ShaNak OS ( Only Best Friends??) Epilogue p4 - Page 3

ufff....sooo nicely done...but you made me wonder about how they come to realize their love for each completely and then how do they express it lol...you should write the story about that. like a new sequel book type thing 😊

Noorya thanx for the lovely os. It was typical BW style with shaan saying DDLJ sort of dialogues but it was very original in the treatment rendered by u.

Originally posted by: mjht_lover

ufff....sooo nicely done...but you made me wonder about how they come to realize their love for each completely and then how do they express it lol...you should write the story about that. like a new sequel book type thing 😊

thanks a lot dear😳

Originally posted by: sshriyaa84

Noorya thanx for the lovely os. It was typical BW style with shaan saying DDLJ sort of dialogues but it was very original in the treatment rendered by u.

And really really good simple work there.,thanx.

thanks a ton dear😳

Great OS Noorya.....it was really sweet.

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Great OS Noorya.....it was really sweet.

Shanak's friendship was so cute......

Bechara, he even got slapped in the OS by her.....😆

But alls well that ends well!!!

Brilliant work hun!!!!

thanks a lot dear😳...

Helloz Odhinians😛

about a week ago i wrote an Os

and some of u requested me to write somethin

about ShaNak confession

i tried to avoid it coz im

really bad writin romantic scenes😆😆

anyways i tried somethin and hope its not

that bad and if it is then im really sorry

par mujhe aur kuch nahin hoga😆

Only Best Friends??

Epilogue

2 Years Later

Today was a special day..every girl waits for this day her whole life....the day of her wedding and sooner or later this day come...today this girl is Khanak Mehra'she is gettin married...standing near the window lookin at the stars...she was lookin happy indeed but a ray of sadness was hidden in her eyes coz she knew today was the last day she was spendin here in her house with her parents and tomorow this house will not be hers anymore.

However Khanak was not afraid to be a part of a new family thinkin if they will like her or hw she has to behave coz they already know her and she knows they like her she knows He likes her and embrassin her new life with Him made her happy...startin the most important chapter of her life with Him was somethin she never thought...they were meant to be...He was her life partner..Shantanu Khandelwaal.....yes today Khanak and Shantanu are gettin married and rememberin how all this happened Khanak smiles....

Flashaback

Months have passed after the misunderstandin and finaly Khanak forgave herself. Everything became like before...Kahank, Shaan, their fights and their friendship. Everything was the same yet so different...they were not thinkin the same way about each other. They had fallen in love but none of them confess it. The fear of loosin a precious friend did not gave them the courage. And all that happened after that party. They did not realized first but time made them realized it.

Shaan couldnt sleep at nights thinkin about khanak and hw to tell her that he loves her. Hw to tell her that every time he close his eyes he sees her..her smile...her big eyes...hw to tell her when she's not around his eyes are only searchin for her and hw to tell her that she was not a want for him but a need...he needed khanak in his life without her he was nothing.

Shaan : how ? kaise boloun khanak se ki main uss se kitna pyaar karta hoon ?

Akshay : jaise tumne abhi khud se kaha...(surpised shaan turned n find A)

Shaan : bhaya aap ??...voh'actually main..

Akshay : main batata hoon...tum khanank se pyaar karte ho and u dont know hw to tell her right ?

Shaan : pya'ar..no..nahin..main khanak se pyaar nahin...

Ak : ooh..tho tum khanak se pyaar nahin karte ?

Shaan : naa'nahin bhaya....

Ak : hmmm....acha hai (shaan gets curious with this answer)

Shaan : kyun ?

Ak : well...kahan mera handsome n stylish chota bhai Shantanu Khandelwal aur kahan voh simple si and not soo bautiful Khanak....

Shaan : bhaya plzz....khanak baadsoorat nahin hai okay...voh bohut khubsoorat hai infact voh saare ladkyon se khubsoorat hai...aur mujhse bhi better dikhti hai...tho aap uske bare kuch galat mat boliye hun

Ak : arre tu itna hyper kyun hota hai?...tu todi uss se shaadi karne vaala hai

Shaan : kyun ? main khanak se shaadi nahin kar sakta kya ??

Ak : nahin nahin of course kar sakte ho....par abhi tho tune bola ki tum uss se pyaar nahin karte...

