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Posted: 13 years ago
update is really sad...i really felt sad for khanak...how can shaan do this...u have written it very beautifull...waiting for next update...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved every bit of it
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Posted: 13 years ago
For you I read this and for you I read the depressing pain ShaNak are going through...
Gripping Shilli👏...Well thought out and written...I'll have to read the next part now😳...
Please don't torture us for too long...
Or atleast tell me how many parts I will have to wait, till the happy couple are back together😳...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Dear

Thanks for the update :) This was a shocking part :(

The Dadaji is the worst man I have ever seen '''.he is an absolute ***** Sorry for this but this made me really angry :( a well educated family is suppoting a criminal & does such mistakes than what can we expect from illitrate people :( this is soo sad.

How could shaan do this yaar :( I know he was worried for khanak but He actually Didn't read papers before signing :( & declaired his own wife a mental patient unknowingly :( I am sooo disappointed at shaan :( He didn't cared abt his wife he just cared abt vohras reputation :( I agree they broke his trust he was not informed abt the media presence at the court. But still I am irriatted at him. He should have spoke something yaar :(

I really felt bad for khanak she was all in spirits & was sooo sure that after today she will be leaving her life peacefully with her hubby. But her all dreams were broken by her own hubby. The person she was meeting as a friend was treating her & sh edidnt had a hint of it, Shaan handed her personal diary to them :( This is damn irritating.

Poor girl is suffering as she just stood by the truth & wanted justice for little Kid & his family but no one understood her. even her hubby failed to support her :( I felt sooo bad for her :( But frankly beautifully written ,,,,,,,,,Specially the court case & the whole sence there. Perfect Dear it didn't accur dramatic '.*thumbs up* loved your writing but please dear continue soon ,,,don't take a moth long gaoe for the update

Poor khanak is shocked & she left the court room ''.Now I got my Answer why they are seprated :( so now one more update & than present naa ??? cant wait to see the Cutie pie of this FF.

Waiting for the update ,,,,,,,,,,,Please please please pleaseee continue soon

Take care
Pranjal.

Ps : Extremly sorry if i hury you by my comments but i coudnt cantrol my anger after reading it. Poor girl is suffering soo much :( *tch* this is just not done, sorry if i wrote anything wrong. Apologize if i hurt you 😳

Edited by -pranjal- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing part. The way Shaan was caught in a web of lies & deception. The way Khanak starts on a positive note & in the end gets to know that she got cheated. wow.. superbly put. Im jus enjoying each & every part of this story.
Please update soon. Can't wait what happens next.
Thanks for the update.
cheers,
Priya P
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Posted: 13 years ago
HEY DEAR ,😊

beautifully written the whole scene with so much of pain and suffering , its like we are actually visualizing the whole thing in front of us 👏

but i m really very much angry for what shaan did with her 😭


y didn't he read the papers before signing ?? he is so dumb actually and for that only people like vohras are taking his advantage 😒

😒he is such a puppet in front of them ...and that so called dadaji , can i kill him right now ?? 😡

poor khanak was declared mentally sick and the main culprit is living his life leisurously 😲 ,
court scene was again described nicely 👏

i liked when she says thanks and just left ... previously i want to know about their separation but now after knowing the facts , i really dont want her to go back to him , the person who cant keep his wife's dignity , what else can we expect from him and i really wish that he didnt get to know about ' Aan ' too , he just dont deserved them , he should go back to his family and vohras and serve for them through out.

P.S. sorry ! if said something wrong 😊

waiting for next part , plsss update soon , i want to know whether shaan gets a tight slap from her or not before she leave or not 😛 😉

update sooonnn

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sharon18

Shili😊

The update was sad but it was lovely...
The way you have written it is very realistic😊
Ok I cannot blame neither Shaan nor Khanak here I would blame the circumstance and also a set of people who refuses to stick to truth and justice...but their deeds affected the life of two souls who find life meaningless without the other...its very sad but such things do happen ...
I hope Shaan's sister is saved from this crook and I really hope that somehow the truth is revealed...😊
I really hope they reunite pretty soon ...Aan needs both of them and not only that even they need each other😊
Shilli it was fab👏
U better update next part soon otherwise ul have to face some crazy consequences😆


Thank u so much for d calling d update realistic. It actually means a lot. 😊
hmm..yaa, both Shanak are victim of circumstances n lets c whats in store for Shan's sister. 😉


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: heer_85

Really shilli the update was very sad but lovely

Shaan thought it's just a signature n all will be fine but
it wasn't
they betray him n call all d media to cover it
poor Khanak, she didn expect all this
feeling very bad for her
update soon shilli n please jaldi jaldi yeah sad part khatam karo
or shanak n Aan ko pass leoa
update soon


Yes!!

Poor Shan was actually betrayed and Khanak had to bear d consequence.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey shilli cnt tell u hw much i loved dis update...fabulous yaar...👏👏👏👏
i cnt wait fr nxt part..u better update soon...😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Good work 👍🏼

loved it a lot

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