SS~~Maaf kardo khanak- Update FINAL part pg10 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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*sigh* Rafia it was Fantastic yaar! OMG i loved the apology i'm still sighing! Shaan's dialogues were spot on! made ME cry toh khanak ka kya haal hua hoga! :( Such a nice emotional touch! and Just abheee abhee i wrote in that CVs thread how i would like to see Shaaan cry! LOL! and now i read this! LOL
Loved the bacha convo between them LOL! Khanak khud buhat bari burthal hain! i've said it again and again her dreams are messed up LOL
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Posted: 14 years ago
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rafs 🤗🤗brilliant brilliant ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rafia....truly fab....thanks so much for the PM...you really have a way with your lines...very nice
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rafia darling.....wow....you truly are talented dear...beautifully written and loved it....read all teh parts in one go.....loved how you got Anand innvoleved..how he got Shaan to think and loved Shanak meeting at the temple their talk....lovely...
Now can't wait for the next part...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg rain that was awesome..
it had it all ... the confession.. the nok jok.......
i loved it....
waiting for the next one.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey rain thanx for the pm loved anand getting involved and ShaNka meeting at the temple
and their convo superb😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Raffffi 🤗

Loved it! Shaan crying should be so endearing to watch 😆 It will be like a balm to me, I sound so harsh. but he NEEDS to GROW UP!

It's amazingly written...all mixture of romance,emotional and heart-warming. 😳 Khanak is such a sweetheart, loved her ranting at the end.

is there a epilogue to it?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great update Rafia.....Loved the whole mandir scenario, exactly what ShaNak need to talk about and deal with👍🏼....Very well written too 👏⭐️.....

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey that was really awesome!
read all the parts together and it was really really great!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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'@ all Thanks for liking it esp part 3 as i was really apprehensive and unsure if it turned it ok
@ sonali- thank you im glad u liked it
@ angel- thanks for liking it
@ bona - thanks hun🤗
@ saaz thanks for appreciating the lines i did try but im still not as good as others with words
@ vandu not sure if it was maazedar but thanks for thinking it ws im hoping the next part is
@ manita thanks and thank you for highlighting the line you liked the most appreciate it when someone appreciates ur work
@ simi thank you is not enough lol
@beeni- arey hun im glad u liked it and felt it was emotional i was aiming for that but wasnt sure if i pulled it off, and lol at the bacha convo i too want something like that in the show and mayb we will have one esp after yesterdays epi and the hijra saying khanak would be a mother within a year
@ karishma- thanks, i love anand thats why i had to show he had a big part in bringing them together but ultimately shaan had to work it out for himself
@ priya thanks and im glad u felt it had it all
@ shriya- thank you for all your comments
@ saira lmao i knew u would love seeing shaan cry, hun im not that good but thanks and theres no epilogue but there is one final part- date in dhulwadi hope ull like it
@ hinna- yo blad u still aint commented now i expect a long ass comment from u one for each part as punishment 😆
@ may thanks i always sime reading your comments means a lot
@ noorya- thank you for reading it all and liking it, i try hopefully the last part isnt a dissapointment
ok last part should be updated later on tonight still tweaking it'll be all shanak called a date in dhulwadi xxx

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