Shaan : arre voh tho maine apse jooth bola taaki aap...(ak smiles hearin shaan's confession n shaan understood)

Ak : idiot ! aur kab tak chupana chahta tha humse ?

Shaan smiles : voh actually main pehle khanak se kehna chahta tha phir aap sab ko bolta

Ak : tho ab wait kis baat ki ? jaldi khanak se baat kar aur mom dad ko batao (sh smiles n hugs ak. Then Ak left n when he was about to close the door shaan stoped him by askin a question)

Shaan : bhaya.....khanak'achi hai naa ?

Ak smiles : she is the best...(n left leavin shaan all happy)

Here khanak was not sleepin neither. She wanted to call shaan just to hear his voice but it was late n she didnt had any excuse...

Khanank : main uss se boloun kya ? ki kyun maine itni raat ko phone kiya...par shaan is waqt soota nahin hai...haan par usually tum tho sooti ho naa...c'mon khanak ek phone call hi tho hai ! kuch bhi bol....par kya ?....hey bhagvaan yeh pyaar bhi kitni ajeeb hai....kal tak main shaan ko adi raat bhi phone karti tho mujhe koi problem nahin hota tha...par aaj ek phone karne mein main itna ghabra rahi hoon.....ab aap hi kuch kijiye naa...(n her phone rings n seein shaan's name she gets happy) Shantanu ! (lookin up) thank u bhagvaanji...Hello

Shaan : heumm hi khanak

Khanak : hi....

Shaan : tumhe disturb tho nahin kar raha hoon ?

Khanank : no..bolo kaise phone kiya ?

Shaan : haan voh....actually main tumse kuch poochna chahta tha

Khanak : haan bolo

Shaan : khanak voh...hmm...tum..tum abhi tak sooyi nahin ?..i mean tum humesha 11 baje soo jaati ho aur abhi ek bajne wale hain'tum theek tho ho naa ?

Khanak : yeahh....voh actually....mujhe neend nahin aa rahi thi....

Shaan smiles : kyun ? mere bare mein soch rahi thi kya ? (khanak gets shocked n thoughts)

Khanak thoughts : isse kaise pata ?? maine tho abhi tak kuch bola hi nahin...

Shaan : khanak ?...r u there ? soo gaayi kya ?

Khanak couldnt say anythin except a : hun ?

Shaan : arre kya hua ? c'mon yaar main bas mazak kar raha tha....

Khanak : shantanu its not funny ok ! tum batao ki tumne phone kyun kiya ??

Shaan : phone heuum....bas yun hi..tumse baat karne ke liye....(khanak smiles hearin this n gets happy)

Khanak : yun hi mujhse baat karne ke liye ?..par tum kuch bol hi nahin rahe ho tho main phone rakhti hoon mujhe neend aa rahi hai bye !

Shaan : KHANAK ! khanak rukho mujhe kuch kehna hai !

Khanak still smilin : kya ?

Shaan : voh...kya hum kal mil sakte hain ? (khanak's smile reached her ears but she tries to act normal)

Khanak : kal ?...nahin shaan mujhe kal kam hai....

Shaan : plzz khanak mujhe tumse ek zaroori baat karni hai....aur tumse milna bohut zaroori hai...(hearin shaan's desperate voice khanak gets concerned)

Khanak : ok fine hum kal milte hain par shantanu....tum theek ho naa ? i mean nothin serious ?

Shaan : hum uske bare mein kal baat karte hain okay...tho phir 2 baje park mein mile ?

Khanak : ok...

Shaan : goodnite and....sweet dreams...

The next day shaan was waitin khanak at the park n was tensed about hw he will tell her that he loves her....without carrin about people around him he was practicing in front of a tree

Shaan : khanak..i heuumm...i mean main...main voh......kya main main kar raha hai yaar ! sidhe bol naa ! take 2.....khanak....kuch waqt se main badal gaaya hoon...i mean main nahin mere feelings...tumhare liye...matlab...its not bad it's a good thing.....wait a sec mere feelings aise badal gaaye yeh achi baat hai yah buri ?...anyways...what i mean to say is that im....im....im such an idiot !

Khanak : really ?? (shaan gets shocked to hear khanak's voice n turns to face her)

Shaan : khanak !?....tum ?...tum kab aayi ??

