FF~Trespassers Prohibited~#2;Upd.49,50 - 120,121 - Page 54

I love their fights 😉
Nice update manita

Hey Mani Di,

Thank u so much for updating the next part as we were actually unable to wait for the update coz as in Part 39 both had a fight and I was actually thinking what will happen next but I guess I am blessed coz u updated & belive me it's a perfect Sunday treat. Hopefully u'll give us this type of treats regularly for both the FF's. 😃

Awesome …………Awesome ………….Awesome part. 👏 👏 👏

Loved the update……………… 👍🏼 Di U rock 👍🏼

What a lovely part Di. It was hilarious. Plus it cantains all the emotions of happiness,anger, sadness, frustration& ofcourse Rommance. As expected Khanak regret her behavior & decided to apologize. She is a sweetheart. she went to Shaan's place to manoafy him & haila directly into his badroom. Bichaara Shaan thinks he is having a sweetest dream of his life. I wish ke that dream had never ended. Lovely discribtion of Shaan's emotions when he was thinking that he is dreaming abt Khanak's pracence loved those lines …..camplitely magical. 😍 😍 😍 😍

But mere aur Shaan dono ke sapne chaknachur ho gaye as it was a reality. Such a realistic Discribtion of the way he gets Panic. Khanak leaves Shaans room & goes to Dadi's room. Hey I love Dadi coz she also understands Shaan & Khanak's relation after watching her dolphin pandant in Khanaks neak. ( Dadi is Smart) They both are discussing Sarees & jewellery. ohhh…… Shaan hear also ignores her. Loved ur detailing that he "he removed his slippers when he sat on daadi's bed". Dadi leaves to ask harilal for water ( is she purposefully leaves to give some privacy to couple????) loved Shanak's talk and Romance inside the room frankly dono ke dono akdu hain & knows very well how to irritate each other. Kitni baar she said Sorry but this time Shaan has decided to give her a real tuff time Kitna ladte hain dono u know there is Saying in Marathi which suits them perfectly.

" Tuze Maze Jame Naa,

Tujya Vaachun Karme Naa."

I love them both & Yes I got my answer she is fasting for Shaan……..Wow She is a sweetheart. Teej is actually a lovely festival I used to enjoy it a lot. He gives her ride to the tample. loved their convo. Poor girl is trying hard to please him. She also reminds him abt their pact abt No Sorry & No Thank u. it was hilarious Shaan is irritating a poor girl by asking for whom she is fasting??? but loved khanak's answer that she is fasting for Chowkidaar & she actually gave a wonderful reason behind it. 🤣 🤣 Shaan is Teasing her badly. Loved Khanak's "Devaa……… please spare him……." 👏

Waiting too see how they make up ????? & how khanak is going to Say sorry to shaan infrount of all ……Poor girl. It's such a challenging task. It will be a real fun to read as we all know that Shaan cant be angry with her for a long time. & yes Khanak's Sweet & cute attempts to say sorry( Wow……….. I cant wait more). 😍 😍 Also waiting to see Savita Maa's reaction on meeting Shaan as she loves him as his own child. & also waiting for Rags & Sameers reentry . But I know ki unki entry mein abhi time hain & u must be having some intrusting in your pockets for both of them. And Beautiful Discribtion of Costumes loved Khanak's dress completely. U are too good Di. 👏 👏 👏 👏

I must say that Di your every character has their own Spank & Magic. coz Each & every character has something magical to hold the readers. & it also raises our expectation. 👏 👏 but somehow I feel that Rishabh's character is loosing that Spank & magic ( it is just my personal opinion & u guys may not agree to me & I hope Di u don't mind me saying this Sorry if I hurt u ). Hoping to see something intrusting & Great with Rishabh. But that does not mean he turned out to be evil and try to Seprate Shanak. A BIg NO for that Coz his Thought process Somehow Irks me. 😡

Thank u for updating. Waiting for the next update already………..Jaldi dena . U know I always right jaldi dena lekin app meri baat sunte hi nahi ho. 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Sorry for my faltu ki pakaw bakwaas ……waiting for the next part. 🤗 🤗

Love u

Pranjal.

oh god mani...it is just awesum yaaar..it reminds me of sum1...😆

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Hey Mani Di,

Thank u so much for updating the next part as we were actually unable to wait for the update coz as in Part 39 both had a fight and I was actually thinking what will happen next but I guess I am blessed coz u updated & belive me it's a perfect Sunday treat. Hopefully u'll give us this type of treats regularly for both the FF's. 😃

