

Shan tryng to tease Khanak and his sudden understanding and his ILU and his explanation that followed was beautiful. ANd his self mocking tone that he made some progress was funny. So spontaneous lol.

Poor Shan! He must be wondering what Khanak meant when she said she is ready lol.

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