Khanak : arre tumhi ne tho mujhe yahan bulaya....aur btw tum iss tree se kya bol rahe the ?

Shaan : heuumm....kuch bhi tho nahin...main koi idiot todi hoon jo tree se baat karunga..

Khanak : par abhi tho tumne bola...that ur an idiot (n she starts laughin)

Shaan : haan haan mazar udhao mera ! tumhe tho sirf yahin karna aata hai...(she was still laughin unable to control herself'first shaan felt annoyed but then he forgot everythin seein her smile n just gazed her)

Khanak controlin her laugh : acha sorry...ab batao kya baat hai ?

Shaan : heuumm haan voh...(just then an idea strokes his mind n he smiles) pehle chalo vahan uss bench pe baith the hain....(showin it to her they went and sat)

Khanak : ab bolo

Shaan : ek baat batao...shaadi ke bare mein tumhara kya khial hai ?

Khanak surprised by his question : shaadi ?...why r u askin me this ?

Shaan : arre yaar mere sawaal pe doosra sawaal mat kar just answer me

Khanak : ok...well abhi tak maine shaadi ke bare mein socha nahin hai but i think shaadi tab karni chahiye jab tumhe poori tarah yakeen ho ki vahin tumhare liye bana hai...

Shaan : matlab ?

Khanak : see...zindagi mein hum bohut saare log se milte hain voh ache ho ya bure yeh baat hume unhe jaan ne ki baat pata chalti hai...phir waqt ke saath humara unse ek rishta jod jaata hai...aur kabhi kabhi kisi se mil kar uss se jaan kar hum alag sa feel karte hain...

Shaan : kaise alag ?

Khanak : well same feelin nahin hoti..jaise baki logon se milke hui...voh insaan bohut khas baan jaata hai...humesha uske bare mein sochna uss se milne ka maan karna uske bina adhurapaan mehsoos karna...voh insaan tumhari dil aur dimaag pe khabza kar leta hain (shaan was smilin listenin her n recognizein himself in her words not noticin khanak lost in her own words) chahe jitni bhi koshis karo par uske elava koi aur baat soojh thi hi nahin hai..soone se pehle ek baar uski awaaz sun ne ko maan karta hai aur....(realizin she was goin too far she stopped talkin)

Shaan : yeh sab tumhe kaise pata hai ? i mean ki aisa hota hai jab hum kisi khas se milte hain ?...tumhare saath yeh sab ho raha hai kya ? (khanak feels embarassed n tries to avoid lookin at shaan)

Khanak : what rubbish...mujhe aisa kuch nahin hua hai...main bas...tum...tum mujhe chodo aur yeh batao ki tumhe yeh sab kyun jaan na hai ?? n dont tell me yeh sab tumhare saath ho raha hai

Shaan : kyun ? main uss khas ladki se nahin mil sakta kya ?

Khanak : plzz shantanu...tum roz ek khas ladki se milte ho..kabhi pooja tho kabhi tina aur voh nahin tho shanaya....

Shaan : haan tho ?...voh bohut khas thi mere liye

Khanak laughs : ya right...issi liye do din baad unhe chor ke kisi aur ko khas bana deta

Shaan : haan haan theek hai...ab meri kya galati hai agar voh log uthne bhi khas nahin thi...but seriously what if i've found that special girl..and i want to marry her ? (khanak gets shocked hearin this)

Khanak : WHAT ?...what r u sayin shaan ? tum aur shaadi ???

Shaan : arre yaar whats wrong with u ?...ab main shaadi bhi nahin kar sakta kya ?

Khanak : shantanu shaadi ek mazak nahin hai...its a very serious step

Shaan : i know...aur issi liye tho main shaadi karna chahta hoon uss se...taaki voh jaan le ke main kitna serious hoon uske bare mein aur shaadi ke bare mein...(khanak felt a suden pain in her heart as if someone was extractin it from her chest)

Khanak : tum sach mein uss se bohut paar karte ho ?

Shaan smiles : bohut ziada...infact usse khone ke daar se main uss se yeh baat bol nahin paa raha

Khanak : kyun ?

Shaan : kahin usne reject kiya tho....tho humari dosti khatam naa ho jaaye (for a sec khanak though it could be her...she is his friend n he really cares about her..but she is not his only friend...)

