SS~~Maaf kardo khanak- Update FINAL part pg10

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Urooj

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

bilkul bawali hai tu..🤣🤣🤣

reserved for now...

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saaaz

@saaaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

hmmm...kya baat hai...keep writing rafia...very nice!!!

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Simi

@simikr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Good going Rafia!!😃

Very nice indeed!! I have already told you that you are an awesome writer and you do have great insight!!😃 Waiting excitedly for Part 3.

Love, Simi

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dtu

@sampar

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Rain 👏👏👏....superb hai yaar.......sorry i didn comment on the first part .....but its really really good .....loved the towel wala scene ......superb....anand (bless him ) angel in disguise .......part two was steamy hot 😳😳😳.....baby scene was cute .....awesome ....hai kya keren is burthal shaan ka ....sach main he is a burthal...... hope ki use apni galti samj main ai jaye.....

i m loving it yaar.....soo continue soon 😃

cheers 😉

shai

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priya

@priya_cool_123

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

very well written.. pls continue

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Hi Rafia........

read the ss in one go loved it..............

u r awesome writer continue soon...............

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

@ saaz, an shanakyasharan (sorry I don't know your name) thank you I'm glad you liked it
@ rooj,simi, and angel thanks for the encouragement and liking it I really don't consider myself a good writer so you guys thinking I am is a major boost to my confidence
@ priya thanks Hun next part might take awhile as I have no idea what I'm writing yet lol

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Sairaaaa

@Sairaaaa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Rafffiii 🤗

Already I'm asking for the 3rd part ;-)

It was so good, loved it and the baby peed on Shaan 🤣 Totally deserves it!

Only one wish that Khanak did not kiss him back, I know they're been not together for soooo long BUT he deserves it! burthal kahi ka!
But oh well the ending made up when she didn't go any further, hopefully Khanak will play hard-to-get-now! 😆😆

I'm sounding so mean! 😈...😆 Loved it and I'm 100% sure Rafi, soon enough you will get in the writers job,seems like everyone is loving it!

xx