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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it! that was really cute!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Manita-



You know suchi...I knew that this will come from you when I wrote about the posting part 😉!!!

You are someone totally adorable🤗🤗🤗 !!

You start worrying about the end of TresPro after every update😊...I wanted to write that I want to end Trespro before I go but dreaded a nervous response from you !!

and I am not going now... but anytime in future, I might have to go...so I thought why not write and update when I have time now...

So, I am not going in recent future and not ending it now...Sit back and Chillax !!!! Enjoy swetheart !!!!

love

Mani



🤗 thanx for writing that u r not ending it soon otherwise i would get a big shock before my result only 😆 which i m dreading it to come only , but you keep updating and really i dreaded after every update about its coming to an end because it is completely attached to my heart and brain ,,,,,,Damn it is a fiction but such a lovely which captivated my senses very much 😳

thanx for giving such an adorable couple and description of their love journey


Edited by suchi_245 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
mani mani mani mani mani
very very very sorry
read this d moment u updated but my stupid internet went off

damn damn damn damn damn...u killed me
widout them even not touching eachother...they spill FIRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wen he went behind her
i was so so so loosing it myself😆

it was sooo freaking hot n spicy i would say

thnk u sooo much fr this sexy update
its very long trsut me takes 20mins to read..lmao

thnk u n love uuu

jaldi jaldi update kihiye:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update Mani.. poor Khanak.. having all sorts of trouble b'coz of Shaan.. and as usual, u didnt reveal the reason.. too much.. hope we get an update soon abt the reason and she asking Sorry to him in front of others..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Manidi.. superb part n very well written
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Mani di,

Thanks a ton for updating... its like hamari diwali chal rahi hain aur app roz ek ek tohfa de rahi hain. so thank you so much & frankly bhale ap kuch bhi kahe par we all love guift's aur agar wo app de to phir to maze hi maze hain. 😊

The update was just awesome...sorry sorry sorry it was actually awesomeest. it was full of love, it was hot, it was passionate, it was romantic with no touching, no kissing no hugging. yet it was Romantic & passionate, decent, Magical and dynamic. Sorry i am at loss of words. but frankly only Trespro Couple can do it. 😍

Thank u for giving Full of Shanak update...as we were waiting for it since they reached Delhi. hey Khanak is so sweet she is getting ready for the Teej pooja. Di Special Wow for discribing Khanak's dress. the peacock blue lehenga, her bottle green blouse & her blue-green odhani...* sigh* i can campletely imagine it...😍 😍 ...U are Awesome in doing such detailing. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

So Khanak's mom dad has alraedy left for the party. & YES yiiipeee Shaan is here to receive her. loved your detailing on khanak wearing her odhani & those lines where Khanak is holding Safety pine carefully between her naturally pink lips. adjusting her pallu. Belive me Di that was magical. & the best part was Shaan was observing her. loved Your detailng on Khanak & Shaan's expression. Shaan is enjoying watching her ,...& Khanak getting Nurvous & blushing...loved ur discribtion on Khanak wearing her jewllery. & Specilly when she wore Payal ...that was awesome. i actually imagined the whole sinario. Shaan was troghout observing her ...baba re i can campletely imagine how Khanak must be felling. loveded Khanak's gestures when she told Shaan to stand near the mirror where he stood previously. & when Shaan tied her Odhani at her waist * dead*.👏 👏 👏 👏
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You are Amazing Di. Loved it when Shaan was leaving the room & Khanak repeated his words "And all this doesn't mean that you are fine………you are still upset with me, right?" 🤣 🤣 Amazing Di. Khanak is a real sweetheart.& hey finally Shaan knows the reasion why Jay & Akshay are asking them to keep quite. & he is abt to tell that to Khanak but you ended the part 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭... yaar hamne kya paap kiya hain jo hum wait kare?????. ... now to i want next part jaldi jaldi baba...warna apse Katti 😭 😭 😭 😭 ...humph.😡

Hey So now Jassi is back ... i thought she will not came back & her character ended but i guess now Jassi is back coz Hamaare Sameer babu jo padharne wale hain. aur ab Khanak & Shaan will play cupid to milao Sameer & Jassi. ( this is campletely my bakwass imagination & result of my vellapanti ...Sorry di). 😳 😳

Hey but i have one question that as Shaan said that Maa asked him to pick her up ...maltab shaan has already met savita maa or he is talking abt Madhavi. i am canfused coz Shaan address Madhavi as Mom & Savita as Maa. hey i am just asking as i wanted to know the reaction of Savita Maa on metting Shaan. 😃