Khanak : uska naam kya hai ?

Shaan : kyun ? tum uss se baat karogi kya ?

Khanak : baat tho tumhe hi karne padega shantanu...par haan main yeh jaan na chahti hoon ki kya voh tumhare layak hai ki nahin...(shaan hesitates first but again an idea strokes his mind)

Shaan : Ria...(khanak thought for a sec n remembered that girl)

Kahank : Ria ?? voh jo naayi aayi hai ? (shaan just nods) shantanu tumhe ho kya gaaya hai ? voh bilkul bhi theek nahin hai....3 mahine bhi nahin hue hain usse yahan aane mein aur mumbai ki saare ladke usse jante hain....jab dekho lipstick lagati rehti aur kapde !...infact i dont even call it clothes...apne choti behen ki kapde pehen ke ghoomti rehti hai

Shaan : haan tho aaj ke ladkyan aise hi hain kahank...mini dresses and quite popular

Khanak : whats wrong with u shaan ? saare ladkyan aise nahin hai...aur tum..tum itne bhi desperate nahin ho naa tumhe koi bhi mil sakti hai...just wait aur voh ladki jo tumhare layak hai voh zaroor aayegi...

Shaan : sach mein ? mujhe koi bhi achi ladki mil sakti hai ?

Khanak smiles : of course...aur agar usne naa kaha naa iska matlab hai ki voh achi ladki thi hi nahin...shantanu tum shararti ho but ur a good person...aur uss Ria se tho tumhare ex girlfriends better thi...(shaan laughs)

Shaan : vaise...main ria se pyaar nahin karta...bas tumhara reaction dekhna chahta tha

Khanak : shaan tum bhi naa !...main tho yeh soch rahi thi ki meri waje se ab tumhara dil tooth jaayega aur tum mazak kar rahe ho !

Shaan smiles : ok sorry....acha yeh batao mere liye kaisi ladki theek hogi ?

Khanak : ek achi ladki

Shaan : what achi khanak ? explain karo naa what do u mean by achi...

Khanak : achi matlab...jo sab se pehle tumse sacha pyaar kare...tumhari respect kare tumhare ghar walon ka khial rakh paaye ek achi biwi baan paaye aur haan apne size ki kapde pehen le...

Shaan smiles : hmm u mean someone like....tina ? voh tho humesha jeans pehen thi hai aur jab maine usse choda usne bohut rooya...poor girl bohut pyaar karti thi mujhse...

Khanak : ya right bohut pyaar karti thi...par tumse nahin tumhari paison se ! jab bhi tumse milti thi kuch naa kuch kharid leti...aur jeans pehenti hai lekin upar ko bhool jaati hai

Shaan : yaar khanak agar tum inn chote chote details pe dhiyan dogi naa tho mujhe iss janamm mein koi nahin milne vaali...what do u think about anjali ?

Khanak : No !

Shaan : priya ?

Khanak : No !

Shaan : kahank tum mujhse shaadi karogi ??

Kahank : haan ! ( she just realized what she said n shaan smiles'she couldnt say a word to justify herself)

Shaan : karogi ? mujhse shaadi ?

Khanak lookin down : shantanu...voh...tum mazak baan kar its really not funny (she stood up n wanted to leave the place but shaan holds her hand n faces her)

Shaan : maine kab kaha ki main mazak kar raha hoon khanak ?

Khanak : kyunki main tumhe janti hoon...aur todi der pehle tum ria ko leke mujhe bewakoof bana rahe the...

Shaan : bewakoof nahin...main bas yeh jaan na chahta tha ki tum mere bare mein kya sochti ho issi liye maine ria ka naam liya...par jo kuch maine kaha voh jooth nahin hai khanak...mujhe sach mein pyaar hua hai...meri ek bohut hi achi dost se...infact meri sab se achi dost se (khanak's heart started racin like hell hearin all this) usse khone ke daar se main itne waqt se chup raha hoon par apne daar ki waje se uss se aur door nahin reh sakta....issi liye maine faisla kiya hai ki aaj main usse yahan bula kar uss se apni dil ki baat kehdounga (khanak still lookin down not darin facin shaan but a lil smile draws her face) khanak I Love You....(she couldnt ignore these words so looks up at shaan) main tumse bohut pyaar karta hoon khanak...humari yeh dosti mere liye pyaar mein kab aur kaise badal gaayi mujhe pata hi nahin chala...par ab tumhare elava mere dil aur dimaag mein kuch nahin hai bas tumhara hi naam zubaan pe hai aur humesha tumhare pass rehne ka maan karta hai...(khanak couldnt believe what she was hearin...shaan loves her she never thought she would get soo happy knowin this...all that time what was happenin to her was happenin to shaan also it was unbelievable for her)

