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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks guys for yr appreciation..its much appreciated!!😆😆
Its been a while since I updated..so here's the next part... Shaan ( SR) has just rescued Khanak(KM) from the sheriff's tower....
Links for all parts are posted on the 1st page😊

Part 4 - JUNGLE MEIN MUNGLE😆

Sherwood Forest:

SR and KM were running for a while in the forest trying hard to get as far away from the Sheriff's castle as possible. They knew that the Sheriff's son must have raised the alarm by now and a franctic search must be on. KM kept tripping over her dress which she was not used to wearing and frustrated shouted at SR to stop.

SR: with a hopeful grin said: Kya, itni jaldi tum thak gayi? You are human after all!!😃

KM retorted:No Burthal( can't get away from that word!), I just can't keep running in these clothes, I need to take them off!

SR couldn't believe his ears...What this beautiful girl was going to do a strip tease just for him!😲😳

KM:..Don't get yr hopes up! I am wearing my trousers underneath!

So saying she took off her dress and revealed the same boyish clothes she was wearing the day before. She looked especially vulnerable now in them that her long hair was not concealed under a cap anymore. SR suddenly felt a protective instinct towards her and decided that he won't let any harm befall this lovely creature...and wud protect her with his life!

KM: Where are we going? This is not the way to my home!...Are you one of Sheriff's men too?, Were you trying to deceive me?...

SR: No..Mein Sheriff se nafrat karta hoon, he has done my family much harm.. He is always looking for ways to upstage my dad. One of the reasons I came to your help was because I hate him so much..and also because...

KM: ..and also... what?.

SR:..I think that you are very brave for a girl..( and very khubsoorat too.)😳

KM fuming:.What..you think that girls cannot take care of themselves?..they always need a knight in shining armor to rescue them?..I want to let you know that I had made a good plan for escape...mein unki waat laga deti..😡

SR:...there, there, cool man, I mean ..girl! No need to fight, see we are both on the same side! I wanted to take you to my home because nobody would think of looking there for you..

KM seemed to get SR's point and they moved on. Sometime later, they heard sounds of approaching horses.

KM: I'm quite sure that it must be Nalayak, the Sheriff's son scouting for me, we need to hide somewhere and quick!..

SR: I think that the best place thing we could do is climb this tall tree, nobody would be able to see us, and once they are gone we can continue safely..

KM: How can I climb the tree, you know I'm scared of heights!!..

SR:Thats easy, when you climb up just don't look down, I'll be behind you. And when you are up there, I shall hold you tight so you won't fall..trust me. You can do it, just like you do everything else!!..

KM:( reluctantly)..Alright..but no hanky panky! or else you know what I can do!..

They climbed up a tall tree nearby, SR helping KM up among the branches. He made her sit in front of him on a sturdy branch and encouraged her to relax and lean back into him, while he wrapped his arms around her slim waist and buried his face into her soft, silky hair. KM started to breathe easy, and felt the tension in her body slowly ease off and at the same time began to enjoy this new feeling of warmth and tenderness in a stranger's arms..something she had never felt before... She leaned back into his toned chest felt the warmth of his breath on her neck.. it felt so good that she wanted to stay this way forever.. 😳😊

Suddenly the spell broke when they heard the sound of loud voices..

They held their breath as they saw the Sheriff's son and his gang pass by...

Nalayak: She could not have gone far in such a short time, unless she had some help.. I did see her run away with a man, he seemed familiar though I didn't get to see his face!..

His Cronie: Could he be that boy Robin, who is soo clean that he shames our Manhood?..😆

Nalayak: It could be..he is also cleanshaven and smells good..girls would fall for that!! Lets move on and catch them before they go too far!..

Heaving a collective sigh of relief, SR and KM got down the tree, this time KM had her eyes open.

KM: Thanks, you really are proving to be a good friend..

SR: ( thinking..just a friend?)..umm..thats alright, you don't have to thank me for something I would have done for anyone..

KM: ( why do I feel disappointed when he said that?..)staring at Shaan wistfully..

SR: ..( preening trying hard to lift a nonexistent collar), ..Ain't I the most adorable, charming God's gift to womanhood?😆

KM: ..( burst into laughter)..Yaa, then I am Barack O' Bama..😆

SR:..( getting jealous)..O'Bama? who in hell is that?..😕

KM: .( puzzled, shrugging),I..don't know..just popped into my head....😛

SR still feeling jealous of this nonexistent entity..said: Let's hurry on..its dangerous to hang around here for too long!

KM: STOP!..I am dying with hunger..I haven't had anything in 2 days..you have to get me something to eat!!.

SR:..( Checking his pockets..and taking out some stale bread and cheese.)..This is all I have.

KM: What you expect me to eat that..ugghh..Me, Jhansi ki Rani?😡

SR: I..what do you expect me to do your majesty....( with an exaggerated bow), are you going to have me beheaded..( very amused.)😃

KM: ( angrily).don't you dare tease me..go get me something proper or I'll hang you from the nearest tree..

SR: ( laughing hysterically..)..you 2 foot ki ladki...and hang me?? haha...ok..let me see what I can do..😆

SR disappears for a few minutes and comes back carrying a dish in his hand and presents it to KM..with compliments from outer space..😃

KM: ( surprised opening the dish,)..Yeh kya hai..umm it smells good too!!..

SR:I really dunno, it was behind that tree!..here, there's a note on it, says ..from the Khandelwals..some Gajar ka Halwa..!!..(scratching his head.)..😆😕

KM: ( eating the GKH.)..its delicious..whatever it is..I love any man who can cook..( again looking at SR with wonder... definitely good husband material, hmmm!!)..😃

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Ps: Please leave yr brains behind..and comment!! Thanks!!😆 Simi
Edited by simiv - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
loved it simi.......that romantic moment was to die for i soooooooooooo loved it

ur creativity knows no bounds sweety
very good
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG!! simi this was relaly vey good.. and i was like screaming oh no not again Gajar ka halwa ..
u have used everytng so best he is goingto make everyone sweetest
Edited by sshriyaa84 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Haha!! Thanks guys!!
@ Karish..yes I was thinking of you when I wrote that romantic part!!😃
@ Shriya-- GJH is delicious as food dear!! Promise it won't come back!!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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LOL!! shaan jealous of O' Bama!!!! it was as usual genius! coz comedy is DIFFICULT and u manage to crack me up everytime....
lots lots lots of love (coz u r fantastic)
pooja
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😆😆😆😆Simi darling....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Loved it loved it loved it...🤣🤣🤣🤣 just brilliant and hilarious as always....🤣🤣🤣🤣 the dialogues...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Great can't wait for the next part from you soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Eeeeek!!😃😃😃....Loved it adorable and sweet...Could picture ShaNak in that scene.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: p.fashion.d

LOL!! shaan jealous of O' Bama!!!! it was as usual genius! coz comedy is DIFFICULT and u manage to crack me up everytime....

lots lots lots of love (coz u r fantastic)
pooja

Thanks Pooja, I'm nothing compared to your genius!! Love U too!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ Krishna..thanks so much sweets..am thinking abt what next!!
@ May...happy that you liked it!!:))
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gotta say Simi this is amazing! You have brought me back to when I was in high school, still dreaming and when I really started to write. I need to get back to writing! Your story has inspired me to try once again! Thanks!
I have not been writing much since past few years. Guess it's time to get back into it !😉

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