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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏👏👍🏼...sup[erb part once again i loved the bed scene.....haiii tooooooo good.....thanks fr updating so quickly i should recommend u 2 star one creatives theyll love 2 have u😆😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Precap:

Sh: Little worried and says, who meri bahut achi dost hai. That's it. By the way why are you so much interested in her?

Kh: Aisa nahi hai I was just asking like I aksed for your family members.

They have breakfast and then stroll around the monastry. The rain has stopped. As they are going Sh sees a clothes shop. He quickely goes there and buys two track pants and two shirts. Kh also buy trackpants and T-shirt. Suddenly its start raining again.

Chapter Twelve

Sh and Kh ran and take shelter inside some small house which in in shambles and no one lives there. Kh is drying her hair with her hand. Sh keeps looking at her. Suddenly Kh screams and hugs Sh. Sh is asking, what happened. Kh ek chooha tha. Sh mann mein sochta hai, chuhe maharaj aap aise hi aate rahiye. He is enjoying Kh's hug and is feeling her closeness.

Kh realizes she is hugging Sh hence get herself out of the hug and is little embarrassed. Sh is just not able to take off his eyes from Kh. She was looking so serene and pure. Her clothes all wet and even her hair where their droplets of water water falling off. Sh wanted to go hold her and then sip all the droplets that are on her cheeks, eyes, nose and then finally her lips. He was mesmerized by Kh's beauty. But suddenly his dream got disturbed when he heard Kh calling him that what are you looking SH as she was feeling uncomfortable by his stare.

Sh: Oh nothing!

Kh: I hope yeh bearish jaldi band ho jaaye and we can go back to the guesthouse. Waise yeh bahar nikalne ka bekaar idea tumhara hi tha.

Sh: Accha toh tumhe kisne kaha tha niklane ko, yeh tumhara Shahar hi ajeeb hai skabhi bearish ho jaati hai toh kabhi tabiyat kharaab ho jaati hai.

KH: Haan toh kisne kahan tha yahan aane ko rehte tum apne Aamchi Mumbai.Aur mera shahar bahut pyara aur sacha hai. Tumlog jaisa nahi ki har cheez paiso se dekhi jaati hai.

Sh: Kya matlab, tumko Mumbai aana chaiye aur dekhna chaiye and I promise I will be your guide there and make you realize how beautiful it is.

Kh: Haan pata hai aisi mayanagri hai jahan rishton ka pata hi nahi chalta.

Sh: Ab bahut zaida ho raha hai, ab chup ho jaao.

Kh: Main kyu chup hunt um ho, tumne meri jagah ke bare mein kahein jaa rahe the tab kuch nahi. Main nahi chup rahogi.

Sh: Chup

Kh: Tum chup

And while saying this they point finger at eachother and their face come very close. They keep staring then finally get apart. After few min start laughing, kya bacchon ki tarah ladh rahe the.

KH: Waise yeh Natasha kaun hai, lagta hai kaafi khaas hai who kya kehte hai tumahri GF hai kya.

Sh: Suddenly realizes that Natasha was never her gf, she wa just a friend. He had thought of her but just couldn't make himself believe that. And now after meeting Kh he can never think like that. Finally he answers; no she is just a good friend. And why are you asking this?

Kh: Little nervous as to how to answer his question, Woh itni raat ko phone ki isiliye laga aur tumhare yahan toh GF aur Bf ka concept kaafi hai na. Aur tumhare jaise ladke ka koi toh Gf zaroor hoga.

Sh: Iska kya matlab hai mere jaise ladke kit oh Gf hogi hi.

KH: Arre matlab you are smart, handsome, you are naughty but very good at heart.

Sh: Smiling when he hears this from Kh. Arre wah Kh tum toh meri taarif kar rahi ho. Khair mere aur Natasha ki beech sirf dosti hai. Waise tumhara koi Bf nahi hai.

Kh: Hamare yaha yeh sab nahi chalta.

Sh: Tab toh sahi hai hum dono ek doosre ke BF aur GF ban jaate hai.

KH: Shut Up Sh. Tum bhi kuch bhi bolte ho.

And turn to walk. Sh caught her hand and get Kh close to her and slowly says kyu mein itna bura hun kya. Kh cant say anything.

Sh: Mein tumhe accha lagta hun Khanak?

Kh: Dosent say anything, she is just trying herself to get free ad keeing her eyes closed.

