FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 13

keep it up👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Sorry Manita😳.....I am reading this and you doing a fabulous job👏.....Just haven't had a chance to post and I always forget to😳....Interesting story and I like how the background has been revealed slowly👍🏼......

thanking all those who commented after my post --
and thanking the silent readers too...

@ roshani - thanks dear....you can lyk and comment whenever u come online !!😃

Originally posted by: saaaz

haila Mani...finally caught up...sorry re...for being a late kate....

loving your FF..really and the latest update....I LOVE IT when writers put their titles of their stories into conversations between protaganists...its like giving away and yet making the reader feel...gosh we are on the same page

am really liking the way you are unfolding this...update soon

I may arrive late...but arrive I shall...and here;s hoping latecomers are not prohibited....to your story AND in your story..😉

BTW...could you provide an index on the first page...would make latecomers so much easier...please!!!😛

@ saaaz - lets not get into sorry's dear....😆....i should be writing the most...😳...
thanks for liking it........makes me feel nervous...😆....
and NO......latecomers are not prohibited......anywhere in my FF and in my story !! read at your own pace and as per time .....
I have an index on first page....plz let me know if it needs to be redone.....or improved....

@ shamima - thanks a lot dear !!😊

@ sayni - thank you so much !!😊

@ cadbery -- thanks a lot !😊

Originally posted by: The_May_Rose

Sorry Manita😳.....I am reading this and you doing a fabulous job👏.....Just haven't had a chance to post and I always forget to😳....Interesting story and I like how the background has been revealed slowly👍🏼......

@ May.....plz don't say sorry.....Thanks for posting....glad that you liked it !!

@ All - thanks for the awesome response..........!!

Manitaa - Are you updating ???

Please say yes !!!

Originally posted by: -Manita-

YES !!

OMG... reallly .. Awwwww ... Great Great Greatttttttttttttttttttt !!!

Hey Manita!!!

Originally posted by: simiv

Hey Manita!!!

What an update!! Wow is not the word!! Loved the Bold Khanak and the silent, secretive yet strong Shaan!! Eagerly waiting for yr next...:)

Thanks a lot Simi.....will be updating in an half an hour !!

omg.. ru really updating now...

I had thought of updating on Saturday but as it was my off yesterday so I wrote a part...
updating part 5...
thanks a lot for reading and appreciating parts 1 - 4...( links on page 1)
Thanks Hina for her awesome siggies...

story till now -
Part 1 - Shantanu is the strict boss whom Khanak continuously irritates. She comes late for the meeting and accidentally gets 'Tom and Jerry' played instead of her presentation.
Part 2 - Her presentation is however appreciated but she corners Shantanu for staring at her. They end up at a negative note. She goes with her friends to a disc, and while returning back, meets with an accident. When asked about family, she gives the cops Shantanu's number. The cops call him and he immediately confirms that she is right and rushes to the spot.
Part 3 -- Shaan comes to pick up Khanak and is worried for her but Khanak is shocked at his concern and argues with him instead. They reach her building and find the gates locked. To pass time, he suggests that they go for a drive and they go to Juhu beach !!
Part 4 - At the beach, they talk and accept that they are attracted to each other, though only physically ...and they should stay away from each other because it is the best for everybody. They make a truce treaty that says that she will not interfere in his life and he will behave nicely with her. But again she asks personal questions, and he tells her to mind her own business !!
Part 5 ...follows...

Amazing mani...