Awesome ''''Awesome ''''.Awesome part. 👏 👏 👏

Loved the update'''''' 👍🏼 Di U rock 👍🏼

What a lovely part Di. It was hilarious. Plus it cantains all the emotions of happiness,anger, sadness, frustration& ofcourse Rommance. As expected Khanak regret her behavior & decided to apologize. She is a sweetheart. she went to Shaan's place to manoafy him & haila directly into his badroom. Bichaara Shaan thinks he is having a sweetest dream of his life. I wish ke that dream had never ended. Lovely discribtion of Shaan's emotions when he was thinking that he is dreaming abt Khanak's pracence loved those lines '..camplitely magical. 😍

But mere aur Shaan dono ke sapne chaknachur ho gaye as it was a reality. Such a realistic Discribtion of the way he gets Panic. Khanak leaves Shaans room & goes to Dadi's room. Hey I love Dadi coz she also understands Shaan & Khanak's relation after watching her dolphin pandant in Khanaks neak. ( Dadi is Smart) They both are discussing Sarees & jewellery. ohhh'' Shaan hear also ignores her. Loved ur detailing that he "he removed his slippers when he sat on daadi's bed". Dadi leaves to ask harilal for water ( is she purposefully leaves to give some privacy to couple????) loved Shanak's talk and Romance inside the room frankly dono ke dono akdu hain & knows very well how to irritate each other. Kitni baar she said Sorry but this time Shaan has decided to give her a real tuff time Kitna ladte hain dono u know there is Saying in Marathi which suits them perfectly.

" Tuze Maze Jame Naa,

Tujya Vaachun Karme Naa."

I love them both & Yes I got my answer she is fasting for Shaan''..Wow She is a sweetheart. Teej is actually a lovely festival I used to enjoy it a lot. He gives her ride to the tample. loved their convo. Poor girl is trying hard to please him. She also reminds him abt their pact abt No Sorry & No Thank u. it was hilarious Shaan is irritating a poor girl by asking for whom she is fasting??? but loved khanak's answer that she is fasting for Chowkidaar & she actually gave a wonderful reason behind it. 🤣 🤣 Shaan is Teasing her badly. Loved Khanak's "Devaa''' please spare him''." 👏

Waiting too see how they make up ????? & how khanak is going to Say sorry to shaan infrount of all ''Poor girl. It's such a challenging task. It will be a real fun to read as we all know that Shaan cant be angry with her for a long time. & yes Khanak's Sweet & cute attempts to say sorry( Wow'''.. I cant wait more). 😍 😍 Also waiting to see Savita Maa's reaction on meeting Shaan as she loves him as his own child. & also waiting for Rags & Sameers reentry . But I know ki unki entry mein abhi time hain & u must be having some intrusting in your pockets for both of them. And Beautiful Discribtion of Costumes loved Khanak's dress completely. U are too good Di. 👏

I must say that Di your every character has their own Spank & Magic. coz Each & every character has something magical to hold the readers. & it also raises our expectation. 👏 👏 but somehow I feel that Rishabh's character is loosing that Spank & magic ( it is just my personal opinion & u guys may not agree to me & I hope Di u don't mind me saying this Sorry if I hurt u ). Hoping to see something intrusting & Great with Rishabh. But that does not mean he turned out to be evil and try to Seprate Shanak. A BIg NO for that Coz his Thought process Somehow Irks me. 😡

Thank u for updating. Waiting for the next update already'''..Jaldi dena . U know I always right jaldi dena lekin app meri baat sunte hi nahi ho. 😭

Sorry for my faltu ki pakaw bakwaas ''waiting for the next part. 🤗 🤗

Love u

Pranjal.

hi pranjal,

sorry mani di for doing ur job but cant resist myself for doing this

pranjal shaan already told dadi about his and khanak's relationship while taking that dolphin pendent from her which shaan has also told khanak while returning to mumbai in flight that he told about their relationship to dadi, rishabh, and akshay


sorry once again mani di
suchi

Originally posted by: suchi_245

hi pranjal,

sorry mani di for doing ur job but cant resist myself for doing this

pranjal shaan already told dadi about his and khanak's relationship while taking that dolphin pendent from her which shaan has also told khanak while returning to mumbai in flight that he told about their relationship to dadi, rishabh, and akshay


sorry once again mani di
suchi

Hey Thanks a Ton Suchi For clearifying this ... love u

As i know he has taken that pendent from Dadi but i dont recognise that he has already told dadi abt it. anyways i'll read that update again. thank u.

Love

Pranjal.

Mani di...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

wow... two updates woh b inni jaldi jaldi... BALLE BALLE

subah ka sapna...oops sapna nai haqiqat... woh b inna romantic...aaye haaye...😍

You have NO Idea how many times I have read these two parts !!!

pg 69 and 71 - cutest awesomest Nok Jhok Ever !! Bless them !

Will write moree soon ... Muaaah Manitaa !

mani di...