ShaNak OS ( Only Best Friends??) Epilogue p4

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Hello Odhinians😊

i have read lot of wonderful OS n FF here n just love readin them😳
so by readin readin n again readin i thought to give it a try😆😆...
im not that good in writin OS or FFs but sometimes i cant resist😳...
and i was gettin bored at work today so
instead of workin on files n worked on the OS😉...
the story is completely diff from the original one
and its gonna be only in 2 parts so hope u will still like...

Only Best Friends ??

PART 1

Shantanu and Khanak. These two names are the most known in Mumbai not because they are rich in fact Khanak Mehra is not as rich as Shaan's family but she still has a good lifestyle. She lives with her mom and dad in a very beautiful apartment and works with her dad in his office. Her dad is Mr. Khandelwal's business partner and a good friend. ShaNak are known for their friendship they are best friends and whole Mumbai is aware of it. They know each other for ten years now and both family appreciate each other and have a great bonding'

Its morning and every responsible and hard workin person goes to work'except one'Khanak comes to Khandelwal house to see everyone before goin to office and specialy her friend.

Khanak : Shaan get up naa kab se utha rahi hoon tujhe

Shaan : Khanak yaar plzz soone do naa! Itni subah subah kyun dimaag kha rahi ho

Khanak : subah??...Shaan its already 11 am so get up!

Shaan : so what?? Main 2 baje se pehle nahin uthunga so will u plzz get out of my room n let me sleep in peace!

Khanak gets irritated now : Shantanu agar tum abhi nahin uthe naa tho'tho main tumpe paani phekhungi! And u know I can do that ( shaan opens his eyes immediately n remembered that last time he didn't believed her and she actually did it so he got up n sat on his bed angrily)

Shaan : kya yaar khanak tum itni suabh chahti kya ho mujhse? Aur tum'tumhe sharam nahin aati aise mere kamre mein ghoosne ki??

Khanak : kyun? Tum naange todi ho aur vaise bhi its not the first time ok

Shaan : u know what next time naa main naanga hi soo jaounga tab tum shayad mujhe chain se soone do!

Khanak : ya whateve now get up aur naha lo

Shaan: kyun? Hum kahin jaa rahe hain kya?

Khanak: of course'office (and she smiles sayin the work office. Shaan gets up n stands in front of her)

Shaan : office??? Aur main?? Mujhe kisi pagaal kutte ne khata hai jo main office jaoun

Khanak : shut up shantanu tumne mujhse promise kiya tha

Shaan : chal jhooti maine aisa kuch nahin kiya

Khanak: jhoot main nahin tum bol rahe ho! Tumne mujhse kal promise kiya tha ke humare 10 years ki friendship ke liye tum mere saath office jaoge

Shaan: arre voh tho maine tumse chutkara paane ke liye bola tha

Khanak : shaan don't be soo mean yaar dekho aaj dus saal hue hain humari dosti ka tho plzzzz chalo naa'.humari dosti ki khatir (she makes a baby face n shaan finaly agrees)

Shaan : ok fine chalet hain! But im telling u hum ziada der tak nahin rukhenge (kh smiles)'vaise hum dus saal se ek doosre ko jante hain?...nahin I mean mujhe laga 10 se ziada hai something like 30'

Khanak : stupid meri age bhi 30 saal ki nahin hai tho humari dosti kaise ho sakti hai

Shaan : really? Mujhe laga tum yahin kahin 35 ki hogi'

Khanak : OMG hw funny ha ha!...ab jao aur naha lo main niche wait kar rahi hoon u have only 10mins! (n she leave)

Shaan : aise bol rahi hai jaise meri boss hai! Ek dounga naa line pea a jaayegi ( n a voice came from outdoor)

Khanak: kuch kaha?

Shaan: nahin kuch nahin bas jaa raha tha'

Khanak was waitin shaan with Madhvi and after some time finaly shaan comes downstair'

Shaan: good morning mom

Ma: morning beta'itni subah kahan jaa rahe ho?

Shaan: exactly mom SUBAH! Yeh khanak ki bachi mujhe (almost cryin) office le jaa rahi hai

Ma: arre wah'thanks khanak beta vaise yeh hua kaise?