Sh: Please batao na Kh. Kh I don't know but when I ever I see you, some current passes through my body. Tum mujhe pagal kar rahi ho. I know its too early but mein apna har samay tumahre saath bitane ka mann karta. Mann karta hai tum hamesha aankhon ke saamne raho and while saying he turns Kh (who has her eyes still closed) and now they face eachother. Mann kart hamesha itna paas rakhu. Aur tumse baatein karta rahu, Kh batao na please mere saath aisa kyu ho raha? Kya tumhe bhi aisa ho raha hai.

Edited by aditi305 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
aditi u just made me go 2 heaven wid the ending of the part..omg wen she turns 2 walk from that part my heartbeats were just skipping cause i could c kt taklking in his sexy voice n shanak doing the scene.omg omg omg mein bhi idhar pagal ho rahi hoon.............ur a master at all this typical romance.loved it.pls plspls next part jaldi upload karna cause i really cant wait 2 read wats next.omg ur killing me wid such scenes
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanakforever

aditi u just made me go 2 heaven wid the ending of the part..omg wen she turns 2 walk from that part my heartbeats were just skipping cause i could c kt taklking in his sexy voice n shanak doing the scene.omg omg omg mein bhi idhar pagal ho rahi hoon.............ur a master at all this typical romance.loved it.pls plspls next part jaldi upload karna cause i really cant wait 2 read wats next.omg ur killing me wid such scenes


Thanks, will update the next part soon. Really happy that you liked it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏👏👏superb job aditi like karishma said the ending part is too romantic.
i could imagine that scene so clealry!!!
luved it please continue as and when u can.please enter the RBO contest without fail!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Lovely part !!
Hope Khanak too confesses !!
Continue soon yaar !! Have got used to your instant updates !! 😳
Luv,
Vandu
Edited by togepe30 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Precap: Sh: Please batao na Kh. Kh I don't know but when I ever I see you, some current passes through my body. Tum mujhe pagal kar rahi ho. I know its too early but mein apna har samay tumahre saath bitane ka mann karta. Mann karta hai tum hamesha aankhon ke saamne raho and while saying he turns Kh (who has her eyes still closed) and now they face eachother. Mann kart hamesha itna paas rakhu. Aur tumse baatein karta rahu, Kh batao na please mere saath aisa kyu ho raha? Kya tumhe bhi aisa ho raha hai.

Chapter Thirteen

Kh was standing and was looking at Sh, her bigs eyes did tell that she was also feeling the same but at that time Sh wanted to hear it from Kh's mouth. But Kh was just speechless and was just looking at Sh. Sh again ask Kh

Sh: Khhhhhh (holding her tight from her arms), please tell me. You cant keep quiet like this. Its killing me.

Kh: Sh, please mujhe chodho aur yeh tum kya keh rahe ho.

Sh: Still holding her, kyu tumhe nahi pata mein kya keh raha hoon. Tumhe samajh nahi araha mein tumse kya kehna chah rahan aur tumse kya sunana chah rahan hun.

Kh: Making herself free from Sh, nahi mujhe nahi samajh araha tum kya keh rahe aur kya sunana chahte ho. Mujhe bas yehi pata hai ki tum ek tourist ho jisse yeh jagah dekhni hai aur mein tumhe yeh jagah dikhane mein madad kar rahi ho (and with that she turns the other way. She was saying to herself, we are from two different societies, we are very simple Sh in front of your family and some where she was still confused abt Natasha and Sh's relationship).

Sh: (Who was standing till now was hearing and looking at Kh.Finally when she completes. He angrily comes in front of Kh, holds her and take her on a side where they are getting wet because rain water is falling on them). Toh tumhe nahi samajh araha right. Agar mein tumko pakdo toh tumko kuch nahi hota right and he holds her aur agar mein tumhara chehra apne haathon mein le loon toh bhi tumhe kuch nahi hota and he holds her face lovingly (Kh now lovingly looking at Sh). Agar mein tumahre baalon mein haath pherun toh tumhe kuch nahi toh and he starts moving his hand in Kh's hair and she closes her eyes. And very slowly he says Kh tumhe kuch nahi hota agar mein tumhare paas itne paas aake kahon ki Kh mein' tumse pyar karne laga hoonnnnnnn and he again repeats, mein tumse bahut pyar karne laga hoon Kh. And now he looks into Kh's eyes and come close to her eyes and with looing into her eyes says Kya tumhe abhi bhi kuch samajh nahi araha aur na hi tumhe kuch ho raha hai. By this time they are fully drenched, we can see SH's body because his Shirt is completely wet, While even Kh's shirt is also wet but because of a stol she has covered her but her back you can see.