Waiting for the Next update as Shaan is gonig to reveal the secert...& the party ...Khanak is going to say Sorry ... uff i cant wait...Plz Plz Plz Plz next update jaldi dena. 😍 😍

Thank u so much for the beautiful part ...👍🏼 "U Rock" 👍🏼

Love u

Pranjal.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey mani
Ur description was amazing
hoottt sensual and incredible☺️
looking forward for more romance

quickly update the next part

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Posted: 14 years ago
mani i dont have words to describe how i felt reading these two update dear all i wanna do is👏 .while i was reading these parts i had goosebumps dear .what a suttle way of romance hayeee deaddd and offf to heavennn mani .this two are like amazing .love there fights and loved the way each was trying to make other one realise that wht they had done was wrong .loveluy dear .the part where she goes to his room and he dreams of her being but finds outs that she actually .the way they share those light moments and telling that he hadnt forgiven her all was sweet .her convo with dadi and all the way she showed her the sarees and all she leaving both of them in the room and shaan with his besharami was giving her back wht she did in his room loved it .at the dinning room every one coming to know that she had kept fast for him .loved the way mad reacted to it that was really sweet of her and shaan walking without any expression hurting her felt bad abt it .mad asking shaan to drop at the temple and the convo in the car was too gud shaan asking that whether she is keeping the fast for him and all and taunting her agian by talking rishabs name .loved there sweet tussle there .amazing update indeed 👏👏👏

coming to this part .hayeee maar jawa i was off to my lala land reading it was blisss i could visualize the whole this it was so sensual but so sutlel . i dont have words to describe this part mani sry for it but all i wanna say is hatts of girl .there is no one how writes like u nd the way the words are put they just flow like the river u are a blessed writer dear plzzz take this profession seriously u are outstanding amazing kudos dear 👏

thanks so much for the back to back updates dear when i read ur reply that u are abt to go ur camp works and when u said that u were thinking of ending trespo. i was shocked to the core it was like dumping a stone on me plzzz dont do it plzzz i beg u catching my two hands plsss dont think of ending this lovely ff u have rarely come across ever in my life .i was so addiceted to it it became like a syrup now i cant live without its dose .plzzz dont get such thoughts ever like that we will love reading anything and every thing that u write .loads of love a good wishes.hope ur camps visit goes on smoothing and hope ur returns back safe and sound .and give us dasu updates back to back like this . i cant wait anylonger for ur update but plzzz dont end it plzzz 🤗🤗🤗🤗
Edited by jyothi1989 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mani di,
I'm dead...just dead !!

No touching at all
No hugging, no kissing, no holding
hands, no words spoken at all...

Yet so hawt, so sensual, so romantic...
Oooh these two are simply magical...
And the way you wrote it...hats off
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mani di
👏 👏 👏

I'm back, after reading the last update for more than 10 times !

Di, i was clean bowled the first time i read it. When you gave the os task to vatsalyta at motw, i thought that it was impossible and i told you that on pm
*kaan pakadti hu*
I underestimated you when u told me that these two don't need words or touches or kisses for romance, though i admit the way u write and not write the intimate parts thrills me.
Your characters are awesome di, so classy, so dignified
I love khanak for she is all for him, swooning, dreaming, fantasising still holds her front so strongly...like your Shaan says she is a typical wife material...taking care of him, crazy about him, still fights with him at the same time.
I love the lack of ego hassles between this couple. Whatever be the reason, if they fight, both are more than willing to make up...love for them is above everything.
Their togetherness is their strength and i m confident of their love n them n you...that they can never separate

Sorry for being sefish di and giving unrequired suggestion...plzz plz di, never separate them.

And what is this talk of ending it??
I got a shock when i read suchi, pranjal and jyothi almost begging you not to end it.
Consider me with them di, and i know many more will join us...we will read whatever you write but plz don't think of ending it
I keep reading the older updates till you update next one
It's my life now di...i'm addicted to it
Don't end it plzz
Loved loved loved loved the last update
The most sensual, most romantic, most sexy (sorry, had to write this), hottest update without them speaking a word or even the slightest touch
I'm zapped at how can someone write such a shanakilicious update without any touch/hug/ or kiss
This does not mean that you will stop giving us those awesome kisses...lol...

Love you di
Yiu are the beshtest...
Nishi

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