FF~ShANak in a Medieval KicHdi-Pt10 on 18 upd 5/11 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

gotta say Simi this is amazing! You have brought me back to when I was in high school, still dreaming and when I really started to write. I need to get back to writing! Your story has inspired me to try once again! Thanks!

I have not been writing much since past few years. Guess it's time to get back into it !😉

Wow, thats an awesome compliment!! Yes, when I wrote this I was back in my school days recalling my fav stories!! Thanks!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
Good lord....!!
GHK.....Hahahahahahahhaaaa !!
God's gift to womanhood?? Soo clean that puts manhood to shame??

M soooo ROFLing here...

When did Khandelwal's start keeping Gajar ka Halwa behind trees in forests....Has Mrs.Junior Khandelwal gone loony??....ROFL !!!

And Obama and Burthal made guest appearances here ...LOL....!!

Awesome...Continue soon !!


Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
Thanks Vandu!! LOL, It made U laugh that much!! Great!!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
You AAAAAMMMMMAAAAZZZIIINNNGGGG!!!!

I could totally picture him buried in her during the romantic scene OMG girl you got major ass talent i just love it!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
Thankyou guys for following my SS/FF..I don't know where/when it will end but here's the next part where Robin Shaan and Marion Khanak decide to rescue her Dad....!! The links for all the parts are on the first page..just in case you've missed reading them...

Part 5- Gender Bender...😃

SR and KM continue on in their journey each lost in their own thoughts thinking about each other and the new feelings they have felt developing within themselves. when suddenly they see Dharam running towards them, with a worried and anxious look on his face..

Dh: I have news...

SR eager not to upset and worse... shock his newly found love interest. shouts.STOP!! Dharam.donot approach any closer!!...Stay where you are and speak!!😡

Dharam not really getting what his master meant..had come within a few feet of the couple when KM's very keen nose picked up the faint waft of the famous or rather infamous Dharam breath ( Colgate emergency please!😆)....and her head started reeling and her knees started to buckle in an involuntary response..

SR with an anguished look on his face, rushed to support KM at the same time indicating to DH to shut his mouth and move away. DH did as told and stepped back with a peeved look on his face.

SR gently blew his minty breath ( at 4 am!!)😕, on KM's face which did the trick it was supposed to and Voila!! She opened her eyes and again found herself gazing into the ruggedly handsome face of Shaan. 😳

Dh: Sirji, sorry to interrupt, M'lady but I have really bad news abt yr father. I just saw him in Sheriff's custody bound and chained, being dragged along mercilously!!😭

KM's face flushed with anger and she wrung her hands in frustration..Mein kya karoon, I feel so helpless!! I am his daughter and his son..and I feel that its my duty to let no harm befall him. Now the sheriif has him in his custody..how will I rescue him all by myself??

SR: You can trust me..tum mujhpe bharosa kar sakti ho..I'll help you do your duty!!...NO matter what it takes!..

KM looked gratefully at Shaan as he smiled at her reassuringly...

DH: M'lady!!I overheard that the sheriff is organising a tournament...of archery, jousting..so you may find him there! He likes to display his prisoners as his trophies!!...

KM: I need to go there..somehow!

DH: I have an idea M'lady..you cannot go as yourselves..you have to go in disguise..you have to become a lad again and M'lord...😳

SR ( suspiciously)..What do you want me to be Dharam??..

DH:( grinning shyly and chuckling)..Sirji..you should go as a girl or a lady..thats the best disguise for you!!..😆

KM roared with laughter, slapping her thighs, tears streaming down her eyes, totally unlady like,..as Shaan looked fiercely at her..

SR: I'm trying to be your gallant knight and you are laughing at me..go, do it on your own!!

KM: ( calming down quickly), noooo, I'm sorry, maaf kardo please!!..I need your help..please, P.romise I won't laugh at you, but thats your best disguise..

SR reluctantly agreed and they prepared to meet the next challenge..

Dharam ever ready, whipped out a large lady's dress from his ruck sack. SR looked quite disgusted but let KM and Dharam help him into it..KM barely trying to control her amusement!!

Finally when SR was ready, he looked like a really large and particularly muscular woman. SR pulled the cape over his head and pulled the edge over his face..and KM and Dharam both nodded their approval.

Dharam: All you need to do now is remember to walk taking small steps and pretend to be dumb...!! We don't want you to be discovered!!..

SR: Dude!!..yaar, maine acting mein Gold medal jeeta hai..no one will recognise me!! But I'm really liking these boobs!!..😆😳

Still chuckling the three friends headed towards the tournament...

I am imagining SR ( Shaan) to be dressed somewhat like this!!.........😉😆
Ps: Please comment..the next part shud be more fun for sure...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
yay I am first!!!!!!
anyway I love the way the story is going........ God Shaan in drag!!!! hahahahahaha................... looking frwrd to nxt part!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
wow simi loved both parts read it twice.. lazy to write the best parts and comment please excuse me.
. but loved it in full..honestly read it fully.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
simi loved it sweety
shaan is such a cuie man
loved it waiting fr the next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: sshriyaa84

wow simi loved both parts read it twice.. lazy to write the best parts and comment please excuse me.

. but loved it in full..honestly read it fully.

Don't you worry, Shriya...I believe You!!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
this is hilarous! keep i tup Simi, loving this story!

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