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Posted: 14 years ago
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Precap: She gets the form and ask Shaan to fill it.Drip aur right hand mein injection lagne ki wajah se SH ka haath thodha numb ho gaya tha and he was not able to write. Seeing this KH come close to him takes the form from him sit near him and smile and says

Chapter Six

KH: Laaiye mein bhar deti hun, aapbatate jaaiye.

She was so close that everytime she moved her hand it brushed hands of SH. And as you all can guess our Cool dude SH was enjoying and admiring KH's beauty. Finally all the forms were finished and SH managed to sign them. SH changed to his clothes and was all set to leave. KH came back and was explaining his medicines.

SH: Aur agar mein bhool gaya toh.

KH: Toh aap mujhe call karke pooch lijiyega.

SH: Something happened in his stomach and he was thinking. Wow will take KH's no. Ok so what is ur number. He took out his cell but it flew in the air and bang on the floor.

KH reached for it and picked it. Nokia ka cell, bahut robust hota hai. Ok I will feed my number n gives back the cell.

KH: Just incase you need anything do let us know.

As she saw SH leave, KH said to her, why did I give him my no, when I hardly know him and he was just my patient? I have never done this before. She had no answer, someone called and she left without knowing any answer. SH at the hotel was just remembering all the moments with KH and he was thinking I need to meet her once again. But what should I say to her. Finally he told himself I have to meet her no matter what.Whole day he was in the hospital only, so in the evening he thought why not go for a walk on Mall road. As he was about to go he gets a call on his cell its Sunil (S).

S: SH how are you? Just got know that u were hospitalized. Now either you are coming back or we are coming there to take you.

SH: Dad chill I am perfectly fine. I was not well but now I am fit and fine.

S: I don't want to hear anything. You can always go there again.

SH: Dad I promise you I will take care of myself and I am feeling great. Incase I do feel bad then I will come back. Abhi toh yahan kuch dekha bhi nahi hai.

S: Ok Shaan as you say, but do keep us informed and take care Beta.

Sh: I will dad, don't worry.

After the call he went to the lobby and suddenly hear his name. And he just couldn't suppress his smile and excitement. He would have jumped at that very moment but controlled himself. Sh called out to Kh. Kh turned and saw him.

Sh: What a surprise? How come you are here? How did you know tat I am staying here?

Kh: Baap re eke k karke sawaal poochenge toh accha hoga.

They sat in the lobby of the hotel. And Sh ordered coffee. He was super happy.

Kh: I got to know where you are staying from the info you filled in the form and I came here because you left this watch in our hospital. Abhi abhi meri duty khatam hui,socha raste mein tumhara hotel padhta hai de deti hun.

Sh: I am sooo happy to see you here.

Kh raises her eyebrows

Sh: Mera matlab hai subah se room mein akelepadha padha bore ho raha tha, n when I saw you felt great to see a familiar face. Subah se ab jaake muh khola hai baat karne ke liye. How was your day?

Kh: Good, seeing her watch, ok now I am getting late. See you.

Sh suddenly holds Kh's hand and she is also stands like a statue. He realizes and leaves her hand.

Sh: I am sorry, just wanted to say can you take me around your beautiful city. Akele ghumna kaafi boring ho jaata hai. If you think its alright.

Kh: (she looked at him) and said ok I will try. But I need to ask my parents. Why not you come to my place tomorrow for breakfast as I have afternoon shift. If my parents oks then I am fine. (She gave him her address).

That night both of them were eagerly waiting for the morning and both didn't know what was happening to them. Kh told her mom about Sh and that he is coming home for breakfast and before her Mom can ask she only said, there is nothing between us, he is just alone here and wanted to have a friend who can take him around the city. But she again said but I told him that you have to take permission from my parents hence I thought why not all of you meet him. Hearing this Kh's mother gave her a smile and said you are very smart, but har kadam dhayan se uthana. Hum middle class walon ke paas sabse keemti cheez unki izzat hoti hai jisse tumhe sambhal ke rakhna hai KH. Kh don't worry Ma, I know aur yeh line kis film se chori kiya hai. And they both start laughing.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 aditi its really nice im just loving it.so dying 2 read wen they go 2 roam around the city i know u must b writting some awesome scenes..cant wait i loved all the partsšŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey aditi kya baat hai .....u r superb with FFs yar.....šŸ‘...and fast too.......loved it...
so shanak romance all set to go ...šŸ˜‰,,,,,
waiting for next part......šŸ˜›
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the comment. I try to be quick as I dont want my readers to wait. And hope you guys continue to encourage me.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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dear aditi.,

that was lovely.i have become a fan of this FF.Please do continue when u find time like karishma said cant wait to have their first outing session. superb imagination
i like ur simple and beautiful style of writing. keep it up.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Precap: That night both of them were eagerly waiting for the morning and both didn't know whats was happening to them. Kh told her mom about Sh and that he is coming home for breakfast and before her Mom can ask se only said, there is nothing between us, he is just alone here and wanted to have a friend who can him around the city. But she again said but I told him I have to take permission from my parents hence I thought why not all of you meet him.