Khanak : shantanu....tum ? (before she could say anythin shaan gets closer to her n she looses her words)

Shaan : khanak meri aankhon mein dekho...kya mere aankhein tumse jooth bol sakte hain ? (he gets lil more closer) kya main tumse jooth bol sakta hoon ? (gettin closer n brushin her arm with his fingers before placin her hand on his chest) kya mera dil jooth bol sakta hai khanak ?...nahin...aur yeh baat tum bhi janti ho kyunki agar koi mujhe janta hai tho voh tum hi ho...(carresin her cheek) tumhi voh khas ladki ho jisne meri zindagi badal di...khanak mumbai mein kya poori dunya mein mujhe tumse achi ladki nahin milegi aur naa hi main kisi aur ko chahta hoon coz i only love u...(shaan kneels down holdin her hand) mujhse shaadi karogi khanak ? Will u marry me ? (khanak's eyes get moist listenin shaan n slowly she kneels down also)

Khanak : pata hai har ek ladki yeh sab sun na chahti hai...koi uss se kahe ki voh uss se kitna pyaar karta hai uss se shaadi karna chahta hai...aur jab yeh baat uss se voh insaan kehta hai jiss se voh khud pyaar karti hai tho voh duniya ki sab se khush naseeb ladki baan jaati hai

Now shaan couldnt believe khanak...she loves him he couldnt say anythin just stare at her in disbelieve..n khanak not holdin herself anymore hugged him tightely..shan wraps his arms around khanak in a hold tight...slowly he whispers in her ear brushin her hair with his lips.

Shaan : I Love You Khanak...(n she brokes the hug to look at him smilin)

Khanak : i love u too shantanu...(they stand up n shaan lovingly lookin at her kisses her forehead) tumne yeh baat mujhe pehle kyun nahin bataya idiot?

Shaan : arre tumne bhi tho nahin bataya

Khanak : shantanu ! main ek ladki hoon...main todi pehle bol sakti hoon

Shaan : haan tho main bhi ek ladka hoon...aur main ek bohut hi sharif ladka hoon...aur koi bhi maha purish ne yeh nahin kaha hai ki pehle ladkon ko apni dil ki baat kehni chahiye

Khanak : tum naa ladkyon kabhi samajh hi nahin paoge...(she turns her back in anger crossin her arms...shaan smiles n hugs her from behind)

Shaan : ab tho bol diya naa...ab tum bhi bolo

Khanak : kya ?

Shaan : that u love me

Khanak smiles : kyun ? main kyun boloun ? (shaan turns her to face him)

Shaan : kyun matlab kya ?...tum mujhse pyaar karti ho issi liye

Khanak : haan par tumhe yeh baat batana zaroori tho nahin hai naa

Shaan : zaroori hai khanak mujhe tumhari mooh se i love u sun na hai

Khanak : par maine ek baar bol diya naa

Shaan : c'mon khanak ab yeh baat kis idiot ne kaha hai ki i love u sirf ek baar bolna chahiye...?

Khanak smiles : tho tum chahte ho ki main tumse kahun

Shaan : haan khanak

Khanak : theek hai...(shaan smiles waitin for her to say it) par meri ek shart hai

Shaan : shart ?...what ?

Khanak : tum inn saare logon ko dekh rahe ho yahan ?

Shaan : nahin main aandha hoon...of course dekh raha hoon

Khanak : tumhe inn sab se kehna hai ki tum....pagal ho ! uske baad main boloungi

Shaan : yeh kya baat hui khanak...main aisa kuch nahin karunga...arre hum abroad todi hai yaar kal agar phirse yeh log mujhe dekhenge tho kya sochenge ?

