SS~~Maaf kardo khanak- Update FINAL part pg10 - Page 8

aww that was so good...😊

rainy... mind blowing yaar.. what an end to a lovely story...awesome

rainy awsome update yaar......very very romantic and shanak are so cute......loved shanak and anand.....end was amazing...hope yaar cvs also show something like.......grt work rainy.....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Rafia Lovely update great job👏

Hey Rafia..........

Omg rafia 🤗You are a wonder ful, writter...awesome ss lol !!!!!!!
Sorry for late comments but i read it yet and read all 4 part together its awesome
1st part
all shanak conv.scene soo nice and like to see that anad told pushpa and shaan confused (think his name also pushpa)
anand -shaan part soo awesome..very nice
2 part
garma garam part
shaan khanak romance scene soo hot and amazing and blessing me☺️😍
anand tell his friends story to shaan and hint him soo nice
part 3
fabolous and amazing part
shaan-anand conv..so awesome and
khanak--anand conv also very wonderful
mandir part sooooo awesome and shaan hold to kahanak leg and after their conv.. soo amazing
and supparb👍🏼
part 4
excilient part too another hot part after 2 part
shanak romantic conv with bahoo ke darmiya soo hotty dear loved it😍😍
shanak nok jhok scene,najuk scene all of them very great
good work Rafia..loved your SS very much..simply excilient👏👍🏼⭐️

Helloooo BB🤗

Sorry it took me ages to comment.

Wow! I am impressed, never knew my BB could write so well. 👏

Honestly I loved it, it was awesome. I liked the fact that the SS had a perfect mix of nok-johk, romance, emotions, and the way you portrayed all the characters was perfect.👍🏼

I loved the entire SS, the talk between Anand and Shaan, and the conversations between Shanak were fabulous. But my favourite part was Shaan's speech at the Temple, as it was emotional and the dialogues you used were perfect. Aww the ending was bliss, loved the fact that you got Shaan to sing for her, and tell the whole Dhulwadi how much she meant to him. Also Shaan arranging the hot air ballon ride was such a nice idea. Fantastic! 👏

I really enjoyed reading it, so Rafia you now have to write another SS/OS, as honey you are a great writer, and wish to read more, so get writing. 😃

Raffy !!!!

Rafia......fabulous ending...👏👏