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dishbhan

@dishbhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#511

Lovely update Maani!

Fight pehle hi din! But I guess thats their different way of loving, jhagda nahi karenge tho manayenge kaise ... vaise I think Khanak went overboard slightly, on one hand she said she wants it on merit, on other hand she does not want an interview.
An interview will be needed for directors to know her merit na ... I want to see how Shaan stops her from joining Rishabh's company ...

I would have loved if u would have ended at the party rather then leaving it hanging for us ...

PS: Shaan is so cool he did not forget his promise even after the fight and inspite of being angry at her. I love this Shaan, agar Khanak ko nahi chaihye tho mere pas bhej de boss ... ever ready to accept his love 😳 par woh Khanak ko bhula payega kya?

Already waiting for the next one

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 14 years ago

#512

hei mani,

thanks for updating..

y do these two fight like kids..

but here i'm biased towards shaan..

i didnt feel wat he said was wrong..he said abt the facts n the company protocols..he said that he'll ensure that she will be close to him..

but wat did she do?she almost promised rishabh that she'll join his company..n the way she questioned rishabh related to wat shaan said was like that she spoke to insult him..even though jai n rishabh doesn't know abt their little tiff..

but shaan has immense self control i should say..he didnt give up anything even though he was very angry..

after that she pleading him stay back with her eyes..kya faidha??itna kar diya..how could he stay back..

at night when he called she picked up his 3rd call n at that time too she was ready to fight with him..she was not in a position to think wat he said abt her picking his call..even though he cant be angry with her for a long time he wanted to be like that for now..

let me W&W(courtesy jess) how far their tiff goes..but i'll support shaan in this issue..hope they make up soon..it is not good to see them fight..the reason he gave to call her..very nice..even if they fight they wont stop communicating..wonderful..plsss...continue soon..

PS:i have an exam on tuesday so this chotu comment..it doesnt mean that i didnt like the part..but i'm angry with khanak for wat she did..so pretty please let them make up in the next update..

Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago

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khwaish

@khwaish_245

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Posted: 14 years ago

#513

🤗 Thanx for the update

lovely update

nice to see their love and then fight in the very next second 😉

in dono ke chakkar mein bichara rishabh buddhu ban raha hai 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

jab pyaar karna hota hai tab bhi usse use kiya to engage jai and now when they had to fight then also they r using rishabh and buddhu rishabh is thinking about possibility of their relation does it exist or not 😆, dude u dont know anything about these two burthals and what they r doing 🤣

loved jai very much ,and his thought about these two , that for him when they fought is normal and caring for each other is abnormal 😊 😊

shaan is so adorable, nice that he himself call even getting hurt by her to keep their treaty intact 😳

looking forward for teej and party ,may be something is in store ,😉 to gush

aur rishabh bhi hoga to aur maja ayega 😆 , bichare ki vaat lagne wali dono ke jagde mein 😳

now next update soon , dont tadpaofying us by giving these few details of party and teej 😊

love u
suchi

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#514

loved the update Manita Di!

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#515

oh god..they r like kids..i luvv them...

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khushi

@khush1432

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Posted: 14 years ago

#516

OMG... dis part is full of fighting Mani di woh after 38 days!!!!

still i love dis part!!!!

best lines are :

To see them fighting and arguing was something normal for Jai and to see them taking care of each other was rather abnormal…….

she was a little monster……wanting attention.

love

gunjan

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#517

Originally posted by: dishbhan
Lovely update Maani!

Fight pehle hi din! But I guess thats their different way of loving, jhagda nahi karenge tho manayenge kaise ... vaise I think Khanak went overboard slightly, on one hand she said she wants it on merit, on other hand she does not want an interview.

An interview will be needed for directors to know her merit na ... I want to see how Shaan stops her from joining Rishabh's company ...

I would have loved if u would have ended at the party rather then leaving it hanging for us ...

PS: Shaan is so cool he did not forget his promise even after the fight and inspite of being angry at her. I love this Shaan, agar Khanak ko nahi chaihye tho mere pas bhej de boss ... ever ready to accept his love 😳 par woh Khanak ko bhula payega kya?

Already waiting for the next one

Dish...she definitely went overboard...and she knows it...
@ Interview...she is fine with an interview but wants job on merit...but if someone has to recommend her for the job , then why the farce of interview??...is her point. She is straight forward...If she gives an interview, then it has to be genuine...otherwise what is the sense !!😊

Will post the party update soon...patience, my dear !!😊

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#518

The thanks yous for part 39 will come with part 40...😊

I am updating another part today !!!

Trespassers Prohibited
Part 40.

Removing the part 😊

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#519

lovely update Manita Di, loved the banter!

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karishma

@shanakyasharan

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#520

oye hoye maniji...kya kahu aapko😳😊

sunday ko apke ff ke darshan hue mera toh din hi ban gaaya:)

so finally ms khanak realises tht she made a stupid mistake n went up to say sorry...shes so cute. n shes fasting fr shaan...awww...im so gonna love how he breaks her fast.its gonna b sooo romantic:)

d dream cum reality was sooo hot!!!!!!!

man i love d way he nuzzles her neck n all...its such a turn on😆

loved it sooo much

good tht they fight n r resolving it soon...love yr shanak...cutie pies ek dum❤️😍

maniji..jaldi update kiya iska matlab nahi ki ab ek pura week humein tadpao fr d next update:)))))))))