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-Manita- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jparker

Me am prancing and dancing... mani is gonna update again.. yes yes soon...

chalo focus Jess... Mani where is Rang... :'(



@ Bold -- Better focus on ur FF baby...i am going to pester you with an evil hat on !!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Mani di.

Awesome part...loved it. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

First of all Thanks for updating as I was waiting since yesterday. I thought u are updating but u did't...chaddo koi baat nahi. Hurrayyy...aj to update mila. and thank u very much to dedicate this update to slient readres as I know they must be super duper happy right now. Beautifully written Di showing each & every emotion in the relationship. It was filled with the sweet aroma of Love, Care, Affection, anger, Romance, teasing, hurt, Btw the Update was Super HOT. 😉 😳

Update Start hote hi mere Popat ho gaya. 😭 When he heard her voice''.i thought she has came to talk to him. (Par yaha to madam kisi aur se baat karne main busy hain,...humphhh 😡)...but loved their eye gestures...& timings. & khanak blushing ...these two are extremely adorable. Finally shaan comes with the paper bag. Serching the way to washroom...& there he saw his princess waiting for him. Wow what a sweet apporch. Khanak campares todays Shaan with the teenager Shaan who approached her on Holi. & campares changes in Shaan during 6 years. 😍

Khanak is such a sweet heart ( ekkksss...maine Shaan ka line churaya...😳 😳) she came just to canfirm wheather he has actually forgive her. But ye kya ye log phir se lad rahe hain, ( he bhagwan kya hoga inka??? Par frankly their fights & specially their sweet & innocent apologies also makes me Happy & exicted.) Shaan is a badmash bacchu he never left single chance to tease poor girl. He blame her for spoiling his favourite shirt. But got tensed after seeing her cry. Than there fight...(baba re these two are just khatarnaak,) khanak is so hurt...I really felt bad for her. But love the way shaan confess that he was just trying to tease her. But khanak refuse to listen to him ( yes...yes aasach pahije...aasach pahije ) there convo was super cute. Loved it. but poor girl has actually done a lot to impress Mr. Nautanki. ( Hats off to you Di...as u have potraied his character with such an ease coz everything suits him.) 👏 ⭐️ Shaan is a genius. What a way to stop her non stop blabbering. You described whole part very beautifully.

I agree they both have never displayed there love in public. Frankly that is the most sweetest thing about Shanak. Di seriously you write hot stuff very well. I just loved it when u described the Kiss between the two. frankly I get Goosebumps while reading it. & TRESPRO shanak don't need to get touchy at all & they don't need to demonstrate their love in public by chasing each other & by getting physical. frankly from my POV there is something extremely sexy about both of them when they look at each other,,,,,when they hug each other ,,,,,when they Fight''... when they apologize & when they just talk with each other '...even when they hold hands ...ufff...I seriously I find them irristable,😉

He actually dragged her inside the washroom. (.u know I immediately recognize the update when they both accidently gets themselves locked up in the washroom. & *tan...ta...den*. Zarine came up there. I was actually thinking ki is baar bhi koi ti aayega.) how sweetly they both apologise with each other main ek baat batau please koi pitna nahi I so want them to fight coz I love them the most when they apologise with there sweet sweet sorry.thank fully both get sometime alone. As both are waiting for this to happen. Khanak wants to go back to Mumbai. As she is not getting enough time with him. ( haila rose reversal...as previously Shaan was the one who asked this question). Loved their convo...completely romantic.

Loved the part where khanak see her face in the mirror which is multicolourd...she says it's a blessing from god ( so true chalo aj ka din officially diclaired as Trespro Holi ). Finally Shaan gets compliment from her (gooma phira ke hi sahi diya to sukra manao shaan babu)😆 Wow Shaan feed her chocolate. He carefully brought choutusa piece for her. Coz puri chocolate lata to pakka log use stupid samajte (He...he..he...what a cute explanation) 😆 😉 😆

Shaan opens the door & sees Savita Maa standing there ( main wahi sochu ab tak apne koi bomb kaise nahi phoda...coz sespance create karna to apki speciality hain.) Maa cought him by his expression, ( ab to class lagegi beta) 😉I am sure like jay she is going to guess it ( par iska matlab rajma chaval cancel coz ab emberessment ke mare shaan will not go to khnaks place) finally some aunt came out to be an angle & saved Shanak from maha musibat.😉 Maa left from there but I am so sure she will try to talk ti jay about this. coz shewill feel being the best friend of Shaan he must be knowing who was there with him. ( ab pakka sabki band bajegi). 😆 😉 😆

Mani Di waiting for the next part coz yah ape do do talwar latki hui hain.. waise Di katti ...humphhh...😡..apne phirse shendi lagae na hame...😡main har baar sochti hu ...abhi secret pata chalega...abhi secret pata chalega...par lagta nahi ki apka koi irada hain raaz kholneka. Kab se wait kar rahe hain reason ka ki why they cant reveal there relationship now. Last update gave the clue. But pura kissa janna hain. 😉

Thank u for the most beautiful & Romantic update. 🤗 🤗


⭐️ "U Rock" ⭐️ 👍🏼

Love

Pranjal.


