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Hey mani di,

Thanks a lot for updating……….

I am so sorry for the late reply as yesterday yahanke internet ne mujhe dokha de diya but read the update peacefully from ny cell. Aur abhi aake dekha to u updated another part Wow I love u for doing this. I am just cammenting on part 39 as I havnt read part 40 yet. 😳

First of all Beautiful piece of writing. Loved it. our lovely couple meeting after 38 days & both were extermly eager to meet each other & was looking forward to it. But things turned out differently. They both had a fight. Awww……………that's bad. 😭 😭 😭 Shaan wanted Khanak to work with him so that they can spand time together. & to appoint Khanak in Khandelwal Group he is ready to recommend her to BOD's.& this recommendation part somehow hurt Khanak's self respect. Shaan doesn't doubt her creditability but Khanaks anger & frustration don't allow her to understand that.

Loved the way u describe the atmosphere at the dining area. Right from the setting arrangement to Rishabh & Khanak's convo regarding khanak joining her office. U are Superb Di 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Khanak's questions Rishabh related to what Shaan said. & her taunting with each & every word( hey bahgwan this girl knows very well how to push his buttons on.) & Specially her Ziddh to prove her point & uspar Shaan's reaction ( as expacted Clam & quite) frankly yaar ye banda itna patience lata kaha se hain??? Mujhe bhi bata do taki main bhi har situation ko thode patience ke saath handel karna seekh jao. 😃

Shaan is such a sweet heart inspite of being angry with her he helps to clear the dishes. Khanak as usual regret her behavior& wanted shaan to stay back but Shaan leaves without saying buy to her. When I first read the update I actually hated Khanak for a while but after giving a thought I understand that she is extremely understanding & cooperative with others but when it cames to Shaan she immediately becames Kid. Coz Shaan always treat her like a princess & she is so used to his pampering that she always throws tantrams & unreasonable demands infrount of him. 😉

I must say Beautiful portrayal of emoitions of Shaan & Khanak & u called a Khanak a Little Monster. She is a baby & Shaan Hatsoff to him he has emmence self control 👏

I like Jay very much he is so understanding he sences the tension between the couple but decided to keep quite. He is super cool. 😊 loved ur way of describing Rishabh's thought process. Khanak thinks that Delhi is enemy of their being together. But as per my point of view ye RIshabh hi sabse badi Panauti hain coz jab bhi iski entry hoti hain ya to Shanak mein Ladaai hati hain ya to dono ekdusre se upset hote hain.

Kuch Karo Yaar Di Iska. 😡 😡

Shaan is super cute as inspite of being angry he calls her just to keep his promise that he will never stop communicating. Their convo was super cute. Loved Khanak's way of informing Shaan abt the TEEJ pooja & party. IS she going to Fast for Shaan???? Loved her innocence when she told Shaan that their no point in talking to Rishabh if he is not their to being jealous.

Waiting to see how they make up & I am lucky as I saw that u updated the next part as well. So I am sure I'll get all my answers their. So I'll be back after reading the next part. 😊

Love u.

Pranjal.

Originally posted by: RB81

hei mani, wonderful update.. wow!!!!really khanak went to his room..(but how does she know his room??has she come here earlier after they shifted to south delhi??)

Yes, Ramani...Shaan n his family shifted to south Delhi when he was nearly 14 years or so...they are family friends...have been visiting each others house... he has been frequent but she has been less frequent...mainly on festivals, functions etc...she knew his room :)

shaan thought it was his dream..so lovely hot reality..so u made khanak to make up for wat she did the prev day.. then khanak went to dadi..that was so sweet..already the elders r all set to welcome her..(sorry..i have a small doubt..is akshay married already??no time to look back now..so pls clarify now..later i'll go thru after my exam..)

Akshay is not married...but everyone in Shaan's family except his dad knows about ShaNak so they are ready to welcome her...but practically, they'll marry after Akshay !!

daadi n khanak r discussing abt daadi's sarees n jewels..shaan behaving as if she is not there.. one thing i loved..he removed his slippers when he sat on daadi's bed..should thank u for making this shaan do that which he doesn't do in show.

That is my own OCD rey😳...you'll find it everywhere in my FFs...taking slippers off before getting on bed...fastening seat belts...checking whether the car doors are locked and whether the car is parked properly...!!! I am finicky about a lot of things 😆!!

.khanak all set to manoafy shaan..but wants to tadpaofy khanak now..(now i want to kaan pakdaofy shaan..)and shaan asking her say sorry infront of everyone..(u used the same words that i felt..)he too felt that she insulted him..so in one way wat he asks for is ok..but she is doing all these na for him so he must forgive her..now i'm little biased towards khanak.. and khanak is fasting for him..so sweet of her..but shaan made fun of her..(*twists shaan's ears n ask him to take his words back..wat she did yesterday is wrong..but wat u r doing now is too bad shaan..ok..now both of u r on teasing n manoafying spree..so i let it go..*) waiting for the party..shaan saying her that he'll see it to it that she works with rishabh n khanak ready to apologise in front of both their families n rishabh..so i'm eagerly waiting for that.. love u mani..mmuuuaaahhh..a sweet update..khanak manaofying shaan is so cute..🤗

PS: does this mean another update tonight??"I am updating another part today !!!"

Nahin...this note was written before the update !!! so you already read that another - wala part😆

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Khanak's questions Rishabh related to what Shaan said. & her taunting with each & every word( hey bahgwan this girl knows very well how to push his buttons on.) & Specially her Ziddh to prove her point & uspar Shaan's reaction ( as expacted Clam & quite) frankly yaar ye banda itna patience lata kaha se hain??? Mujhe bhi bata do taki main bhi har situation ko thode patience ke saath handel karna seekh jao. 😃

Shaan is such a sweet heart inspite of being angry with her he helps to clear the dishes. Khanak as usual regret her behavior& wanted shaan to stay back but Shaan leaves without saying buy to her. When I first read the update I actually hated Khanak for a while but after giving a thought I understand that she is extremely understanding & cooperative with others but when it cames to Shaan she immediately becames Kid. Coz Shaan always treat her like a princess & she is so used to his pampering that she always throws tantrams & unreasonable demands infrount of him. 😉

I must say Beautiful portrayal of emoitions of Shaan & Khanak & u called a Khanak a Little Monster. She is a baby & Shaan Hatsoff to him he has emmence self control 👏

I like Jay very much he is so understanding he sences the tension between the couple but decided to keep quite. He is super cool. 😊 loved ur way of describing Rishabh's thought process. Khanak thinks that Delhi is enemy of their being together. But as per my point of view ye RIshabh hi sabse badi Panauti hain coz jab bhi iski entry hoti hain ya to Shanak mein Ladaai hati hain ya to dono ekdusre se upset hote hain.

Waiting to see how they make up & I am lucky as I saw that u updated the next part as well. So I am sure I'll get all my answers their. So I'll be back after reading the next part. 😊

Love u.

Pranjal.