Chapter 7

Sharp 9 o'clock, Sh knocked at the door. Kh's father opened the door with a smile and aksed him to come inside.

Sh: Namaste Sir.

Gupta (G): Hello beta. So you are a tourist here. Where are you from and what your father does?

Sh: He told him everything but his eyes were looking for someone. He saw at one of the door the curtains were moving as if someone is standing there.

Suddenly that figure came out and Kh's dad introduced her that she is Lavanya (L) my youngest daughter she is studying B.com and is in her First year.

Sh: Arre wah even I did B.com. (both L and Sh instantly liked and started talking about what she is studying and hows college. She told him she has some problem in this subject, how Shaan helped her by giving her tips as to how she should go abt it to study that subject and while all this was happening Kh'f father was smiling and reading newspaper. Suddenly Kh's mom called and said breakfast is ready. They all came and sat. Finally Sh couldn't bear and asked for Kh. Her mother said she is in the kitchen helping me. Thodhi der baad Khanak came in Capri which was above her ankle and a pink tee. Her hair was open and she was looking beautiful.

Kh: Hello Sh, how are you feeling? Hope L ki baton ne tumhari tabiyat bigaad toh nahi di and they all started laughing while L said Didiiiiii.

Sh: Nahi nahi mujhe toh kaafi maza aya, infact L, ur didi is so boring, tumahre saath toh baat karne mein bahut maza aya.

Everyone had a great time. Sh thanked everyone for a wonderful breakfast and asked that if you permit can Kh take me around. G said ya she can and even her mother smiled and said yes and keep yes keep coming till you are here and when ever you want home cooked food.

Next day it was weekend, hence Kh had a day off. So Sh and Kh planned to meet at the Mall road and from there they will start doing sightseeing.

Sh came in a blue jeans with white full sleeve shirt and black leather jacket with glares while coincidently Kh also came in blue jeans and white shirt and a black sweater in her hand. As soon both of them saw eachother they started laughing. Wow what a coincidence said SH. Khanak also smiled and said chale. They got in the car n were heading to Thiksey Monastry. Its monastry were Dalai Lama also comes. It has huge Buddha idols. It's on top of the hill.



Sh and Kh started climbing the stairs and Kh told Sh to take it easy as he should not take exertion. They reached the monastry and prayed, Sh looked at Kh who had folded her hand with eyes closed and he wanted to just stare at her. They went around the monastry and at one of the places it was very dark and there was no one. Sh screamed and Kh jumped and got so afraid that she just hugged Sh very tightly. Sh who was taken by surprise started consoling her that doesn't worry it was I, just wanted to scare you. But Kh was still holding him tight, so tight that he could feel her heart beat, slowly he also wrapped his hands around her and slowly he also started to tighten his grip. It was something magical, as both of them couldn't do anything. They just held to eachother not wanting to leave. Suddenly sound of bell they heard and suddenly they got apart. Feeling embarrassed. Kh hair got stuck in Sh jacket's zip. And as she moved away she felt the pain. Sh told her to wait. He slowly started to take out her hair and even Kh was also trying and while doing many a times their fingers got entangled to eachother and they both felt something, but it was something nice. Soft fingers touching eachother. Finally they got all the hair out.

Kh: I am sorry, I was scared

Sh: Its ok, I scared you, I am sorry

They again saw eachother and Kh had a smile and then started laughing Shaan asked why are you laughing.

Kh: aaj tumhara aur mera sab kuch same to same ho raha hai, ek jaise kapde pehna aur phir ek saath sorry bolna aur ek saath hugg karna, oops. She just realized what she said. Slowly she said sorry.

Sh: Its ok, don't worry. But very happy as he could still feel her.

Kh get a call from her dad.

Kh: Haan dad boliye.

G: Kh, how are you and Sh.

KH: We are fine Dad. We will be leaving the monastry in 15 min.