Declaration: the people with the sound status should not read the Read lines warna pakka meri categari ( insane) main aane ke chances hain. 😳 😉

Edited by -pranjal- - 14 years ago
khwaish_245 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ pranjal :

me too was thinking about rajma chawal party, but after posting my reply 😆 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow!

Romantic stuff ... finally their quarrel is sorted for now. I'm sure they will come up with a new one 😆 and then patch up again 😳 Love Shanak!

They cant stay away from each other, tujhe bola tha unko Mumbai mein rakh, dekh Khanak ki kya halath ho gayi hain ... Shaan ke dimag mein thodi koi akkal daal do .. come back to Mumbai.

Savita ne abhi pakad liya hota tho?

he has not told her about Jai .. Is it romance in the air for Jai and Ragini????

jaldi raaz kholo yaar ... waiting!

~Cheers,
Dish


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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Mani di... AGAIN LOVELY UPDATE 👏👏👏👏👏

Yaar yeh dono kitna ladte hai... actually dey r truly our Shanak... I love dem and missed dem terribly... and Khanak Kitna bolti hai yaar... But our Shaan knows how to stop her... I must very gr888 way to stop her... AHEM AHEM!!!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

well mani di...THANK U FOR TRES.PRO... 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Now back to update... It is beutiful lyk each and every part... and ur dailgues amazing yaar!!!! u r very talented writer...
he just loved her 'baby' faces...
awww even v ol love her baby face...she is natural beauty...

"What do you think of yourself? Some greek God ?? who knows how to make people fall in love with him''"

well.. well... well... khanak He is Greek God... and sorry to say bt me also in love with him...😊😊 haaye...

"I want us to go back to Mumbai''" she whispered again.

well yes mani di... yaar en dono ko waapis bhejo pleaseee... jab se delhi me entry ki hai ladte hi ja rahe hai... wahan to sara tym romance hi karte rehete the... lol

He chuckled out loud, "Then sweetheart, we need to stop talking''.coz, arguing and fighting is second nature to you''"

totally agreed Khanak is such chatter box even during their fights she didnt allow him to utter a single word!!! Bechara Shaan 😆😆😆😆

"Close your mouth and speak something''I am dying for a compliment from you since evening." He spoke while buttoning his shirt up.

yaar Khanak ka dekh yeh haal hai... mera to padke hi muuh khul gaya... haaye Kaash Khanak ki jagah main hoti!!!! (i know i m such a beshram... lol)

Shaan, I'm asking something''''who is inside?
OMG... yaar yeh khanak ki family hai ya CID... pehele Jai Shaan ki ringtone se hi samajh gaya tha... aur Khanak ki mom shaan ki shakal dekh kar hi samajh gayi... I hope she will understand their LOVE... just cross ma fingers...

Thanks for wonderful updaate again...
Love U
Gunjan
Edited by khush1432 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awileee...dey r sooo cute...dey fight lyk kids do over jam tarts and finally both of them end up sharing it...perfect...dats what i call a perfect relationship..:)<3...
I'm telling u di...u're penning down a BEST SELLER...never in my lyf have i read something as adorable n as sweet as dis...
I hate myself for repeating my words...bt its just awesome...loved it...2 d core...
N d line when khanak says"what will u eat??" n he mischievously replies"you"...uui ma...its sooo romantic...
Bt u said u'l b out wid d secret in dis update...its still not there:(...chaliye...koi nai...i'l wait...
N i cud practically imagine his expression wen on opening d door of d washroom he wud have seen khanak's mom...hahaha...poor guy...pairo tale zameen kisak gai hogi...:p...i loved it wen savita cud read his expression so well...just like his own son...
I absolutely love u writing such a gr8...awesome blossom...FF... Apke aage toh Mills n Boons and Stephine Meyers sab fail:)
Update soon...love you...Disha...
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh! savita aunty saw him! wats gonna happen now! im excited!!
great update as usual Di! thanx for giving us TresPro !
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Posted: 14 years ago
Emotions pouring over !

Brillaint Mani !

These two are so adorable !

I like when they fight and then make up !

Oh her mom was there ! that was too close !

Waiting waiting !
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry for the late reply mani di
it was so brilliant...☺️😍😉⭐️👏👍🏼🤗
Edited by purvi08 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow..mani...it's awesum...cute & hot ...lol

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