FF~Trespassers Prohibited~#2;Upd.49,50 - 120,121 - Page 70

lovelyyy mani hayeee i love this two madly gosh the way she was waiting for him near the corridor and the little prank back firing on shaan and getting the wrath of khanak .her accusation his retorts .shaan trying explain and khanak kept bablering hayeee and the way he made her clam down was blisss sighs was so remember ur DP scene was completly lost in the shanak world.finally the wait of 38 days was finished and they finally making up by kissing hayeee😍 and the most lovely part was where he tells he that the color on his shirt is now transfered to her cheeks and dress .and khanak telling may be it a good sign .god bless them loved it so much .and finally savita seeing shaan in the wash room and making out that he was with some one thank god that she didnt see them bothi would have died .as they said thank god that they were not embarissied .the best part was shaan feeding cholcholate for her to brake the fast hayeee main sadke ke jawa .the best ever way of breaking a fast .totally drool worthy
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thanks for the update mani know i cant wait for the next .waiting imapatiently .plzzz take some time and update MRM TOo na plzzz dont mind my asking dieing to read that too

hey mani di im so sorry but mere exam the so i couldt read ur ff so osrry but nwo im free i will read it whole but i reda alst part it was so cuteee how can write so brillently yaar it was awsome re...and u knw thy fight and fight lol cutly and then make uup and then again iirited ecah other lol he loves o iirites her and she like cute child lol reminds me of someone *cough cough* lol...and the way he broke her fast with choclates and he with kiss awww cute and her mo lmost saw them lol sigh i wish ur ff is midas lol for someone he he . i mean ke some body on spree to missing each other lol ha ah bliss ...i love ur writing awsomeee😍

Originally posted by: krock

hey mani di im so sorry but mere exam the so i couldt read ur ff so osrry but nwo im free i will read it whole but i reda alst part it was so cuteee how can write so brillently yaar it was awsome re...and u knw thy fight and fight lol cutly and then make uup and then again iirited ecah other lol he loves o iirites her and she like cute child lol reminds me of someone *cough cough* lol...and the way he broke her fast with choclates and he with kiss awww cute and her mo lmost saw them lol sigh i wish ur ff is midas lol for someone he he . i mean ke some body on spree to missing each other lol ha ah bliss ...i love ur writing awsomeee😍

Ohho...tum log bhi na......😆.😆...

Hello Manita di,

I hope u remember us. Well just logged in to tell you that last two updates are fantastic. And A Big Big Thank u for dedicating this Update to slient readers...it makes us happy. loved the updates. Well frankly only 6 of us has finished reading previous parts. & all are still catching up with the previous parts, loved the updates waise bhi wait kar kar ke thak gaye the. We used to crib a lot infrount of our friend as she is responcible for making us read this wonderful FF.

Loved their Fights & Ruthana---manana game. Khanak's way of Dmanding apolofy was a real fun to read. U are amazing Di. The last update was super HoT. So now Will khanak's mom came to know about them. Or Mr. Smarty will hide it with his super charming smile & intelligence. Yaar send them back to MumBai as they are actually not able to spand time together.

Thanks a lot for the updates as we all were very Sad since last three days. As few of our special friends are leaving from here. And we are dead sure that now we will only be able to meet them on weekends. But thankfully these update has cheered us up & we had a best time reading it. We almost forget our sadness. This FF has became the medium of our meetings & discussions. we cant control our selves from Gushing about Trespro Shanak. we have actually left Watching TV after connecting to this FF. thank u for making us all smile.

Manita Di we are extermly sorry for this Stupid long bakwass but seriously this FF has became very important part of our life. U know our friend is again reading this FF for the 4^th time I guess …………as she says she is in love with this FF.

We Agree your writing can easily make anyone fall for it.

Waiting for the next part …………So please continue soon,

Love

The Star Girls.

you're back!!🤗

lovee love loveee these two as always...

its all so natural like easy flow with these two. arguments...making up...the emotions...all of it...quite real. yet at the same time not.

and the end..hai la!..oh her mom knows. her mom soo knows. i am not sure if she realizes that it was her daughter in the bathroom. but she knows! of the two...

for a second i was like. now how is she going to have these two get out of this situation..but nice save!

i would say next mere rang update...but i am albeit a bit partial to this story always!...so update this again soon!..anddd mere rang:)

good to see you back

Please go through last page -- Page 95 for Thank yous !!!

This update was really long so I am posting it in 2 parts --- Part 44 and will post part 45 later !!!

OMG ! oMG !

Update ! That too on a sunday after a long time !

He he !

I loved it !

I remembered the time when u updated back to back sometime in March when i was returning from BAngalore and was reading the update in the phone.. i think it was the holi part !

Same emotions ! saMe insecurity !

But the difference is they know how much they love eachother
!

I absolutely loved the way u showed Shaan s discomfort !

And the reasoning both of them gave as to what they ll do when their parents dont favour their reltionship !

I love how they try to cheer up eachother !

Sweetheart and jerk ! they are !

Love them !

And love u loads !

When is the next update !

mani di... hugs...