G: Kh there is a landslide and you guys wont be able to come home tonight. Why don't you stay in the monastery guesthouse for tonight? But do keep us informed. Your mother is little worried but happy that atleast you are with Shaan and not alone. Ok beta takecare and be safe.

Kh: Bye dad, don't worry.

Sh: Kya hua, any problem, if your parents want we can return right now.

KH: No no infact they want me to stay with you.

Sh: Whattttttt

KH: (yeh tujhe kya ho raha hai, kuch bhi bol rahi hai) mera matlab there is a landslide on the way back, which will be cleared by late night. Hence Dad told me to book a room for us in the guesthouse of this monastery for tonight.

Sh was super happy, he thought I have never been so happy in my life. He got some more chance to stay with Kh. Somewhere Kh was also feeling happy that she could spend some time with him. She liked to be around him. They went to the guesthouse manager and asked for two rooms, he provided them with the keys.

But before going to the guest house they strolled around the monastery. As they were walking they saw a women who sounded worried and was crying a little. She had two little children. Kh saw them and went to them, what happened? They told her that they are tourist here and cant go back to the hotel because of the landslide and they have two little children and guest house manager said there are no rooms available. Now tell me what shall I do. It will be cold in the night where will we go. Kh got sad hearing this but told her to wait and let me try something. She went to Sh who was playing with the lady's kids and was enjoying, laughing, Kh was smiling watching them, but as she came close Sh '

Sh: What happened, why they are so upset whose that lady. Do you know her?

Kh: Do you always ask so many questions at the same?

Sh: Ladkiyan actually kam mauka deti hai bolne ka, toh jab mauka mile tabhi sab bol do.

Kh: Irritated, kya mein bolne ka mauka nahi deti.

Sh: Mein tumhari baa thodhe na kar raha tha

Kh: Little sad and little jealous, toh kiski baat kar rahe the, khabardaar kisi aur ka naam liya toh

Edited by aditi305 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice one aditi.......khanak in capri and jeans...i loved the way u mentioned the minute details..
and khanak's hair getting stuck in shan's jacket...😳.....
and finally what we wanted from ages ....shanak getting stuck due to landslidešŸ˜‰..and khanak getting jealous😃.......so wats happening there then?šŸ˜.......do continue..
Edited by m4manju - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one ady!!...its improving and getting more interesting!!...
do continue.....and u r damn fast!!
love
ammu
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Precap:

Sh: What happened, why they are so upset whose that lady. Do you know her?

Kh: Do you always ask so many questions at the same?

Sh: Ladkiyan actually kam mauka deti hai bolne ka, toh jab mauka mile tabhi sab bol do.

Kh: Irritated, kya mein bolne ka mauka nahi deti.

Sh: Mein tumhari baa thodhe na kar raha tha

Kh: Little sad and little jealous, toh kiski baat kar rahe the, khabardaar kisi aur ka naam liya toh

Chapter Eight

Sh: he came close to her and softly said Toh.

Kh: (she realized what she just said and was wondering I hardly know this guy and why I am feeling sad and jealous if he is talking about some other girl. Kh tum pagal ho rahi ho, get back to the point. In the meantime Sh was very close to herand she could feel his breathing near her forehead) Mera matlab hai ek ladki ke samne doosri ladki ka naam lena its not good manners. Khair important thing is that lady is in difficult situation, she has two kids but there are no rooms available. I was just thinking (before she could complete)

Sh: Sh again came close to her and said that we should give one of our rooms to them, if and only if I feel alright with that. Right

Kh: Surprised and happy and said right.

Sh: Yaar yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat, mujhe koi problem nahi hai bas you should also feel fine. Waie bhi itne chote bacchon ke saath who kaha jaayegi. Right… and smiled

Kh: Right and smiled, I have no problem. So I will just go and tell her.

Kh goes and tell her that she can take one of their rooms. That lady blesses them and is really happy. And she takes the key from them and leaves.

Sh and Kh walk for some more time but as its getting dark, its getting cold also. They decide to go to the room. They reached the room and find there is one joint doube bed and as you all must be thinking there was a sofa but……. it normal single seater. Kh sees the room and the joint bed. And says Joint Bed yeh kya hai, while Shaan happily says Joint bed wow. Kh looks at him. He says ab maine yeh room mein yeh bed nahi rakhwaya, so don't look at me like that. Suddenly his phone starts ringing, he pics it and says…

Sh: Oh hi Natasha, how are you, have you reached.

