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Posted: 14 years ago
oye hoye kya baat hai 2 updates... thanks for finally updating it... loved both d updates... awsome... u r marvelous... superrrb work...
conti sooon...
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Edited by adeelakhokhar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Manita... i just loved it 😊

Their Ruthna Manana game is very interesting.. i m loving every bit of it 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mani di...🤗

*sigh*

Updates on 69 and 71 were two killer updates. You know what I love about you? the need to clarify things as fast as you can
When you were updating sad parts in the initial days you gave updates more than 2 in a day and almost everyday you updated till it returned to happy parts😃...when I read that these two fought in part 39 , I almost instinctively knew that the next update is pretty soon as I know how you hate leaving things on a sad note for the readers; and here we get part 40 , where they fight but are on a different plateau😆😆
love you di for that !

These two are extremely lovable budthals, they know that they love each other to the core, they know that they had been missing each other and they know that they can't fight for a long time, they have to make up as soon as possible--- why do they even try fighting yaar😆😆
I hate to see them fighting
I was upset at Khanak behaving like a kid; he is so sweet to her🤗
but I understand her POV -- he becomes insecure when he is away from her and she behaves like a kid wanting attention and love...he could have just hugged her and kissed her
and she would have been fine !!
Gosh, how do you come up with such instances👏👏...I was shocked at the dream which was so not😳😳.😆😆...it was hawt di.😳😳...in your own way😳...I love these subtle innocent interactions which are extremely sensuous and so not explicit ⭐️!
you excel there⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I really thought that he is dreaming; but it turned out to be a reality, and khanak wanted to see what he does with her in his dreams😳😳...gosh, she got scared with his advances and woke him up !!
Too good !!

Loved dadi, Madhavi, Jai and Rishabh

Their fight in the car was hilarious; they were fighting or what ?? that was too cute. he even said 'I love you' to her in between the fight...omggg...this guy is mine di, if Khanak doesn't want him !!
tell your other fans to back off !!

Khanak said that she is fasting for security guard because he takes cares of her chappals when she is inside the temple🤣🤣🤣...she is awesome 👍🏼
I love her witty replies; she always comes up with some unique dialogues that make him laugh out loud !! I am sure that after this Shaan will make sure that he takes care of all her belongings🤣🤣

loved loved loved both of them di
love you for giving trespro
As I told you before that it is my lifeline, I keep reading the older parts till you update next
so from a greedy soul
when next ? *runs away to avoid Khanak's chappals from outside the mandir*
update soon di

Nishi
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates😊..I loved the fight in th car which was very cute and hilarious😊 Jai and rshabh are well etched characters😊khanak is really bit childish well but yes have seen many girls behave like that with lovers and lovers like that too ..so accepted 😊
very good updates loved tehm😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suchi_245



hi pranjal,

sorry mani di for doing ur job but cant resist myself for doing this

pranjal shaan already told dadi about his and khanak's relationship while taking that dolphin pendent from her which shaan has also told khanak while returning to mumbai in flight that he told about their relationship to dadi, rishabh, and akshay


sorry once again mani di
suchi



Why are you sorry suchi😕😕😕.???...for loving it so much😳😳 !!!
Why did you think that I'll be upset...I am amazed that you remember it so well ⭐️!!!

I'm thrilled at the love you gave to Trespro🤗..🤗...


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Posted: 14 years ago
I am thankful to everyone who pressed like and left an awesome comment 😊😊😊!!!

I am also grateful to people who send beautiful pm's but don't comment or like here..😃😃...I understand girls and your interest in trespro is motivating !!!

I am updating 3 rd part in a row...it is small part as per my lengths😳...
I am writing these days as I am free for some time and updating faster as I might have to go on a long leave...to some remote posting !!

this update is dedicated to Vatty who is going away in a day !!!
Vats darling I know, I am late but nevertheless...hope you read it before you go !!!


Trespassers Prohibited
Part 41.





Removing the part 😊
Edited by -Manita- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yippeee!!!!!!!!!!!another update... hei mani, awesome 👏👏👏👏👏... wonderful update.. u took her dressing up for the evening alone as the main content..but it was delivered so beautifully.. i imagined the whole scenario.. khanak holding the pin between her luscious lips,shaan staring at her dumbfounded..she dropping the pin..he giving it to her confirming that it is not a dream..she continuing her dressing nervously..shaan enjoying..is this the task u gave vatty in her MOTW..no physical touch yet it was hottt..superb mani.. but kya re tum nahi janthi kya??khanak ki tarh humein bhi suspence pasan nahi hai... waiting for the reason that akshay gave shaan for asking them to hide the news abt them..do update soon.. love u..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Manita-



Why are you sorry suchi😕😕😕.???...for loving it so much😳😳 !!!
Why did you think that I'll be upset...I am amazed that you remember it so well ⭐️!!!

I'm thrilled at the love you gave to Trespro🤗..🤗...







🤗 Thanx di

how couldn't i remember anything about trespro as i had already read it n number of times , i already told u about it 😍

wow u updated another today , 😍 thank u so much , i will comment after reading it , 😳

how long u r going for ur posting ??????????😒


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suchi_245



🤗 Thanx di

how couldn't i remember anything about trespro as i had already read it n number of times , i already told u about it 😍

wow u updated another today , 😍 thank u so much , i will comment after reading it , 😳

how long u r going for ur posting ??????????😒




You know suchi...I knew that this will come from you when I wrote about the posting part 😉!!!

You are someone totally adorable🤗🤗🤗 !!

You start worrying about the end of TresPro after every update😊...I wanted to write that I want to end Trespro before I go but dreaded a nervous response from you !!

and I am not going now... but anytime in future, I might have to go...so I thought why not write and update when I have time now...

So, I am not going in recent future and not ending it now...Sit back and Chillax !!!! Enjoy swetheart !!!!

love

Mani
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Posted: 14 years ago

😳 😳 😳 wow this part is awesome and now i am confused to say which is the best ever part because i know their will be more ahead and every part is just going to be best

so this update is dedicated to khanak's dressing under the piercing eye of shaan ☺️ , definatly she would be emberrased ,, nothing less can be expected 😳

gr8 that her ma and papa had already left 😆

and when he move away to ease her , she didnt like and asked him with his eyes to come back again in his place ☺️

shaan came to stunned her but seeing her dressing himself got distracted and stunned 😛

loved the scene where he sat kneeling and watching her keenly 😍

i can actually imagined the whole scene , the way u describe the whole situation , Hats Off To u 👏

also loved the odhani holding and tugging 😳

their tesing to each other is 😍 just like a kids fighting and when he turn back holding gate she completed his line 🤣 ,awesome

like khanak i want to know the reason of why their brother asked them to keep it secret ,,,,,, oh i remember something can it because of akshay marriage first , may be 😉

lovely update
continue soon
suchi


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