FF~Trespassers Prohibited~#2;Upd.49,50 - 120,121 - Page 73

hey manita,

hey mine comnts for both parts is on Page 96...

Hey Mani Di

Thanks for updating...As always awesome update...loved it..👏⭐️ 👏 👏⭐️ 👏

Sorry for the extremly late reply ...( Sorry Sorry) Frankly I took a deep breath before reading'.i don't know why but I was feeling that todays update is gonna be scary.😳 & you proved it right. You described every emotion amazingly. Todays both the updates were filled with full of Shock & surprises,😲 when I logged in I saw that u have updated two parts. & I was feeling happy that two parts matlab it will resolve all my doubts & worries. But yaha to I am more shocked, surprised & upset after reading both the parts. 😲 😳

Part 44

Shaan & Khanak are extermly conscious about their behaviour after returning. They both avoided looking at each other & kept them selves busy with others( Smart move guys '..well done). Shaan's seat is taken by someone & now he has no option left with him & has to settle on seat between Maa & Khanak. upar se he cannot disrespect maa. (I was actually worried when Shaan set next to Maa) loved the way u described his nervousness & akwardness while facing Maa. Coz they both have shared an excellent relationship. Shaan has shared every single thing with her & she has always loved him like his own child. Shaan also wanted to say everything to Maa but never imagined he has to face situation like he faced when he saw Maa outside the Washroom. Shaan is worried about ki Maa uske bare mein kya soch rahi hogi & will he be able to give answers for her questions.

Khanak also ignored shaan but on the other hand listening to the convo. Shaan & Khanak accidently reaches for the same Glass & withdraws their hands quickly (yaar I felt sad after reading it.) Shaan says even he wants to talk to Maa( that scares me & khanak both) Maa invites him for dinner as he is joining office so will not be able to show up in the day time. (frankly I am not at all excited about this dinner now as I was the one jumping after knowing that Shaan is going to Khanaks place.) 😳 Khanak thinking abt Rishabh & Soniya being lucky to talk to each other infrount of their families. (I felt bad for both of them I felt like telling khanak don't worry babu even u guys will also be able to talk to each other openly. its just a passing phase. U both will survive)😊 Khanak finally thinks about the reason that now even Shaan knows.😕

Khanak seeting in her Room remembering the evening & events she spand with him. Missing his presence in her room...recognising his every little action...his touch...their arguments...their Kiss ...she is charising the memories she had with him when they were in Mumbai. She wants to go back to Mumbai 😭( what a lovely discribtion of her thought process made me remember the last few updates very clearly) She also recognizes the days when they were not together & sudden fear, insecurity & Pain of loosing him knocks her & her fear came out in form of tears ( felt damn emotional while reading it. I so wanted to go to khanak & give her a hug) 🤗

Shaan calls khanak as she has taken a promise from him that he will call her every night before sleeping.( he is such a darling yaar always calls her whatever the situation is) 😉 their phone convo was the best part of the update as it was filled with many beautiful emotions. Expresses love care & understanding in their relationship. Both are worried & insecure but they are trying their best to convince each other abt every thing will be fine. Loved the confidance in Shaans voice when he tells her that they will servive & he will never seprate from her & he will not go any where. Love his teasing to make khanak relax . he tells her "Don't cry...next time, I'll bring a full chocolate for you." 😆 😆( can anyone be cuter than this...no way he is the best) loved... loved... loved last part of their Phone convo (super cute) he wanted her to call him Jerk (frankly their "Sweetheart" & "jerk" always makes me happy) 😉 😉

Awesome update👏⭐️ 👏 👏⭐️ 👏 "U Rock"

Part 45

This was the most Khatarnaak part Di. After lot of struggle both went to sleep. Khanak woke up at 10.00 pm (same pinch even I woke up at 10 when I am home on vacations 😉) loved Maa & Sis-bro convo, Jay is teasing her about getting married loved their nok johk & masti (here also same pinch every bhaiya is like that only😭). I got scared after reading Maa's expression when Jay & Khanak complained about She loves Shaan more. Finaaly Khanak told everyone clearly that she is not gonna work with Rishabh.( hush,,,,,,,,,).

Loved Shaan & Khanaks convo at Door. Shaan has brought Folwers for Maa ( way to go beta acchi technique hain). 😉 Loved their interaction they are just adorable. Maa is waiting for Shaan at Terrace & instructed Khanak not to came up ( that Scared me again) 😳

You have wonderfully described the convo between Shaan & Savita Maa'..U have done a proper justice to the Confrantation sence.⭐️ I like the way u potraied charcter of Savita Maa...She is staright forward, caring, loving, understanding. Loved their convo at start where she ask shaan to sit & says she love the bribe he gave for caming late. Shaan also helps maa in cleaning & Gardening work. 😊

There she finally dropps bomb,😲 She says that they came to know abt the Culprit behing Jays accident & wanted to forget that incidence ( such a great people yaar my respect has raised even more for them). Maa even says she would have loved it If Khanak & Shaan has choose each other ( I was like yiipeee that means she will immediately give permission ) but than she says now the things are different & she cannot allow that but thank fully Khanak is not the girl she thinks.😭 (phir se mere sapno par paani pher diya and how can i forget ki inki life mein kabhi kuch aasani se nahi hua.they are tuffest couple) 😭

Shaan says about Rags family rejected the rishta with Jay ( ohhh no ,,,,,now I understandthe whole situation. The immediate thing click me is to screme in Shanak ear ke Samaj seve chodo Rishabh aur Soniya apna dekh lenge,,,,,,Concentrate on Jay & Rags)I like Jay yaar ...dont want him to suffer...i wonder how khanak will react after knowing it, as she is the only one who doesn't know any thing about it.😕 😳

Poor Shaan gets real confused & sad by her answers & Finaaly spoke "Ma...I never said that... that 'someone' is 'not' Khanak." I hope Maa will understand them & koi bada panga na ho ( bahot pange jail liye yaar inhone ab or naho) Ab kya hoga aage???? 😕''I am just not able to wait,,,,,,,Please please please post the next part. 😊 😳

Thank u for the back to back two update...🤗 🤗

Hats off to you for writing a beautiful piece...