part - 44 first i would just say that u r brilliant at portraying every emotions of shanak 👍🏼
i feel myself lucky to read these type of stuff and that to at a site which i never known before , all credit goes to RBO for that 👏
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i m very emotional , so its bit difficult to handle this two update but i cant resist myself to comment so here it is 😳
shaan's nervousness in front of savita anty was described very beautifully ,
khanak's inconsolable crying and fear was very touching ( me too crying for that till now , as i said i m so emotional )😭
their phone convo was mix of emotions - crying , nervousness , teasing , smiling ...everything was their 😊
shaan's asking her that next time i will bring full piece of choclate was so cute 😳 * pulling shaan's cheek * (
cant kiss otherwise khanak would first murder me and than she will menace pieces of shaan 😲 , so saving shaan from that 😆 )
love their phone convo - consolling each other , though they themselves r worried too , thats their relationship 😉
and yes khanak thought about that their relationship is blessed that egoes never came in between was so real to follow everyone in their lives with their partner , thanx for that 👏 , will remember it forever 😳 ( though my mom keep saying about it and she and dad too follow that but u know mom dad ke baat jaldi nai samajhti na 😉 😆)
and the reason they give that what if their family wont agree for them , so what they tell them was brilliant 👏 , * u r genius *
Part - 45
what to say about this part , it is so dreadful to even think about that part 😭
oh god starting was so full of masti with bro - sis duo and savita , that i thought every thing is going to be fine , but 😭
khanak and shaan interaction at the gate was so sweet and adorable and lovable 😳 , loved it sooo much ,😊 may be last cake for both of them till eveything gets settled 😭
poor khanak even dont know about the whole fiasco , i m dreading whats next in store 😒 , but we trust u for that 😳
oh so ragini and jai's relationship is known to everyone , good , so now will shaan help them about it , Dont know , but the way u bring that was also 👍🏼 ( sorry cant resist myself for praising u again and again 😊)
this family is so sweet that after knowing the culprit of jai's condition , none of them even think about to punish madhavi , * hats off to them * 👏
god this savita anty is so smart and intelligent that after joining 2-2 she thinks that something is their between shanak , mastermind she is ⭐️ and so is her son
but shaan and savita's convo was portrayed so beautifully and real that no one can even imagine that it will turn in this way 👏⭐️
( when she said that she would love if he and khanak would be together i was like "shaaan tell her about ur relationship " , but when she told that now she dont want it to happen ,i was like , oh god what will happen now 😒 )
but i m actually happy that savita came to know about it , so now this is sure that problem would be from khanak's family not from shaan 😕 * even confused *
but shanak will remain bonded , no problem what ever happen "hai na ?? 😒 *
awesome for every emotions in both the updates , so real to feel ⭐️
waiting desperately for next update , 😭😳
love u for writing so beautifully and sharing it with us 🤗
suchi
P.S .: u should get it printed till here as season 1 and from part 46 as season 2 😉
Edited by suchi_245 - 14 years ago