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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG...OMG...OMG!!
i swear i've my heart in my throat rite now...plz say dey won't have 2 go thru any more suffering now...plz plz plz plz...i beg of u...
Loved d conversation between shaan n savita...so open dey r 2 each other...:) n shaan...kash kash kash mera boyfriend uske jaisa ho..:p...
Y do u always stop at such twists...
Plz don.t keep me waiting...kal pakka update kar dijiye...plz...
Love n luck...Disha
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Posted: 14 years ago
And yet another fantastic part!!!!!

Savita is like his mom, or more than her infact. I knew he would not hide from her.

Will he just blurt it out, now that he knows that they know about Madhavi's part in Jai's accident?

And loved the demanding Khanak and the ever so chauvinistic Shaan. He brought a rose for her ... Haaye and the kiss too!

This FF is very close to me, because I can relate to this Khanak and her talks a lot... some of her behaviour too, but I think she is more bolder than what I am. But she has an advantage, she has Shaan!

Waiting anxiously for the next part...

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow mani!!!!!!!!!!
that was one intense convo..really u did justice n banged on the entire convo..
i felt as tensed as shaan was..
as priya said if the last line was not there my head wud have burst by now in that tension..
so he let savita aunty know that the someone was khanak..
now wat will savita aunty do??
but really is it fair to separate them for madhvi's unknown mistake..
the mistake they did was hiding it from the sharma's..
really i want the next update..
i have heaps of comments pending for u n i'm asking the next one..but kya karein..
i might bunk work tomoro..so i'll comment tomoro mani..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey manita

awesome updates just read Ur updates i must tell u that one sentence made me blushhh 😳

OMG !! I was thinking the same………..I had 'you' with me today, in a washroom…… and I 'just' kissed you………that too 'only' 3 times……….I am such a 'jerk'."

u r really good at writing those naughty stuff between shanak

i Loved it😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh god this update is even more riskier to handle

u will give me heart attack at this stage 😭

now next update soon of this only and mrm later pls pls pls

but precap milega after this maha episode pls or even any hint 😊

love u
suchi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123

Maaaniii!

I was reading the entire update with my heart in my mouth !

Oh god ! What is this !

But they had to go thru it anyways !

Man ! Why is this happening !

Had the last line not been there ! i wud have been after ur life till u give the next update !Though i will still be !

This guy is standing upto his words ! he s not going to let her go !


pls update tomorrow na !



Thanks Pri,

will try my best to update tomorrow !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: loveindair

OMG...OMG...OMG!!
i swear i've my heart in my throat rite now...plz say dey won't have 2 go thru any more suffering now...plz plz plz plz...i beg of u...
Loved d conversation between shaan n savita...so open dey r 2 each other...:) n shaan...kash kash kash mera boyfriend uske jaisa ho..:p...
Y do u always stop at such twists...
Plz don.t keep me waiting...kal pakka update kar dijiye...plz...
Love n luck...Disha



Thanks for 2 comments Disha...lol...I know how you comment thru phone !! Thanks !!
love you

@ Bold -- their life has never been a bed of roses !! Shaan had warned her before while confessing his love !!!
and this was something they had to go through and their brothers were telling them to avoid it for some time !!! As Ragini's parents have refused her relationship with Jai !! and this issue is recent , so the brothers knew that their parents will refuse for Shanak !!

@ blue -- will try my best to update tomorrow :😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!
Wat an update di...
Simply superb...
I am just speechless...
Don't hav words to express how much i loved dis part...
Shanak here r best. So understanding, so loving...
Dis is da reason i love tresspro.. So real, it always connects me... Hope savita-shaan relation is not affected...hope she agrees to shanak relationship...
Try updating 2mrw.. Pls...
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Posted: 14 years ago
part - 44

first i would just say that u r brilliant at portraying every emotions of shanak 👍🏼

i feel myself lucky to read these type of stuff and that to at a site which i never known before , all credit goes to RBO for that 👏

@ update -

i m very emotional , so its bit difficult to handle this two update but i cant resist myself to comment so here it is 😳

shaan's nervousness in front of savita anty was described very beautifully ,
khanak's inconsolable crying and fear was very touching ( me too crying for that till now , as i said i m so emotional )😭

their phone convo was mix of emotions - crying , nervousness , teasing , smiling ...everything was their 😊

shaan's asking her that next time i will bring full piece of choclate was so cute 😳 * pulling shaan's cheek * (cant kiss otherwise khanak would first murder me and than she will menace pieces of shaan 😲 , so saving shaan from that 😆 )

love their phone convo - consolling each other , though they themselves r worried too , thats their relationship 😉

and yes khanak thought about that their relationship is blessed that egoes never came in between was so real to follow everyone in their lives with their partner , thanx for that 👏 , will remember it forever 😳 ( though my mom keep saying about it and she and dad too follow that but u know mom dad ke baat jaldi nai samajhti na 😉 😆)

and the reason they give that what if their family wont agree for them , so what they tell them was brilliant 👏 , * u r genius *


Part - 45


what to say about this part , it is so dreadful to even think about that part 😭

oh god starting was so full of masti with bro - sis duo and savita , that i thought every thing is going to be fine , but 😭

khanak and shaan interaction at the gate was so sweet and adorable and lovable 😳 , loved it sooo much ,😊 may be last cake for both of them till eveything gets settled 😭

poor khanak even dont know about the whole fiasco , i m dreading whats next in store 😒 , but we trust u for that 😳

oh so ragini and jai's relationship is known to everyone , good , so now will shaan help them about it , Dont know , but the way u bring that was also 👍🏼 ( sorry cant resist myself for praising u again and again 😊)

this family is so sweet that after knowing the culprit of jai's condition , none of them even think about to punish madhavi , * hats off to them * 👏

god this savita anty is so smart and intelligent that after joining 2-2 she thinks that something is their between shanak , mastermind she is ⭐️ and so is her son

but shaan and savita's convo was portrayed so beautifully and real that no one can even imagine that it will turn in this way 👏⭐️

( when she said that she would love if he and khanak would be together i was like "shaaan tell her about ur relationship " , but when she told that now she dont want it to happen ,i was like , oh god what will happen now 😒 )

but i m actually happy that savita came to know about it , so now this is sure that problem would be from khanak's family not from shaan 😕 * even confused *


but shanak will remain bonded , no problem what ever happen "hai na ?? 😒 *

awesome for every emotions in both the updates , so real to feel ⭐️


waiting desperately for next update , 😭
😳


love u for writing so beautifully and sharing it with us 🤗
suchi


P.S .: u should get it printed till here as season 1 and from part 46 as season 2 😉



Edited by suchi_245 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
omgee..really he said that...i m 2 happy...

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