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Just.Shanak

@Just.Shanak

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#271

I read all parts together today !!

this SS is simply awesome, the dialogues the setting and the ambience is so real

I loved the subtleness of it

Thanks saaaz, Keep writing

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#272

@Jess: Thank you so much re..am glad you liked the tadpofying ness...kya kare..had to get him to pay for what he did...albeit in a loving way.. @Priyacool: You are too cool re @Vat: Thanks dear..your comments (detailed and short) are truly appreciated @Vaishu: Thank you so much...you do realise in this SS, your comments were longer than in any other SS of mine Making an FF is out of question re..just don;t have the time anymore..

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destinylove

@destinylove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#273

@smitha

dear awesome song nice vm..very good scene selection and ediitng ...sorry I forgot to menton the vm part earlier😊it is rocking!!!!

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#274

@Roopa

MY GOD...to say my writing reminded you of a Hrishikesh Mukherjee film is something else re...I don;t know what to say except I am completely overwhelmed, and believe me it takes a lot to overwhelm me..I have always been extremely grateful and appreciative of all the love you guys have shown for my writing, but Roopa your comment on HM was something else, because I hold those films very high regard..My stories are forever inspired by Gulzar-RD music (the title and the narrative flows from a song I choose from the duo's collection), Golden RBO for my characters and somewhere in the back of mind, the plot and the style are inspired by movies that have a special place in my heart and HM are on top of that list..thanks for this comment..thank you..as for why did Khanak call Suraj 'mehtajee'...well, it was more of a joke than anything else..becos he was teased by everyone around him..

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#275

@Krishna...loved that yuo loved it all...your comments always make me extremely happy..of course the desk idea was completely from your comment...where else??? @May...haila...whaddyamean?? there was still something left to the imagination...yeh lo!!! @Smitha...my SS is nothing without your VM that adds that perfect touch to it...really nothing!!! thanks my dear

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-SYS-

@-SYS-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#276

Uff.

Did you even read the update?Very nice indeed!Hmph.

Okay commenting from memory tou please to be forgiving if I comment on something that isn't even there😃

Anywayyy

Loved the chase! Am a fan of girl-giving-too-sure-of-himself-boy-a-hard-time type stories so this was totally my type! Also made even more enjoyable because of the inspiration background😆

Loved the dialogues and thoughts-actually made me laugh out loud in places.

Liked how fate along with Khanak were conspiring against (not so)poor Shaan.

Small boy at chai wallas reminded me of myself🤓

Desk scene very cute.

And oh yeah-absolutely loved the Wright reference.Took me back to my obsession with Falling Water when I was first introduced to it by my cousin in 8th grade😊

My only bone of contention-she gave in too easily😃

I know i was one of the few(only?) people who liked where you ended it and didn't really want a written version of the proposal but this one was actually a cherry on top so Kudos!

And *hugs*

Smithee-The VM was as always perfect! You know what I love about your VMs tou not going to repeat myself.But yeah-you started with the hand moment we so love! I love you for that! It made me love it even more if possible! *hugsss*

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#277

@Ramani...Thank you so much dear..I do hope all your questions were answered.. @Zaara..Thanks re.. @Purvi...Thank you my dear @Simi-- Thanks as always..

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#278

That was a super cute Epilogue...

Hez sooo cute...He kept waiting for her everywhere till she decided to meet him...LOL...And she was soo embarassed seeing him waiting for her everday...LOL...😆

She thought he was taking her on a date...So excited she was,...And he brought her for work...Hahahaha...!

The sitting under the table with ice cream part was ADORABLEEE😳😳 !!! Loved it,...! Hahahaha ...Sooo cuteee !

And her leaving her mobile cover with the chaiwallah was too good...Mazza agaya...specially that he came to know about it...😆

When she said "Mehtajee" from under the table and Suraj said ..."Khanak" while kissing Natasha...Hahahaha...And these two monkeys were sitting under the table and laughing...Namoone...!😆😆😆

Lovely Epilogue !👏👏

SHANAK nahi...that ICE CREAM was the hero and heroine of this SS...SHANAK se zyada to the ice cream featured in the SS...Hahahaha !!😆😆😆😆

Luv,

Vandu

Edited by togepe30 - 14 years ago