Hey I had read this a few days back but............... on phone..................... at work !!
so couldn't comment then !!!
After that I kept forgetting to post the comment and however I wanted to it long this time ( I got a 'taana' last time..............a royal one, actually for posting short comment)
Anyways, this is the epilogue...........so long comment banta hai boss ( how long you comment on my FF is another story altogether.....😉😆.............We'll come to that later😆😆)
the Epilogue --⭐️.👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏...........what more can I say !!!
I loved the characterisation of Khanak ⭐️that you maintained in the whole SS.....she is a woman of substance.....knows what she does, what she thinks and what she wants !! Hats off !!
She doesn't allow strangers at home........hahahaha.........imagining Shaan hearing this from Nattie ....'strangers' !!
he does a typical 'romeo thing' to manao her......you captured the day 1, day 2 and their thoughts.....while waiting outside morning and evening so neatly !! Not even once it appeared frivolous !!
Chaiwala handing over the mobile cover was a nice touch......
Am happy for Suraj and Natasha....................*hugs for that*..........
And wow what an ending ......with rum and raisin as it had started on a sweet note so it ended !!!
missed daadi in epilogue.....koi nahi................We get chance to pester you for another SS
Hmmmm..................You sure you are not going to make it an FF ?????
Wow..............what a dream and how it came true !!!!
Beautiful saaaz.......................take a bow !!
VM --
Smithee......................*hugs*.............another beautiful VM, with awesome scene selection !!!
seeing the time constraint you had, it doesn't become evident anywhere in the VM that you had less time in hand to make it......the quality never slips even for a moment !!!
Thanks for this one, you are truly the best !!!👏⭐️👏
Edited by -Manita- - 14 years ago
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