Khanak hearing a girls name sad and she leaves for bathroom to get fresh.

N; I am fine, just reached London. Tum toh yaar bhool hi gaye mujhe. No phone, no mail and no sms.

Sh: Do you always ask so many questions at the same? Suddenly remembers this is what Kh told him, Sh tu marega.

N: She laughs. And tell him about her journey and what her plans are.

Sh: For the first time he was not interested what she was saying. He was just looking at the bathroom door and he knew he was waiting for that simple, beautiful, innocent girl called Kh.

N: Sh are you there, she felt weird.

Sh: Ya ya I am there, N can we talk later I am little busy.

N: Sad but says ok. Bye and Takecare

Sh: You too, bye.

As he finished the call, he kept asking himself what is happening to him, why all the time he wants to see Kh, why all the time he wants to be with Kh, why all the time he wants to talk to Kh. Am I falling in love her. Why for the first time he did not enjoyed talking with Natasha, why all this while he never remembered her and did not even felt like calling her. Sh dude Kh sahi keh rahi tu bahut sawaal poochne laga hai.

He sees just then Kh comes out of the bathroom but is wearing a redlong skirt. Sh was wondering yeh kahan mila. He asks Kh

Sh: Yeh guesthouse wale kapde bhi dete hai kya, mujeh bhi bata do toh main bhi le aao. And started laughing.

Kh: Mujhse kyu itne sawaal pooch rahe jaake manager se hi pooch lijiye.

Sh: Wondering yeh isko kya hua achanak, why she is talking so rudely. Kh koi problem hai mein toh mazaak kar raha tha.

Kh: Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai, N ya kisi bhi ladki se Sh baat kare why I am feeling bad. Sorry I was rude. Actually Hospital se when I leave I change, yeh skirt bag mein padha tha. Waise Sh I need to tell you something

Sh: His heartbeat started beating as to what was Kh going to ask…. Ya tell me I am listening

Kh: Who mujhe bahut bhook lag rahi hai, khana khane chale and sorry I was rude to you.

Hearing this Sh thought bas, yehi kehna tha tumko and sat on the sofa holding his head. Haa chalo. But as he got up he stepped on Kh skirt and was abt to fall but Kh hold him and Sh covered her waist with his hand and his face was on Kh neck and even Kh's hand covered his wait and her face near his chest. Sh just tightened his grip around Kh and Kh didn't say anything as he was just feeling Sh's touch. As Sh tightened she also reciprocated. Sh suddenly moved his had to her back touched her nect with his face. Kh felt Sh's breathing on her neck and it brought ticklish feeling, which she was enjoying it and all this while she had closed her eyes and feeling him. But there was a knock on the door and they both left eachother. Sh said mein dekhkar ata hun while Kh straightened her hair and her dress.

One of the attendants came and said dinner is ready and you can come because after one hour dinner time is over. Sh said ya we will come. Sh came to Kh and said dinner is ready. Kh looked at him and said ok anf for a min they kept looking at eachother and wondering what just happened and what they are feeling for eachother when they have met just few days earlier.

Sh: Kh I am sorry, I stepped on your skirt by mistake. I hope you are not angry

Kh: No its ok, lets go for dinner.

They go and have dinner. While having dinner suddenly Kh sees a mouse near her leg, she got scared but couldn't say anything he just held Sh hand very tightly and trying to show him the mouse by her eyes. For a second Sh was surprised yeh Kh ko kya hua that she has held my hand so tightly and also smiled then he turned and saw what Kh was trying to say and looked down and had a hearty laugh and shooed the mouse. After that kept his other hand on hers and said Kh chua chala gaya. She was little embarrassed and removed her hand. Even after the dinner Sh was laughing and Kh getting angry.

Kh: What is there to laugh?

Sh: You should have seen your face, aisa lag raha tha ki who chua tumko khane wala hai.

Kh: Shut up.Toh tum toh bahut strong ho na.

Sh: Bilkul hun, nahi toh jo tumhare haathon ne kiya hai uske baad….. before he could complete.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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dear aditi i read and enjoyed both the parts together...
Leh monastery is stunning have been there once.
Khanak 's dresses are awesome capri,jeans,longskirt WAH!!!! wish the cvs showed something like this in RBO perhaps after shanak unite...
very nice yaar.The mouse part was a novelty. have not seen anything like that...
and shaan/khaank are looking gr8 togetehr in all those cute romantic scenes.. even before they start to romance...
U are entering for the RBO FF contest na...please do write for the contest ..too..superb...

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