** FF - Made for eachother **,Ch15 (Pg8) - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aditi,
I like the way you have weaved the location, Leh, into the story...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏👏👏 aditi just fantastic.wat should i say all that i wanna c wid shanak ur writing it down soooo beautifully.haiii extremely romantic......ur really very fast must say.....thanks fr such a wonderful part now dying 2 read the next part which shall b more hot n romantic😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful work aditi . pretty nice and refreshing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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way to go, ady!!...
can u PM me wen u update this??....
love
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nicee..........its very nice and do continue writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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the story is really great going aditi👏......do continue soon...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I am so happy that you guys are liking the story.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice work !!
Liking the story so far !!
Continue soon !
Luv,
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Precap: Kh looks at him with a confused look n quickly Sh changes the topic that he is happy that they can stay for one more day as he has fallen in love with this place and he looked at Kh. Kh felt shy and turned her face and smiled. In her heart she also said I think I am also falling in love with this place. Both knew what they wanted to say.

Chapter Eleven

They both are sitting on the bed on opposite ends and talking.

Kh: So how you decided to visit Leh.

Sh :I saw 3 idiots and fell in love with this place and hence wanted to see it badly. It's a beautiful place just like you.

Kh: Looked at him and with a smile said thanks for the compliment. Ok tell me about your family. You already know abt mine.

Sh: Starts telling her about Sunil, Madhavi, Akshay, Khusbhoo Bhabhi and Dadi.

Kh: She suddenly says arre wah you also have Dadi staying with you all, even my Dadi is staying with us but when you came yesterday she had gone to the temple. She is adorable, I love pulling her cheeks.


Sh: Even I was wondering jab tumne Uncle ko kahan say bye to Dadi. I thought did not saw anyone at home. But you are right they are adorable and so cute. Then he starts telling her about his business and how well respected and rich they are.

Kh is listening to all this and thinks, he is a rich person and we are just middle class people. Its too different societies. But how come Sh doesn't look like them. He is so down to earth and truthful with no hang-ups. Sh's phone starts ringing, he picks the phone and says

Sh: Ya Natasha tell me. Sorry I couldn't talk to you earlier.

Kh is keeping quiet as thought Natasha must be somebody close nahi toh kaun baar baar aur itni raat ko phone karega. She felt very sad. Then she reached for a pillow and slowly rested her head on it with a blanket till her legs.

Sh was talking to Natasha and was telling her abt Leh, how beautiful it is and what she has been doing. After they talked he turned towards Kh and saw she was sleeping. She looked divine. He just couldn't take his eyes from her. He came close to her and with one finger without disturbing her took a strand of hair from her face to the back of ear. Then he took the blanket to her arms. And just said you look beautiful even when you are sleeping. And with this he slept on the otherside of the bed. In the middle of the night Sh starts to feel cold and hence he took the blanket and covered himself slowly Kh pulls the blanket to herself, this keeps continuing when slowly they both come under the blanket as there is one single double bed blanket. During the night Sh and Kh have come very close to eachother. Kh is sleeping on Sh's arm and her one hand on Sh's back while Sh is holding her waist and his one leg slightly on her. Its morning, they both open there eyes slightly and stays in the same position as they have not realized it yet

KH: Good morning SH

Sh: Good morning Kh, and then kisses on her forehaead.

And they both hug eachother and close their eyes. Only to open after few seconds and also realizing how they have been sleeping. They get up quickly and start saying sooorrry to eachother. Kh gets up from the bed and leaves for bathroom. In the bathroom she is thinking what all just happened, and she looks herself in the mirror and touches her forehead where Sh had kissed her. She smiles and finally for the first time says I love you SH. Wish I could have all my morning like this. And keeps smiling. She can still feel Sh very close to her. But then the name Natasha comes in her mind. And she becomes little sad.

Outside Sh is also remembering as to what just happened. Sh, kahin Kh naaraaz toh nahi ho gayi. Par ek baat toh hai uska itna paas hona ek ajeeb si feeling hoti hai. Aisa mann karta hai usse apne aap mein chupa lo. Usmein koi banawat pan nahi hai, jaisa mein apni partiyon mein dekhta hun so much of artificiality. Mujhe uski yeh saadgi hi bahut pasand hai. Aur sabse important baat ki I can be myself in front of her. Suddenly he thinks something and goes out and when he returns he knocks at the bathroom door and calls out her name.

Sh: Khhhhhhh, Khhhhhhh.

Kh: Haan bolo

Sh: Can you please take these things.

Kh openes the door and what is it?

Sh: I went to a loacal vendor near the guesthouse and got toothpaste and paste, I thought you might need it.

Kh: Oh thank you, I was just thinking abt how to brush.

Finally she returns after brushing and bath in her red skirt and while top. And Sh also gets freshen up and changes to his jeans and Shirt. They both are hving tea overlooking tall hills which are covered in snow.

Kh: Tumne kal apne parivaar walon ke bare mein bataya, but yeh Natasha kaun hai jiska kal phone aya tha.

Sh: Arre who meri acchi friends, uske family aur hamarai family ke kuch business projects chal rahe hai.

Kh: Itni raat ko uska doobara call aya, lagta hai koi special hai.

Sh: Little worried and says, who meri bahut achi dost hai. That's it. By the way why are you so much interested in her?

Kh: Aisa nahi hai I was just asking like I aksed for your family members.

They have breakfast and then stroll around the monastry. The rain has stopped. As they are going Sh sees a clothes shop. He quickly goes there and buys two track pants and two shirts. Kh also buy trackpants and T-shirt. Suddenly its start raining again.

Edited by aditi305 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40

gr8 continuation, ady!.....i luv the way u r showing shaan.....its soo Shaantanu Khandelwal!!!

and its raining again.....we soap lovers love rain......dont we?!! :D
thnx for the PM!

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