FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 10

Ooohh.. wow manita!!

love this story Manita thanks for updating!😃

early morning date...or beach walk whatever u call loved it 😳 loved hw khanak talked her heart out...

Thanks a lot for responding all.....
would reply to all individually later.....sorry for updating at a late hour....

Wow manita so they are attracted to one another and what happened in the pass and why does that burthal keep pushing khanak away and what mistake. See I have sooo many questions and gripped, can't wait until next week x

hey manita

gosh... what a wonderful piece of writing... i m loving shaan and khanak s avatar... and their flight of emotions......

ROFL..........I loved the last part....!

Thanks to all the readers and ppl who liked and commented.............I am overwhelmed with the response and the pm's I received after this FF.....
love you guys for the encouragement.......😳.......

Originally posted by: krock

awsome manita di loved it ru sure ur doc.......................u really good loved it👏

thanks Ankita.....
@ blue -- unfortunately yes😳😆

@ Jessica - thanks for reading and the beautiful response.....loved ur pm....thanks !!

@ adventure_gurl.....thank you so much sonali.....!!

Originally posted by: m4manju

early morning date...or beach walk whatever u call loved it 😳 loved hw khanak talked her heart out...

lol @ "stunned like a small school kid in front of a strict teacher." i imagined him exactly same there 😆 wonder what makes shan to behave like this with her...saduu kahin ka😡 😆 and u knw it reminded me of ....ahem abhay 😆and @the promise abt paying back-shanak se jyaada m not gonna forget it😉 😆 hope saduu behaves well soon 😆 nice update di 😊

thanks a lot manju darling.....@ bold - don't call him saduu😡..can't you see how concerned he is😆
@ blue -- what???😲😲.....abhay😲😲😡......what I am going to do now is go back and read all 4 parts again and will soon come up with a supplementary update with necessary amendments😆😆
@ red - he will.....he has to 😉😆

Originally posted by: rafia 24

Wow manita so they are attracted to one another and what happened in the pass and why does that burthal keep pushing khanak away and what mistake. See I have sooo many questions and gripped, can't wait until next week x

thanks rafia....thanks for asking so many questions.....it shows that u didn't sleep through it😆
btw.....I love people stuck with questions......!😉

@ Naveen - thanks a lot dear !!

@ angel_9 - thanks a ton sweets !!

@ priya cool - thank you darling for using those awesome and kind words......I'll try to keep you hooked !!😳😆

Originally posted by: togepe30

ROFL..........I loved the last part....!

Does Shaan refusing to come close to Khanak have sumthing to do with Khanak's dad?

ROFL......Vandu.......I am still laughing at your guess😳😆😆......
so you think it is 1970s Rajesh Khanna -Sharmila Tagore type of love story where the hero gets scared of heroine's dad........🤣.........Hailaaaaaaaaa..................na rey pushpaaaa !!
I am trying to write a little more interesting than this............😳😳😆

Hi Manita
Awesome update loved it