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Jessica

@jparker

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#241

😍😍😍😍 hay.. haaiii... aayyy.... Kya baat hain...

Saaaz.... three days!!! Kitna tadpaate hain aap.....humaare bechaare shantanu ko... dhyaaameettt...

Jokes apart...

Love... the sweet ending so rum n raisinilicious... The tenderness of their relationship, so fresh yet so sweet.. memories are made like this and this one is joined in my memory.. of golden moments... so so beautifull..

She looks good in her white with colourful odhani... picture perfect. to his so Shaan like and childlike display of irritation and anger.. kicking a stone on the road...

Ufff....

I maintain my demand.. Stick to it staunchly.. You can still turn it into FF...

loved it so far saaazyy.. dhyameet.. Rum N Raisinilicious dream.. coming true....

👏👏👏👏

Wow.. VM is so good.. thanks to you too Smitha.......

Edited by jparker - 14 years ago

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priya

@priya_cool_123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#242

OMG !!!!

Brilliant it was !!!

Poor things >>> you thad paofied them for four days...

The finish couldn have been better... under the desk and with rums and raisins... totally Shanak....

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#243

My "detailed" update :P

k...dont kill me for this ..hehe....but the havaldaar sounded so much like you🤣

khanak's transition from irritation to reluctance to acceptance.Lovely. 😃

Phone convo was totally awwwiiiieeeeee!!

I have a thing for interwining of fingers....hehe....so that part obviously made me smile ever so broadly and blushingly 😳

Natty getting angry at Suraj🤣

How typical of khanak to say she is hungry in the middle of a romantic setting😆

And now thanks to you, I am never gonna eat kishmish w/o getting "thoughts". 🤣

This rum and raisin was very spicy rey!!

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand now,

I want the "kisses his miss" change to "kisses his mrs."😳

SO please please please continue this as FF Saaz di!!

P.S. you wanted her nailpaint to match the saree?😆

Edited by vatsalya - 14 years ago

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vaish_123

@vaish_123

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#244

Saaz,

Brilliant!

Got spicy Rum and Raisin😉

Kitna intezar kravayi Khanak ne Shaan ko!

Golden RBO ki yaad aayi! It is like a sweet dream.😍

Shaan in Checks shirt, White shirt -jeans Haaye!

Brilliant once again Saaz!👏

Smitha! VM is awesome.

Edited by rbofan1 - 14 years ago

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Jessica

@jparker

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#245

Smithaaa..... sigh what a VM.. so so good.. the timing perfect.. and the scenes.. sigh here I go to watch more golden RBO moments...

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Aap ko hum kya kahe..

Ab hum to hain deewaane..

Ke aapne lamhon ki hassen vaadiyon ka

Pyaara sa Guldasta hain pesh kiya...

Sigh this is what your VM leaves me like...😊😳

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#246

I know am on the verge of spamming but my video was buffering while I gave my detailed comments and I had to make a new post just for the VM 😳

Awesome job with the VM smitha di😳

Its been a real long time since I've heard this song so it added to the thrill!

I am compelled to pause it and then yt all the scenes you've incorporated....

Srsly, you two are the shaan-khanak of the update :D

Perfect.

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#247

it's awesum yaar saazy...luv u 4 this update....and thanks 4 this superb SS...

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#248

hei saaz,
thanks for the epilogue with shanak together that too with rum n raisin..expectations fulfilled..awesome work saaz..its not possible for me to see the VM now..will comment abt that after seeing..

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#249

loved the epilogue! great video Smitha!

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#250

Saaz darling

Part 5 was fantastic...hehehehe so I was wrong about Natasha...hehehe...loved her apiring off with Suraj...

And Dadi...she rocks man....lol

The clearing up of the whole misunderstanding.....beautifully and realistically done dear....loved it alot..and the whole Natasha Shaan part...sigh....perfect just like it was in RBO....

Best ...Khanak hanging up on Shaan...after hearing his voice by saying Wrong number....

EPILOGUE

Loved it to bits....I see tha you took my suggestion of the Desk seriously......lol...we did get them under a desk.....lol...loved that a lot....

Loved how you got him to come after her for all those days...the side glances the whole hide and seek perfectly depicted by you....loved the Auto suddenly being there.....lol..and the second time around her sticking out her tounge to him......lol so Khanak that and Kicking of the stone in fustration so Shaan that...lol

Oh did I say lovded the whole police touch....brought back memories of him telling them shes my wife to the thanedar and Khanak saying no its Suraj....lol....

Lovedd her getting all dressed up for her Submission ofcourse...loland him not being there and her missing him his presence and him missing being there because of his meetings and traffic.

Loved the whole Chaiwala touch and their talk....lol

Loved the phone convo immensely....lol

Loved him taking her to the ofice...for their date....

Loved the reaction of Shaan to Suraj wanting to kiss Natasha...and Khanaks loud Methajee and Natasha's reaction on hearing Khanak by Suraj....lol

Loved their laughing to gether and Khanak all hungry...

Loved them having their fav icecream under the Desk....

And loved loved loved the Kissmiss......*wink* alot...lol

And most of all love you and your wiriting dear....

Thank you for such a wonderful story dear.....👏👏👏

And Smitha darling what a wonderful VM...you turly are a genious dear...truly.....👏👏👏👏👏