FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Absolutely LOVED the part !!

Very cute !!! I think Shaan really likes her but sum misunderstanding has happened between them or maybe hez scared to admit his feelings !

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Whoa ... Shaan & Khanak childhood friends ??????
This was totallly unexpected !!!!!!

Loved to seee a softer Shantanu .... Some incidents do bring out the change. ....

Great update Mani .. Do continue sooon ...

Beach Update ... So excited !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
Thanks a lot everyone....

@ priya cool......so you maintained your 'always the first' status again....thanks for comments !! saw ur tamil VMs.....they are awesome.....will comment there too...was running between procedures when I saw it !!

@ manju......thanks darling. loved your comments !!

@ ammu..... thanks dear for the prompt response !!....and I love you too ....

@ ankita....thanks sweets !!

@ ShanakMeet4lyfe.....glad that you read that all the parts together and thanks for loving it !! love your beautiful VMs....

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@ silent readers.......Thanks a lot and if you are short of time and can't comment, at least press 'like' as it tells me how many ppl read it and enhances my confidence.....
thanks a ton to all those who pressed 'like'......

@ All --- Beach update -- Tonite !!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
lol... mani.. i came running to see if u ve posted already... so beach date aaj hoga... thanks yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
So cute Maniiii!! Everybody's drunk except shantanu, even the watchmen!! Hahah!! I like this nok jhonk!!.just awesome!!:))
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
manita it ws a mind blowing update nw i cnt wait 2 read wt hpns in d next part so pls continue soon & jus check ur pm inbox
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
Hey friends....
Had gone out today......just came in and logged in here.....
thanks to all those who I had missed previously and who commented after my post....
@ simi -- thanks darling.....lol at everybody drunk😆...........both Shaan and Khanak are not drunk btw...

@ shiksha....thanks a lot dear.....have checked my pm box.....your funda was too cute....but I had not thought of that.....😛.......but so cute of you to have told that !!

@ All -- will update in a while !!


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow.. how did I miss this one!!
Absolutely fascinating!!!👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
A million thanks for the encouragement I received for Trespassers Prohibited...
and thanks Hina {.-BalleBalle-.} for letting me use her siggies...
Love you all --

Story till now...
Part 1 - Shantanu is the strict boss whom Khanak continuously irritates. She comes late for the meeting and accidentally gets 'Tom and Jerry' played instead of her presentation.
Part 2 - Her presentation is however appreciated but she corners Shantanu for staring at her. They end up at a negative note. she goes with her friends to a disc, and while returning back, meets with an accident. When asked about family, she gives the cops Shantanu's number. The cops call him and he immediately confirms that she is right and rushes to the spot.
Part 3 -- Shaan comes to pick up Khanak and is worried for her but Khanak is shocked at his concern and argues with him instead. They reach her building and find the gates locked. To pass time, he suggests that they go for a drive and they go to Juhu beach !!
Part 4 - follows -- didn't get time to do corrections and proof read...kindly ignore the mistakes ...

Trespassers Prohibited
Part 4




I am taking down the part --

Will soon write a gist that helps to understand the story 😊


All those who want to read the updates after part 4...can pm me...
I'll give you the link from where you can read all the parts of TresPro😊

EDIT : Dated 10.08.11
IMPORTANT NOTE ...


I had taken down parts 4 till part 34 from the forum due to several reasons and had them updated on my blog...you can google it by the same name or wait for some time...I have been receiving numerous pm's and to respect the readers... I will start putting back all the removed parts from tonight !!
Part 35 onwards till part 50 : Finale is on thread 2 of TresPro !!
Edited by -Manita- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
awsome manita di loved it ru sure ur doc.......................u really good loved it👏👏👏👏👏

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