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priya

@priya_cool_123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Manita.....

There are a few stories which captivate you the first time you read it... this is one of them for me... I loved the enitire plot... It s hatke....

@ this update : i was actually thinking of how things will proceed in ur story after reading the last one.. but didn expect this twist... childhood friends....thats cute......now there is a suspense element to the story of why shaan is like this......

beaach.... I am waiting for it,, Bring it on.....

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manjiri

@m4manju

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+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#72

that was so sweet hw the saduu(till now) was concerned abt khanak and she too felt the same...loved it... 😳

@khanak calling insurance ppl smart gal 😆 loved shanak car convo..... uff khanak's attitude....but loved her that way...and lol @ calling her at 3 am....ahem coffee? and ahem @id card too 😆 i cld totally relate hw khanak felt @ the dress... 😊

ok now m so excited for the drive...the early morning drive sounds so romantic di...lovely idea 😳(of u and shan 😆)

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Amritha

@OlicityFan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

love u mani di!!!!!!!!1.......

shaan is soo nyc.....love him!...

shanak at the beach??...hmm...

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

oh god faint so sweet it was di loved it..........................burthal khanak and her dress ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh love shaan cocern ....................it was gr8 and smile thing was best

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Shaz

@_shizzzyy_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Manita just finished reading all ur parts...this was amazing!!!!

loved how shaan is so concerned for khanak. and loving there characters..shaan the angry boss and khanak being and independent women ad working w/ shaan!

can't wait for the next part!

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

hei manita,
update was sooo shanak..thanks for tat..never xpected shaan n khanak 2 b childhood buddies..tat was really a very good twist...loved tat..wat was d only other situation where they were close?waiting for tat flashback..only ppl who love n care for each other can always fight like this..so knowingly r unknowingly they love each other?shaan asking her for coffee at 3 am, id card, her hot n sensuous dress....lets c...will something spl happen during their ride?ok waiting for ur next update..thanks u kept ur promise n gav a weekend treat...😃
luv,
ramani

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destinylove

@destinylove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Thanx for the update manita This ws superb......

loved shantnau competley getting woried aobut khanak and change iin his attitude to one of concern 😃

khanak' short dress part was so cute😃

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

2 awesum yaar..pls continue soon....

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Manita brilliant it's true we expected a showdown but shaans concern was too strong and khanak in the shock of nit arguing begins to argue lmao. Ooh so bachpan main kya Baat hui thi mayb shaans like Ross n always liked his sisters bbf, but never admitted to it, the watchmen scene was funny and how she becomes all conscious of her attire. Can't wait fir part 2 tomorrow Xx

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#80

hi manita................

loved the update..............its awesome n amazing too............

khanak scared of shantanu n not of accident...............n when she tells him this he is kind of shocked............loved the concern of shaan for khanak...........😆 he tells lie about her id ........it was him.............khanak was covering her legs with the stole.............😆 i want to know more about their childhood............

u r amazing writer ...................

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