Khanak : theek hai mat bolo....main bhi nahin boloungi (sayin this she was leavin the place n shaan had no choice left)

Shaan to himself : chalo shaan beta...itna tho tu kar hi sakta hai naa khanak ke liye (lookin at khanak who was leavin the park) EXCUSE ME....everyone...(people turn to look at shaan confuse n khanak stops in her tracks surprised that he did it n slowly turns to face him) my name is Shantanu Khandelwal aur....aur main aap sab se yeh bolna chahta hoon ki....ki main pagaal hoon....(all of them get surprise by shaan's confession n start givin him a questioning look) im sure u guys are thinkin that why i am sayin this right ? (some of them nod n khanak was smilin watchin their reactions)well...uss ladki ko dekh rahe vahan green churidar mein? (pointin at khanak who lost her smile feelin embarssed n shaan smiles) main uss se bohut pyaar karta hoon aur uske pyaar mein pagaal ho gaaya hoon (people around understood what was goin on n were smilin seein these two)

A man : acha....tho yeh pyaar ka mamla hai...

Shaan smiles : right....tho usne mujhe kaha ki agar main sab ke samne apna pyaar izhar karun tho voh mujhse i love u bolegi....tho khanak...main sab ke samne bolta hoon ki main...tumse bohut pyaar karta hoon aur tumse shaadi karna chahta hoon.....

A woman : arre beti soch kya rahi ho bolo usse apni dil ki baat...

A guy : haan behenji bolo...aise darin ladke kahan milte hain aaj kal

Khanak : par maine isse yeh bolne ke liye nahin kaha tha...maine sirf yahin kaha ki yeh khud ko pagaal kahe...(shaan walks toward her n stops just two feets away)

Shaan : haan tho kaha naa khanak...ki main tumhare pyaar mein bilkul pagaal ho chuka hoon...ab tumhari bari...say...that u love me

Khanak feelin shy : shaan what r u doin...sab dekh rahe hain

Shaan : tho ? tumhe iske bare mein pehle sochna chahiye tha...aur inko involve karna tumhara idea tha...

Khanak : haan par mujhe laga ki tum shart ko maanoge nahin

Shaan : apne pyaar ko sabite karne ke liye main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon...yeh tho itni badi baat nahin hai...(khanak smiles)

Khanak : toda pass aao (shaan bends a lil n khanak whispers in his ear) I Love You...(shaan smiles lookin into her eyes)

An old nany : arre kya bola ??

Shaan lookin at her : dadiji isne kaha....i love u ( all of them get happy n start clappin for them n shaan huged khanak sayin i love u)

End of Flashback

Khanak was still lost in her dream world n did not realized her mom n Natasha were there. Natasha was shaan's good friend and her older sister khusboo always wanted tashu to marry shaan and when she got to know he was in love with Khanak first she was against it and natasha told her that shaan is just her friend and that she loves someone else. After knowin this khushboo apologized to khanak n was happy to have her as choti bahu of Khandelwal family.

Natasha : kahank (khanak turns n saw them) baraat aa gayi hai aur shaadi ka waqt ho gaaya hai...mujhe nahin lagta shaan aur ziada wait kar sakta hai...(khanak smiles shyly..her mom puts kaala tika behind her ear)

Mom : nazaar naa lage meri beti ko...bohut khubsoorat lag rahi ho...

Natasha : aunty...apne khanak ko tho kaala tika laga liya buri zaraar se bacha ne ke liye...lekin bechare shaan ko kaun bachaayega khanak ki khubsoorati se...i think we should call a doctor kyunki voh behosh tho hone hi wala hai (n she laughs)

Mom : aur kitna taang karogi meri beti ko...(lookin at khanak) aaj main bohut khush hoon kyunki aaj meri beti ki shaadi hai teri doli uthegi iss ghar se aaj...(with teary eyes she huged khanak)

Tashu : arre kuch aansoon kanyaadan ke liye bhi bachaaye aur vaise bhi niche shaan roo raha hoga intezaar mein tho chalein ?...

