** FF - Made for eachother **,Ch15 (Pg8)

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After seeing the ranking for Shanak I am so happy. And would love that they continue to reach more heights. First time I am attempting a FF and I hope you will like it.

Chapter One

This is a story set in a small town of Leh. It was a small place with mostly everyone knowing each other. It was a beautiful place and a great place for holidays and honeymoon couples etc. There were good boarding schools and colleges too.

In this place people enjoyed with small little things of life. Some had shops; hotels and some were working for banks etc. In this place there was this Gupta family which had Father, Mother, two daughters and their lovely, friendly Dadi. These two girls were born and brought up here only and had a simple lifestyle and which they enjoyed very much.Elder one was called Khanak and she was working as nurse in hospital.She was a simple, traditional girl who wanted to help others and that's the reason she chooses to become a nurse. She just loved her profession.

On the other hand there was this Khandelwal family who lived in Mumbai. Very different from quiet simple life of Leh. They were big business family and for deals they could do anything. This family consisted of Mr and Mrs Khandelwal, Akshay the elder brother who is married to Khushboo and Shantanu the younger one and their Dadi. Shantanu was youngest and that's why little immature and carefree. He did not know what is the importance of money.For him life meant having fun and enjoying it to the fullest by going on holidays with friends or partying hard. But with all this he was a very nice person at heart. He was very romantic and liked a girl called Natasha, though he himself wasn't sure whether its love or not. Natasha was also from a rich business family.

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Precap:For him life meant having fun and enjoying it to the fullest by going on holidays with friends or partying hard. But with all this he was a very nice person at heart. He was very romantic and liked a girl called Natasha, though he himself wasn't sure whether its love or not. Natasha was also from a rich business family.

Chapter Two

Life is going as usual when one day Shaan is seeing 3 idiots and fell in love with LEH when he saw this place in last scene of the movie and immediately decided to go and visit it. For the first time he was all alone as Natasha had to visit some B-schools abroad and no other friend were free. But as Shantanu is very stubborn and does not like to be told stuff decides he will go by himself. And hence he packs his bag and bid good bye to his family members and tell Natasha to inform him once she is back from US and London.He leaves by plane from Mumbai to Delhi and then from Delhi to Leh. He reaches Leh in the morining around 10 am. Even from the plane the whole place looked amazing. As soon as he got down Rajan the guide cum chauffer arranged by Mr. Khandelwal whose work was to take Shaan around and help him incase he needs anything took him to a best hotel of Leh. Shaan reached his hotel room and the moment he removed the curtain of its room he just saw mountains with snow on it and it looked amazing. Huge mountains with snow peaks and sun rays falling on them making them shine, Shaan got fresh and called Rajan and told him that he is coming down and take him around the city. Rajan though told Shaan that he should take at least one-day rest so that his body get used to the high altitude, because Leh is at a high altitude hence oxygen level is less compared to other places. Hence it is always advisable to take one-day rest so that body will get used to it and then start your sightseeing. But as expected koi Shantanu Khandelwal ko smajha raha aisa ho nahi sakta. He told Rajan that I am fine and he should not worry, he is coming down.


Precap: Rajan though told Shaan that he should take at least one-day rest so that his body get used to the high altitude, because Leh is at a high altitude hence oxygen level is less compared to other places. Hence it is always advisable to take one-day rest so that body will get used to it and then start your sightseeing. But as expected koi Shantanu Khandelwal ko smajha raha aisa ho nahi sakta. He told Rajan that I am fine and he should not worry, he is coming down.

Chapter Three

He sat in the car with his camera and mineral water and Rajan took him around Leh. First thing he was Shanti Stupa. It was a picturesque place. Mountains all around surrounded this Stupa.


