FF~ShANak in a Medieval KicHdi-Pt10 on 18 upd 5/11

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Guys again!!
Taking the advise of some among you, I thought abt writing something DiFFerEnt than my usUal StuPid Poetry!!😆
Since I didn't want to STep On AnY Toes for There are some BrILLiant FFs on this Forum, I am Taking A New Approach!!😃
I Wanted To Take Shanak OUT of the Khandelwal HoUSe and Decided to TIME TRAVEL!!😆
IN My Story They Have Gone Back to Medieval England and are pretending to Be ROBIN and MARION but in a completely New Avatar!!!😆
Its Supposed to Be FUNNY and ROMANTIC so if you want me to continue or Not please let ME KNOW!!!
Here's a YT link to build some atmosphere...My Story though is Very Differnt!! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZGoWtY_h4xo

SHANAK meet Robin and Marion in a Medieval Kichdi SS

Shaan SR-Wannabe Robin Hood Dharam- Shaan's friend

Khanak KM- Lady Marion Mogambo- Wicked Sheriff

SuNil- Shaan's dad Nalayak - NS - Sheriff's son

Mads- Shaan's mo

The Setting: Medieval England when there were kings and queens and men in shining armor and beautiful maidens..But of particular note due to poor personal hygeine standards poor teeth and strong odors were quite common..!!!😆😆
The famous Sherwood Forest:

Shaan aka SR (Wannabe Robin Hood,) sat pensively on an uprooted tree trunk staring out in the distance...a miserable expression on his handsome face... He looked dashing in his Lincoln Green suit and his cap was cocked jauntily over his left eye. 😉

His friend and companion, Dharam asked with concern..Whats up, kya hua, why are you so sad, Stomach upset?..

SR looked up and said:.. No, yaar! I FORGOT my toothbrush at home last night!! In the entire world right now, I'm the only Dude who brushes his teeth...and I forgot my toothbrush?Why did dad kick me out..he won't let me in again!! I can't bear it, my breath stinks!!!Ugggh..😆😆

Dharam grinned, displaying his black stained jaws. His mouth was his weapon. No he did not bite people, all he did was open his mouth and the stench was enough to knock down anyone who dared to wander near him!

Therefore though Dharam was used to Shaan's weird habits and really who in their sane mind wud ever want to clean their teeth?..Pagalpan ki bhi koi hadh hoti hai na.. He said..No worries Boss!, you will get used to it..Poocho Kyon?..😆

SR: Kyon?..

Dharam:..Becoz U have no other go!! HAHAHA...😆

Shaan almost passed out when he encountered Dharam's infamous breath but he got quickly out of the way!!

SR..ok, enough, close yr mouth..you cud kill me, you know! The only reason I tolerate U is becoz yr mouth can kill and all you have to do is open it!! Just make sure its not in front of me ok?!!

Dharam..Ok, OK... Boss,your pitaji wanted you to practice archery during yr exile , coz you are NEVER on target!! SR smiled, he remembered why he was such a bad shot..what cud he do, his GURU had been soo very Hottl!! Now cud he be blamed for looking at her and not the target??...ok yaar, lets practice!!

xxx
AgAin FrieNDs, be hOnest PleaZ!!
ThanKS!!❤️
LINKS :
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part7
Part8
Part9 pg 16
Part 10 pg 18
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣......
tht was too gud, simi!..
especially dharam being shaan's frnd!!..(dharam is real shaan's nightmare!)..
contine soon......cant wait to laugh my ass off!! :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AmmU...ThanKU Dear!!!😃
The Video Link is now working!! Thanx....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yaar simi
from where do u get these mind blowing ideas
seriously i loved th entire concept very much..
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Originally posted by: sshriyaa84

yaar simi

from where do u get these mind blowing ideas
seriously i loved th entire concept very much..

Thanks Dear!! You are very Sweet!!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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u are great man!! u r a genius!!! it's so damn funny... do update soon... i am dying to read mre!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PooJa!! I am not a genius, just a little Nuts!!😆
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Interesting concept Simi😊....Looking forward to seeing how Khanak's charactor is shown....Reminds of the English Children' spoof ' Maid Marian '....Robin was nazuk and it was Maid Marian who was strong😆......
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Originally posted by: The_May_Rose

Interesting concept Simi😊....Looking forward to seeing how Khanak's charactor is shown....Reminds of the English Children' spoof ' Maid Marian '....Robin was nazuk and it was Maid Marian who was strong😆......

Never got to see that show May😆
I'd say that mine is somewhat along the same lines with a lot of extra masaala!!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Here is the Much HappeNing Part 2--is raTher LONG But KhaNak is Introduced!! 😆😆😉

Part 2- TIFF Tac Toe!!

