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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#661

Did I comment ???????

I guess I did not Na .. ????

*whines ... too lazy to type out *

LOVED IT .. as always ...

Now WHY am i seeing posts about TresPro Ending on the previous pages !!!!!

DARE you end it Manitaaa ... I will hunt you down and do Things to you !

LOL !!!!!!!

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#662

Originally posted by: rbo_d_best
Did I comment ???????

I guess I did not Na .. ????

*whines ... too lazy to type out *

LOVED IT .. as always ...

Now WHY am i seeing posts about TresPro Ending on the previous pages !!!!!

DARE you end it Manitaaa ... I will hunt you down and do Things to you !

LOL !!!!!!!

@ Bold -- Manita echoes the sentiment borrowed from Shals 😊!!!

@ Update -- Me too lazy to type out too ... lol !😆!!!

*Kidding*...you have already commented before sweetie...on page 88... and also requested me to make it romantic !!!

Edited by -Manita- - 14 years ago

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#663

oh mani..
now i remember that i didnt leave any comment..
u updated by midnight aur mein kushi mein read it n slept..
i'll pakka leave my comments by tonight..

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#664

This update is dedicated to all the silent readers and all those who pm me but are unable to comment here...your love speaks through the 2000 clicks I had on the last update and I am damn sure that me and my friends did not click 2000+ times...love you all !!

Trespassers Prohibited
Part 43

Removing the part 😊

Edited by -Manita- - 14 years ago

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Jessica

@jparker

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#665

Rang to nahi dikha.. despo for TressPo...

😃

ooops

shall edit

yayyy update miling...😳

Reserved... for comments...😃😃😳😳

Okay... edited after reading update...

😲😲😲😲😳😳😳😳😳😳😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😎😎🤔🤔😍😍😍

Your ShaNak... they are all of the above and more...😳😳

Shall come later with more when I can talk... for now read again and drooolll😃😃😃😃

Edited by jparker - 14 years ago

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Roshni

@Roshni_M

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#666

Mani di... Hugs...

Loved it sooo much...

shaan pulling khanak's leg...

Khanak thinks he is still upset n starts crying... Aww poor girl...

Shaan tries to tel her dat he dint mean to do it... Bt khanak starts blabbering... Lol...

And den shanak kiss... Aww... Dat was cute...

shaan pulls her in d washroom wid him... Lol this sooo reminded me of d tym when they were stuck in d washroom... :D

and omggg!!! Savita is having shak on him... Oh mhan... Im sooo excited to see wats gonna happen nw...

will shaan tell savita it was khanak wid him??? God..

Diii update d next part soon...

Edited by Roshni_M - 14 years ago

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#667

omg.. they got caught 😛😛😛will he tell Savitha that it was Khanak inside?? or will Savitha know??

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deepalisawant99

@deepalisawant99

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#668

Oh
awesum update di...
Finally they sorted it out... Khanak is so adorable here...
Shaan brought chocolate to break fast... So cute...
Savita caught shaan.& khanak...
Wow!! Am just speechless!! Superb
waitng for wat shaan has to say to savita...
Secret is yet to be revealed... Looking forward for next part.

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sangitasengupta

@sangitasengupta

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#669

Hi manita,

hv hogged "trespassers prohibited" in these two days.😆😆.Couldn't take my eyes off your blog!!!

u r an extremely gifted writer!!!

gives me immense pleasure to think that two television actors have this tremendous ability of bringing out such wonderful stuff from authors like you.

your writing is fresh,crisp and captivating.eagerly waiting for part 44.

am tempted to ask u something?do u think it is natural for two actors to share such strong passion on screen without having anything off-screen?hope i haven't offended you!!!

love

sangita

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Jessica

@jparker

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#670

Okay so now I am more into your update.

Khanak is one cool mirchi!!!! Teekhi lavangi.. peppy.. chirpy cutie pie... And Shaan did absolutely right by shutting her up in the right way that he did... He is one cool cucumber.. mera chweetu budthal... Haay he broke her fast with chocolate... How 😎 can he get... Oh Jess more than approves... Purrrfect... 😳😳😳😳

Sigh I always thought strange are the ways of love. One loves and repents.. One misses on love and repents.. either way.. one pines.. Love is everything.. it is the world if love is with you and it is nothing if not with you... sigh that emptiness is experienced by these two.. especially by an emotional Khanak who knows not what to do without him.. Her whole life revolves round him. He is her very breath... and she is his... but he is practical and down-to-earth... knows how to deal with sense..

Such a perfect match they are for each other.. made-for-each-other...

Like a perfectly fitting glove in the hand...

Mwaaa Mani for your update..

Savita finding out is long due.. in fact I am game for it now... I am eager to see Shaan-Savita relationship exploited by ya...

Beautiful insight to your ShaNak... Heavenly...😳😳😳😳

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