He started to climb the stairs to reach the Stupa but as there was lot of stairs he started to get breathless and was having difficulty in breathing. From far Rajan saw Shaan and thought something is wrong and came running and saw he was in a bad state. He started to help him reach the car but suddenly someone came in a lemon colour salwar suit with hair open shouting bhaiya ek min. Rajan heard her and stopped and on the other hand Shaan was not able to stand also. The girl came and asked Rajan whats the matter and he told her that Shaan is a tourist and he didn't took rest and that's why he is breathless. She quickly went down and took Shaan's head on her lap and helped him to relax first by saying please breath slowly and while saying this she was moving her hand in his hair. And then gave him some medicine. Slowly Shaan was feeling better. But he couldn't get up as he was tired. The girl asked him how are you feeling now, Shaan for the first time saw that he was in someone's lap and saw her face, and he was awestruck by her beauty. She had no make up just had kajal which made her big eyes more big and her silky black hair was loose n was touching his face, and her soft voice which had concern for him kept asking him how he is feeling while her hand was touching her hair. He was mesmerized by her innocence, beauty and simplicity. He thought by seeing her, I hope I don't get breathless again. Suddenly a voice broke his imagination and said how are you feeling. He said ya better than before. She smiled hearing this and with help of Rajan and her Shaan was able to stand. She told him to take proper rest and incase he feels uneasy, do go to a doctor. But as we know our Shaan cant go to any doctor, he asked but I don't know any good doctor here, how can I go to anyone. The girl smiled and said you can visit Fortis hospital and meet Mr. Chang; he is a very good doctor. And with that she turned and left. Suddenly Shaan realized he did not even said thank you or asked anything and was angry with himself. He went back to the hotel and took rest but all this while that uknown face kept flashing in front of him. He said to himself "Shaan bte yeh kya ho raha hai tujhe, you need to control yourself".He had an early dinner and went to sleep.

But suddenly in the middle of the night he again started to feel breathless and he called Rajan and told him to take him to Dr. Chang at fortis. Rajan immediately took him to Fortis but since it was late night Dr.Chang was not on duty and Shaan was asking for him only and at the same time he was not feeling well. The receptionist asked him to take seat and called a nurse to help Shaan while she will call Dr. Chang. Shaan was sitting on the chair and from far he saw someone coming, in a blue dress, trouser and Shirt. As soon as she came close he realized he is that same girl who saved her and with that he felt unconscious.

Hope you all are liking it.

Edited by aditi305 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one aditi........good start👏.....so shanak are set to romance in "himalay ki goad me" ha?😉 it would be romantic😳.....and our is a fan of "3 idiots"?...ya why not as he also resembles Rancho's bindaas attitude.....😉.......by the way i likes the way shan went unconscious at the end (by seing khanak i guess)😉
do continue soon..... 😊
Edited by m4manju - 14 years ago
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nice work, ady!!...
shaan deciding to go to leh after watching 3 idiots......realistic!!
do continue...
we hav got gr8 FF writers in our forum!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for liking my FF and also for your encouragement to continue.
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PRECAP: But suddenly in the middle of the night he again started to feel breathless and he called Rajan and told him to take him to Dr. Chang at fortis. Rajan immediately took him to Fortis but since it was late night Dr.Chang was not on duty and Shaan was asking for him only and at the same time he was not feeling well. The receptionist asked him to take seat and called a nurse to help Shaan while she will call Dr. Chang. Shaan was sitting on the chair and from far he saw someone coming, in a blue dress, trouser and Shirt. As soon as she came close he realized he is that same girl who saved her and with that he felt unconscious

Chapter Four

When he gained consciousness he looked around and understood that he is in hospital room. He saw Rajan sitting in the corner sleeping and snoring. He suddenly remembered what had happened last night. He had a drip in one of his hand. He wanted to go to bathroom but didn't know what to do. He tried to get up from his bed but he was till feeling very week and he was abt to fall down when someone came hold him. He turned and saw she is the same girl with a bright smile on her face. She looked cute and beautiful even in a nurse dress. She helped him to sit back and asked you need anything. Shaan was just looking at her face but when she said this his spell broke and he felt shy telling her that he wants to go the loo. He kept quiet and suddenly she said you want to go to the bathroom. Shaan looked at her and wondered how does she know. Without waiting for an answer she just went near his hand took out the drip pipe and said now you can go but be careful and don't fall, you are still weak. He started to go towards the bathroom and again was about to fall when she came and hold him. She was close to him and he could smell her fragrance. They reached the bathroom and told him walk by holding something. Shaan went inside and by the time he returned she had left and Rajan was standing there. Shaan thought was it a dream or she was actually there. He was again angry with himself for not asking her name or anything about her. He was talking to himself,

Shaan:Yaar Shaan yeh tujhe kya ho raha hai, teri toh bolti hi band ho jaati hai uske saamne, kuch samajh hi nahi ata ki kya kare. Nahi nahi I am Shantanu Khandelwal (SH) the cool dude. I cant let this happen because its always I who is in control of things not anyone else. Suddenly he is brought back to realty by Rajan's voice

Rajan: Shaan sir, how are you feeling now?

Shaan: Ya better.

Rajan: I was so scared yesterday night.

Shaan: Don't worry I am feeling fine and I'm sorry that I didn't hear your advise (he was astonished to what he just said, Shaan saying sorry ,WAH)

Rajan: Koi baat nahi sir, Dr.Chang took great care of you and that Madam was right he is a very good doctor.

Shaan: Kaun madam?