Tashu, Khanak n her mom came down and all the guests smile lookin at the bride shaan looks up and lost himself seein khanak ...she always looked beautiful but today she was different she was lookin like an angel...kajaal in her big brown eyes her soft lips her pink cheeks her long dark hair were hiden under her ghoungaat...shaan was starin at her with his mouth open forgettin everyone around him...akshay saw him n signs to khushboo who laughs...he then bends down n whispers

Aksay : shaan mooh tho baand kar...(shaan realized that his mouth was open n feels embarassed')

Finaly khanak sat near shaan who looks at her with a smile...she looks at him for a sec then lowers her gaze smilin n the pandit started the ritual. They took the 7 pheras then sat back n then he filld kahank's maang with sindoor n finaly put the mangaalsutre around her neck.

After the rituals were done they took blessin of elders and it was khanyaadan time.

Like in every daughter's kanyaadan parents cry khanak's parents cried and gave her their blessings then the baraat left takin the bride.

Reachin Khandelwal Mansion Madhvi and Khushboo brought the pooja ki taali with the bowl of rice n the red color...Khanak pushed the bowl with her foot n enter the house levin her footprints behind.

Shaan wanted to enter his room but Tashu n Khushboo stop him n akshay join them.

Tashu : where r u goin ?

Shaan : iss darwaze ke peeche mera kamra hai tho vahin jaa raha hoon...

Tashu : haan par andaar jaane ke liye kuch dena padega..hain naa Di ?

Khushboo : of course tashu....c'mon shaan

Shaan : kya bhabhi....mujhe bohut neend aa rahi hai mujhe jaane dijiye...bhaya plzz aap hi bhabhi ko samjhaaye

Akshay : c'mon khushboo jaane do bechare ko..

Khushboo : akhsay tum shaan ki side le rahe ho ??

Ak : heuu of course not....shaan khanjoosi mat kar aur inhe kuch dedo (shaan looks at ak with disbelieve)

Shaan : kitne daarpok ho aap bhaya....

Ak : isse daar nahin pyaar kehte hain

Shaan : haan voh chehre se dikh hi raha hai....

Tashu : plzz tum dono bas karo...and shaan jab tak tum mujhe mere paise nahin dete naa tu andaar khanak ke pass nahin jaayega....(shaan looks at her angry n finaly gave her money)

Ak : bas ?? itna hi ?....tu tho mujhse bhi khanjoos nikla

Khushboo : haan shaan...kahank ke pass jaane ke liye sirf itna hi ?

Shaan : arre meri maa yeh lo (givin tashu all his money) sab lo...ab khush ?

Tashu smiles : now thats a good husband...jaa sakte ho (khushboo n tashu left n shaan was about to enter his room but again ak stopped him)

Ak : shaan tu andaar jaa raha hai ?

Shaan gets annoyed : nahin ! bahar aa raha hoon dikh nahin raha...

Ak : chalo main bhi andaar chalta hoon tum aur khanak se batein karne ( shaan blocks his way)

Shaan : kahan jaa rahe ho bhaya? (ak pushes shaan on the side n goes inside the room)

Ak: hi khanak (khanak feels embarrassed n does not say anything)

Shaan: bye bhaya...

Ak: arre shaan rukh naa...shaadi ke waqt khanak se theek se baat bhi nahin hui...haan tho kaisi ho? bohut tired tho nahin hui ho inn sab raasmon ke saath?

Shaan: haan bhaya hum bohut tired hain....soona chahte hain soo plzzz.........

Ak: arre nahin bro im not tired at all...(shaan wanted to cry or kill his brother and he got an idea)

Shaan: heuu bhaya....zaara side mein aayenge kuch kehna hai..(ak all smiling goes toward shaan)

Ak: kya baat hai

Shaan: bhaya...agar bhabhi ko pata chale ki aapne uss din usse old woman kaha tho kya hoga?...ek kam karta main unhe bata ke dekhta hoon hun (he opened the door but ak stop him)

Ak: arre mere pyaare bhai kya kar rahe ho...teri shaadi ke din mera divorce karevaayega kya

Shaan: exactly...meri shaadi ki pehli raat hai aur main apni biwi ke saath time spend karna chahta hoon...aur apko tho pata hai ke main bohut hi sharif banda hoon...par kabhi kabhi zaroorat hone par yeh banda kameena bhi baan sakta hoon...(givin ak his mischievious smile)

Ak: arre main tho bas mazaak kar raha tha....chalta hoon (he gets out of the room n looks back at shaan) shaan tum.....

