FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 12

Originally posted by: kubare

Manita darling...*muwah* love you dear *hugs*

Read both the parts on the days you posted them...pressed like but could not comment due to slow net, my babies etc....

Girl you truly are a brilliant writer👏👏👏...you know that nah....The best thing about your writing is that each character has depth to him/her...Loved your Khaank just like the Khank we love straight forward, to the point...does not beat around the bushes but somes straight to the point and wants to tackle any issue head on....

Loved Shantanu just like our burthal Shaan a loner...can't be open about his feelings his thoughts...needs alot of push...but caring sensitive all rolled up in one...sigh...

Love the whole mysterys surrounding them....can't wait to see what happens next between these two...as knowing Khanak..she wont back down till she finds out whats bothering him....lol...so Khanak in that...

I'm Loving It!!!!!😆😆

@ Krishna .....dear have I told you before how much I love you ?
But I do...........
I had seen ur 'like' and knew that u have read them.....knew that u might be busy and couldn't comment.......
after all the commitments and 2 darling daughters......you took out time for commenting .....Hats off to you !!
love you so much.....thanks a lot !!

Originally posted by: krock

plz mani di kuch clue to do plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz thoda sa plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz accha next part main kya hoga wo to bato thoda sa plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😭

I'm loving it !!!😳
😳saturday thoda duur hai baccha😆........can't give clue today !!.........you all will come up with athe full story before me.....😆😆😆😆......
and by the way.....why do you all want to know everything so soon......do you want it to end soon???

one thing I can tell - next week I won't be telling of secrets......they will come out after few more updates......but Shanak will be there in all the updates !!

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Originally posted by: krock

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par saturday bahut dur hain😆par shanak romance hoga na oh dam di why u write so well😆

omggg......I said Shanak will be there in all the updates.........when did I say about romance rey😆😆
last update they have pledged to stay away -- remember ??

Originally posted by: -Manita-

omggg......I said Shanak will be there in all the updates.........when did I say about romance rey😆😆
last update they have pledged to stay away -- remember ??

Originally posted by: krock

god u really bad...........................bacharo ko dur rak rahi ho................................apne lededged bhale li ho but u knw wo tutne main tim kitna lagta hain but koi baat nahi itll still be interesting.......................or jaha shanak waha romance but koi baat nahi is baat ka harjana appko baad main dena hoga with lots of romantic scen ha......................oh god i cant wait😳

at least this much I can promise that you won't complain....😳😳😆😆...

😃hey mani......

haila Mani...finally caught up...sorry re...for being a late kate....

I'm so happy that I came across this today because it has really interesting concept and at the beginning you didn't reveal anything but gradually things are unfolding like shaan and khanak being childhoo friends but something happened that broke this friendship and shaan being cold towards her and she's engaged hmm it's obvious that shaan has feelings for her but he hides it and says that it was mere attraction and ooh the story if what happened between them was intriguing you've go me hooked anyways great update and ff can't wait for Saturday 😊