Rajan: Arre wohi jo uss din Shanti Stupa pe mili this, and kya coincidence hai sir who issi hospital mein nurse bhi hai.

Shaan: Accha, arre wah. Yaar Raja usne meri bahut madad ki hai, mujhe usse thank you kehna hai. Kahan hai who?

Rajan: Abhi toh yehi thi, ab kahan hai pata nahi. But I will look for her. But sir must tell you, usne apka bahut khayal rakha. Kal poori raat woh aapke paas hi thi. She really took great care of you.

And with this he left to search for that girl. Back in the room Shaan was thinking, kuch toh hai uss mein kyunki jab bhi usko dekhta hun aur kuch samajh hi nahi ata. Pata karna padega Shaan ki yeh kya ho raha hai.

Edited by aditi305 - 14 years ago
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again a nice one aditi......
i could imagine khanak in nurse's attire😍........hmmm so shan already falling for her......😉.....
continue soon😊

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aditi loved reading it so much.......imagined scene by scene in ma mind its really getting interesting n im so dying 2 read the next parts.pls do update soon u have done an excelent job sweety👏👍🏼❤️
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Thanks, as I was little worried that whether you guys are liking my FF or not. But grateful to all of you for your appreciation.
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Precap: And with this he left to search for that girl. Back in the room Shaan was thinking, kuch toh hai uss mein kyunki jab bhi usko dekhta hun aur kuch samajh hi nahi ata. Pata karna padega Shaan ki yeh kya ho raha hai.

Chapter 5

And with this he left to search for that girl. Back in the room Shaan was thinking, kuch toh hai uss mein kyunki jab bhi usko dekhta hun aur kuch samajh hi nahi ata. Pata karna padega Shaan ki yeh kya ho raha hai tujhe. He heard a knock on his door.

Shaan: Ya whose there?

Anonymous Girl (AG): Hello.

Shaan: Dumbstruck.

AG: You looking better than yesterday. Kabhie kabhie doosro ki baat maan leni chaiye. (As Rajan told her that even when he said to rest he did not)

Shaan: Finally says Oh! I wanted to say thank you to you for helping me.

AG: No need as this is my profession and I am supposed to take care of you.

Shaan: Hope you always takecare of me (he says in his mind)

AG: You said something?

Shaan: No, No. By the way I am Shaan and extended his hand.

AG: She smiled I know (she saw a surprised look on Shaan's face and said), ur Driver Rajan he told us. By the way I am Khanak (KH) and extended her hand.

There hand met for a handshake and Shaan felt amazing by the touch of her soft hand with a great smile on her face.

Someone called them Hello Mr. Shantanu. Shaan and Khanak looked to that person. Shaan to himself yeh isko abhi hi ana the, while Khanak smiled and said goodmorning sir.

Hello I am Dr. Chang.

SH: Oh hello Dr, thanks for all your help.

Chang: Its our pleasure and you must thank KH as she attended you very well. I think now you are fine to leave the hospital. KH please full fill all the formalities and get all the forms filled.

For the first time SH hated to leave the hospital. He looked at KH and then back to the Dr.

SH: Dr if you want I can stay for few more days, because I don't want to take any chances.

Dr: No no you can leave. You wont have any problem. Just have the medicine for two days and take rest. Ok I shall take ur leave (while leaving he instructs KH what she has to do before they discharge SH, with all this SH is constantly looking at KH and is mesmerized by her look).

KH: Ok Dr. I will takecare of everything.

They both leave. While Khanak returns with blood pressure machine, torch and thermometer.

SH was not able to say anything.

KH: Mr. Shaan I need to take your blood pressure. She pulls SH's hand wrap it around it.

While measuring she touches SH pluse. And he felt electrified by her touch. SH who is seeing KH uska pluse rate aise hi tej tha.

KH: Mr. Shantanu aapka toh Blood pressure bada hua hai. Aisa hona toh nahi chaiye. I will give you medicine but do let us inform if you are not feeling well.

SH: (Mutters) Tum rahogi saamne toh pressure high hi rehne wala hai.

KH: Kya hua.

SH: Nahi kuch nahi.

KH: Muh kholiye.

SH: Kyuuuuu

KH: Thermometer. I need to check your temp....., its fine.

Then she takes the torch and checks his eyes. KH comes a little close shows torch to SH eyes and SH keeps looking at her.

KH: You wait I will get the forms.

She gets the form and ask Shaan to fill it. Drip ki wajah se aur right hand mein injection lagne ki wajah se SH ka haath thodha numb ho gaya tha and he was not able to write. Seeing this KH come close to him takes the form from him sit near him and smile and says

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