Shaan cuts him : goodnight bhaya...(n he closes the door) thank god sab chale gaaye.....

Finaly they are alone in the room....shaan goes n sits near Khanak on the bed....he keeps lookin at her smiling...khanak slowly looks up n lowers her gaze seein shaan starin at her...slowly he wanted to remove khanak's ghoungaat but she did not allowed him

Khanak: kya kar rahe ho?!

Shaan confused: arre ghoungaat uthar raha hoon aur kya...

Khanak: jab tak mere haathon ki mehendi mein apna naam nahin dhoondte ghoungaat utharna tho door usse haath tak nahin laga sakte!

Shaan: arre yaar tum sab mere peeche hi pade ho! jab bhi dekho kuch naa kuch karna parta hai...

Khanak: shantanu naam dhoondo naa!

Shaan: arre theek hai baba...haath do...(he takes her hands n starts searchin for his name n find it'but he does not tell her)'khanak naam mil nahin raha hai...

Khanak: theek se dhoondo shaan

Shaan: arre theek se kya matlab....theek se hi tho dhoond raha hoon......im sure naam hai hi nahin....

Khanak: shantanu naam hai!...tum andhe ho kya

Shaan: then show me naa!...main bhi dekhoun tumhe milta hai ya nahin (khanak furiously removes her ghoungaat n starts checkin her hands....shaan puts his finger on her hand showin her his name....khanak looks up at shaan surprised)

Khanak: tumne....tumne jooth kaha!

Shaan: haan kyunki agar main tumse sach bolta then im sure tum mujhse kuch aur bhi karvati...aur mujhe tumhari ghoungaat kisi bhi haal mein utharni thi...kyunki mujhe uske andar jo khubsoorat chehra chup gaaya tha usse dekhna tha....

Sayin this khanak smiles n shaan started getting close...their faces were inches away and when he was about to kiss her khanak runs from the bed n stood near the window takin deep breathes...shaan goes close to her n controlin herself khanak pretends to be angry.

Khanak: sharam nahin aati.....shaadi ki ek din bhi nahin hui hai aur tum mujhse already jooth bol rahe ho...

Shaan smiles: u know what khanak...tum naa bohut hi khas dulhaan ho (khanak looks at him confused) arre normal ladkyaan apni shaadi ki pehli raat apne husband se sharam ke mare baat karna tho door unse aankh bhi nahin mila paati...aur ek tum ho jo sharam naam ki cheez hi nahin hai tujh mein aur upar se mujhse jagda bhi kar rahi ho....wah! kya dulhaan mil gaayi hai mujhe....

Khanak: shantanu tum naa....! (she gets furious n in anger turns her back to him....shaan smiles n slowly hugs her from behind restin his chin on her shoulder)

Shaan: vaise ek baat kahun...mujhe naa'normal ladkyan pasand hi nahin hai....

Khanak smiles n pushes his away but he holds her hand n pulls her close to him....shaan bends a lil n places a soft kiss on her neck n khanak closes her eyes in enjoyment. Then he slowly turns her to face him and kisses her forehead....coming to her ear he whispers I Love U words n kiss it....lookin at her closed eyes he smiles n drops his soft lips on them....removing a lock behind her ear khanak looks at him....he caresses her cheeks n bends to kiss both sides....khanak smiles n looks down...placin his finger under her chin he makes her face him and admires her for a sec.....

Shaan with a husky voice: vaise sharmati hui tum aur bhi khubsoorat lagti ho...

Khanak looks up at him and he winks smiling then runs his fingers in her hair slowly getting closer....khanak closed her eyes n felt his lips on hers....shaan brokes the kiss n starin at her he lifts her in his arms walkin toward their bed without brokin the eye contact he gently places her on the bed n sat near her....getting sooo close that khanak was feelin his breath n hearin his heartbeats makin her loose control.....shaan was on top of khanak now n slowly she places her hand on his cheek n shaan gets sooo close that their was not even space for air to come between them...........................

awesome dear i was really imagining all the moments happenin rite there n there between shsnak...............man is just superb.....muy heart was beating so fast readin it that i was smiling non stop...awesome......hope u can make more of these scenes......just loved it

very nicely concluded...