KHANDELWAL CASTLE-----

SR's Dad And Mom Argue!😕

MAds..YF ( you fool!) why did you have to send my PB ( poorbaby) out in the woods??he will die there, the wolves will eat him!!😃

SuNil

..nah woh mera beta hai, nothing will happen to him..he needs to toughen up, he has become very NAAZUK in yr care!!

Mads

..Why, why..does he have to toughen up, he is still a little boy!!...

Sunil

..Boy?? You call him a boy at twenty six? At his age I was already married with 2 kids and holding a major position in the King's court( I practically run it now in his absence!)...Oh how I wish I hadn't seen you that fateful night..tumne meri Izzat looti aur mein abhi tak bhugat raha hoon!!.😆

Mads left in a Hufff!!..

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Sherwood Forest:

Meanwhile somewhere in Sherwood forest, a group of Sheriff 's aka Mogambo) soldiers were trying to move through with their loot as quietly as possible..

They had raided a rich nobleman's house, and also carried off his beautiful but feisty daughter, Khanak( Lady Marion) with them. They were supposed to deliver her to The Sheriff's house where he was planning on getting her wedded to his nalayak son, thereby takeover all of the nobleman's extensive property..

Khanak aka Lady Marion was a young lady of substance. Though she had had all the luxury a young woman cud desire, her father had brought her up as a son ( she being his only offspring.)He had given her a good education and had her trained under the best marksmen. She could now hold her own against the best of the best and had frequently won tournaments where she had gone in the guise of a man. So she usually dressed in male clothes and talked in a gruff voice and this had become almost a norm with her that she had almost come to believe that she was one of the GUYS!!

Today she had a rude awakening. Early in the morning, she had been dragged out of her bed and before she knew what was going on, she had been trussed up like a chicken and marched out of the house!! She was concerned abt her mom and dad more than herself. She cud take care of herself!! She just hated being dragged on the path is such a state of indignity!! Grrrrrrr........😡. But she did succeed in one thing, making a lot of noise and keeping up a good struggle which slowed the whole procession down. The soldiers wondered why would someone want to marry such a vixen!!??😆

SR and Dharam were target practising in the forest ( actually SR was and Dharam was keeping watch,) when they heard the commotion. They saw a group of soldiers who SR knew were upto no good ( they were notorious for robbing the rich landlords and filling the Sheriff's coffers,) and what appeared to be young lad all trussed up in the back who was really doing a gud job of slowing them down. SR winked at Dharam...

Dharam

said..kya hua sir? let them go, they are too many of them and we are just 2. I'm sure we'll get killed! Poocho Kyon...😕

SR

:no Dharam, if I've to get back in the gud books of dad I have to prove myself and what better way than to rescue somebody? Go, gather some more ppl and I will jump them from behind!

Dharam was sceptical but saw his point so he went to gather reinforcements while SR climbed up a tree waiting for an opportunity to jump the guards...

Khanak started to get tired, she felt that these men had her firmly in their grip!! Desperately she started to look around for a weapon. Suddenly she felt a heavy thing fall on her back..and she was knocked down to the ground. She looked over her shoulder and saw a man dressed in green lying on top of her... She was trained to follow her instincts and she made a fist and PUNCHED him on the nose!! It ws a good Punch, the man howled and jumped up holding his nose!! Khanak jumped to her feet and took a defensive stance wondering where this new Goon had come from. She soon saw that her guards were also equally startled but they quickly recovered and had actually backed up the man against a tree and were abt to pummel him. Khanak wasted no time and kicked both the men on their shins which made them double over in pain and release SR who went back to clutching his bleeding nose. Meanwhile Dharam had arrived with enough men who had the advantage of surprise. They made merry clobbering up the guards and one by one all fled. Khanak felt sorry when she saw SR still holding his nose but still thought that it was his fault.

KM

sauntered up to him and gripping his chin in her hand said..Chikne! Next time soch samajh kar nishana lagana! 😳😳

SR was stunned and stared at this Akdoo young lad, but was then mesmerised by his soft regular features esp., his smoky dark eyes, sun kissed skin, well shaped nose and perfect lips which cud have made any girl proud. But best of all, he had fresh breath😆! After forever had he met someone with FRESH BREATH and he was really eager to know his name! KM also had not seen a cleaner guy in her whole life ( except her father of course,) and his liquid brown eyes seemed to hold her in a spell........EYELOCK!!..(Aankhon hi aakhon mein ishaara ho gaya...)😆

Then suddenly KM realised who she was supposed to be and not wanting to confuse SR any more, turned around and walked away into the woods. SR looked around and saw Dharam and his pals sniggering and whispering among themselves having a jolly gud time at his expense. They were amused that their young master had been beaten up by a slip of a girl but hey were not going to tell their master that!!

Don't forget the ROTTEN TOMATOES!!😆

Edited by simiv - 14 years ago

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