Kh still doesn't say anything and is looking at Sh.

Kh: Sh yeh tum kya keh rahe ho, we have hardly met. How can you say something like this? Aur agar yeh tumhara koi mazaak hai toh bahut hi bekaar mazaak hai.

Sh: Now very angry with her and holds one arm of Kh. Toh tumhe yeh sab mazaak lag raha hai right. Maine tumhe apne dil ki baat batayi aur tumhe mazaak lag raha hai. Kh tumhe samajh kyu nahi araha hai tumhe pyar karta hoon damn it. Aur agar aisa hai toh ab hum sirf dost nahi reh sakte Kh. Aur ab hamein yahan se chalna chaiye and slowly release Kh's hand and then she turns the other way. Sh start walking towards the guesthouse but stops and thinks and then looks towards Kh who is facing the other side. And then slowly comes near her, very near which surprises Kh. He slowly removes the stole from Kh's neck.

Kh: Sh, yeh tum kya kar rahe'

Sh: Before she could finish, Chup Kh. He takes the stol and covers her back taking the stol in front and then covering her from front also.

Kh then realizes what Sh wanted to do and she turns to face him and he was ready with his killer looks.

Kh: Shhhh.

Sh: Mujhe tumhari fikra bhi hai Kh. Tumahri shirt bheeg gayi hai and with that he turns and start walking.

Kh: Thanks Sh. And start walking

But Sh without looking at Kh says Main tumse pyar karta hoon Kh aur tumhari izzat meri hai and start walking. Kh lovingly looks at him and then both start moving towards the guest house.

As soon as they reach the guesthouse they go to their room and change. Kh could feel that Sh is not talking to her. And his silence is killing her. They go for lunch and while coming back to their room she hears Sh asking the manager that when can they expect the roads to be cleared and when they can leave for Leh. But manager says we cant say anything sir as today also it is raining, its difficult to work and clear the roads in such a weather. But Sh says ok as soon as you get any info please let me know as I need to leave this place as soon as possible.

Kh was feeling very bad and also because she could see Sh in lot of pain. When they come to there room Kh slowly ask,

Kh: Sh'.

Sh: Main ab tumhare paas nahi reh sakta hoon Kh toh mujhse koi sawaal mat karo ki mein kyu bol raha hon jaldi jaane ke liye.

Kh: Surprised as to how he knows what she was going to ask. Par tumhe kaise pata ki mein kya poochne wali thi.

Sh: Kh mein tumse pyar karta hun aur yeh tumhe agar nahi samajh sakti toh mein kuch nahi kar sakta. Aur mujhe aisa lagta ki shayad tum bhi''.

Kh: She comes close to Sh and kya mein bhi haan bolo kya mein bhi.

Sh looks at her and then stands and hold her and looking directly in her eyes and says ki and says Aur mujhe aisa lagta hai ki shayad tum bhi mujhse pyar karti hun.

Kh: Tum pagal ho gaye ho.

Sh: Accha mein pagal hoon, toh mujhe yeh batao ki tum mujhe kuch dinon se janati ho, but how can you trust me and just taking me around the place aur upar se bina mujhse discuss kiya you were ready to share this room with me, bina soche you just gave me ur number and even came to my hotel to give me my watch, and even called me at your place, mera dard tumse dekha nahi jaata. Slowly he leaves her and goes and lie on the bed.

Kh: Standing and remembers what Sh said and its exactly same thing what she asked herself when she had gone out in the rain. And she wonders what she should do'

Edited by aditi305 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
nice continuation, ady!!...
this shaan is so straightforward........
waitin for the nxt part!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😍😍😍☺️☺️☺️.......this shaan is just killing me.i could so imagine kt being aggressive n hot wid his angry looks.omg superb part once again dear..wen they come close my heart is just out of control..awesome lovd it........pls pls upload soon..........🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks so much guys for liking the my update. Will be updating the nxt part soon. I am working on it. Ya this Shaan is straight forward and glad that you are liking this Shaan too.

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