FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 11

'alone?'....hahahah..tht was good!..

Manitaa ...Whoaaa !!!!
Shaan's character is so secretive ...... But loved this different characterisation !!!!

Alone - That one word ... what an end to the conversation ... Guts toh manna padega ...

Update sooooon .... Wanna know the reason for Shaan's guarded behaviour ....

Is Khanak's dad behind Shaan's behaviour ???

manita dis update was an answer to the relationship between shaan & khanak bt i thnk der r still lot f thngs 2 b revealed abt der past & about shaan so pls continue soon & i luvd dis part & cn u pls pm me if possible & next saturday s a long time pls update soon if possible

Originally posted by: -Manita-

ROFL......Vandu.......I am still laughing at your guess😳😆😆......
so you think it is 1970s Rajesh Khanna -Sharmila Tagore type of love story where the hero gets scared of heroine's dad........🤣.........Hailaaaaaaaaa..................na rey pushpaaaa !!
I am trying to write a little more interesting than this............😳😳😆

hei manita,
tat was a wonderful update..very eager to know y shaan shuts himself from khanak?hope u'll giv tat reason very soon..and wat did they both do earlier when they were very attracted to each other?expecting saturday to come soon..awesome updates..loved their convo in beech..

Originally posted by: togepe30

I connected Shaan to Khanak's dad coz..... -

1. U havent mentioned her dad...U just said Shaan is close to Khanak's mom and bro.

2.Shaan told Khanak she will regret knowing the reason for his aloofness.

3.Me thinks if Khanak's dad is "dead" then it might be sumthing to do with Shaan or his parents....ya aisa kuch !! Warna what else cud affect Khanak that deeply...! That is provided that her dad is "dead"😆

Just a guess !!😆

Awesome rey......just checked in and saw this......rushing out and am in a hurry so a quick reply to Vandu.....will thank others in detail later.....

@ Vandu.......your guess is quite impressive and interesting but it is not so.......It is not a sort of story that would involve death of characters.......

Did it give an impression that you said above......then I have to re-look.....must be my poor English....
I am clarifying 2 sentences that you mentioned above......

1. Khanak is not affected deeply......Shaan is.....she told him that help her deal with 'his' issues....she wants to help him.......he is pining......and she is actually happy go lucky.....!!
quote in FF -"Help me do it Shaan, you will never be able to deal with your issues on your own. You are such a loner when something affects you deeply. "

2. He didn't say that she would regret if she knows the reason......he said he promises her that she repents intruding in his life, he is warning her rey.........he is so strongly against letting her close.......She is the trespasser in his life who is prohibited entry in his territory....
quote in FF -
"Then I will definitely find it out on my own, I promise you."

"And you will repent hard if you do that'''that, I promise you."

And Khanak's father is not dead.....he is very much alive.....she has told him that he talks to his dad. mom and bro often.....he is more close to her mom and bro, though......but respects her dad and is close to him too......

Hailaaaa...........I should reconsider 'writing ' as such😳😳😳😆.......I think I am the only one who had to explain what she wrote.....😆

PS -- thank you all.....will come back later to thank the rest !!😳

Originally posted by: -Manita-

1. Khanak is not affected deeply......Shaan is.....she told him that help her deal with 'his' issues....she wants to help him.......he is pining......and she is actually happy go lucky.....!!
quote in FF -"Help me do it Shaan, you will never be able to deal with your issues on your own. You are such a loner when something affects you deeply. "

Thanks a lot to all those who liked and responded.....love you all !!

Please ignore my poor / awkward and weird sense of humour which sometimes goes beyond the normal levels of comprehension and intellect....😆.....
if any of my post hurt someone....yours truly apologises !!!

I might miss responding to someone as I am here only on weekends due to other commitments....will appreciate if creative writers and VM makers pm their works.....will see them on weekends otherwise I tend to miss a lot of posts.....

@ Krithika - thanks a lot dear !! welcome to the forum !

@ Ammu - thanks darling !!

@ Shalini - thanks a lot dear.....btw, you are the third person who has guessed Khanak's dad to be the reason behind Shaan's behaviour.....Vandu too said the same....*may be gr8 minds think alike*......
but no darling he is not the one and he loves Shaan like his own son !!

@ shiksha - thanks a lot sweetie !! I generally do not pm people if I update....too much work and I am so lazy😳😆.......I will be updating on saturday.....will try to pm you....!!

@ vandu - loved the discussion we had about Khanak's dad and Shaan.....will try to be more clear and will keep this in mind that some sentences can confuse the reader !! loved the response !

@ Deepali - thanks a lot dear !!

Manita darling...*muwah* love you dear *hugs*