Shaan: main batata hoon'yeh meri dus saal pehle hui galati ki waje se hai jiski punishment mujhe aaj mil rahi hai

Khanak: stop being a kid and lets go'aunty hum chalte hain

Ma: ok beta have fun'

ShaNak reach office and shaan gets already bored and wants to go back home and sleep

Shaan: such a borin anniversary yaar! Hume aaj humari dosti celebrate karni chahiye tum mujhe office le aayi ur soo borin

Khanak: haan hoon main borin'apna dost bananese pehle sochna chahiye tha now its too late'chalo mere collegues se milati hoon (khanak introduced her office friends to shaan n all the girls went fida over him which amuses him n they went to khanak's cabin)

Shaan: actually yahan aana itna bhi bura nahin hai'

Kahank gets happy: see! Maine kaha tha naa

Shaan! Now ur lyin hun!...tumne kab bola tha ki yahan itne beautiful ladkyan kam karti hai

Khanak: ur disgustin shaan kuch tho sharam kar

Shaan: plzz sharam ki baat tum mat karo hun'ek ladke ke bedroom mein ghooste hue tujhe sharam nahin aati hai aur maine ek ladki ko khubsoorat kaha tho sharam'

Khanak: u know what'just go back home ok! Mujhe vaise bhi bohut kam hai

Shaan: sach?! Main jaoun? (getting happy)

Khanak: haan jao! (shaan smiles n he knew she was angryso he goes n sits on the desk to face her)

Shaan: acha baba sorry (holdin his ears)

Khanak: I don't care apna sorry rakh lo aur jao

Shaan: khanak'.kaha naa im sorry plzzzz (she turns her face to the other side but shaan makes her face him) ab dekho aaj ke din hume jagda nahin karni chahiye naa (she turns her face again) c'mon yaar tumhe pata hai ki tum sab se khubsoorat ho yeh ladkyan tho kuch bhi nahin hai tumhare samne (that made her smile a lil bit but she didn't turned her face) arre meri maa ab tho maan jao (she finaly looked at him)

Khanak: fine maaf karti hoon'par agar tumne phirse mujhe pareshan kiya naa tho aaj hum humari 10 saal ki dosti nahin humari pehli din ki dushmani celebrate karenge

Shaan : pakka dushami karenge?? ( kh hits him on his arm n sh gave her a hug) ab chalo naa bahar jaa ke celebrate karte hain

Khanak: aaj nahin shantanu mujhe bohut kam hai hum kal chalte hain

Shaan: tum ek din kam nahin karogi tho company barbaad nahin ho jaayegi'dekho maine tumhari baat maan li aur yahan aaya ab tumhari bari

Khanak: par shaan main aise kaise jaa sakti hoon maine dad ko bhi inform nahin kiya aur voh abhi yahan nahin hain

Shaan: bas itni si baat? Uncle aur dad ki meetin hai naa'.ek min(he takes his phone n calls Akshay to tell him they are goin out n after few mins he disconects the phone) problem solved now lets go

Khanak smiles: main ek shart pe jaoungi

Shaan: what again?

Khanak: we are not goin to do something big'hum bas ghoom kar wapis aate hain

Shaan smiles: done

They leave the office to enjoy their special day. They went to see a movie then shoppin n khanak was scoldin shaan for flirtin with every girl he sees. They enjoyed their day and were exhausted when they came back home. Shaan droped khanak and before she enter the lift shaan gave her something

Shaan: this is for u (handin her a box)

Khanak: yeh kya hai?

Shaan! Heummm isse gift kehte hain'I know humne decide kiya tha ki hum gifts nahin kharidenge but I really liked it

Khanak smiled n took it : khol doun?

Shaan: yep'par agar pasand nahin aaya naa tho pretend karna (khanak smiles n opens the box. It was a neckless a very simple one but for khanak it was the most beautiful one first coz she was a very simple girl n liked simple things and second coz its shaan who gifted her that neckless her best friend who knows her soo well)

Khanak: shantanu its very beautiful

Shaan: sach mein ya jhooth?

Khanak: no idiot its really beautiful

Shaan smiles: lao main pehnata hoon (khanak gave it to him n he puts it around her neck n whispered) happy bday (khanak smiles n gave him a hug'a friendly hug'then he left)

Next day was a routine for khanak she went to office n had to catch up with the work she left yesterday coz of shaan so she worked the whole day nonstop n did not even once disturbed shaan by callin him at morning. It was almost 7pm and khanak was still at office finishin her work when a call disturbed her)

Khanak: hello

Shaan: tum iss waqt office mein kya kar rahi ho?

Khanak: vahin jo tum kabhi nahin karte'kam!

Shaan: what yaar khanak! Koi iss waqt tak kam karta hai kya'aur tumne ek baar bhi phone nahin kiya

Khanak: im sorry par I was really busy aur sab tere waje se hai

Shaan: me???

Khanak: ya u! kal agar mujhe kam karne dete naa tho abhi main ghar pe hi hoti

Shaan: anyways ab tum chalo office se niklo hume kahin jaana hai

Khanak: kahan?

Shaan: party aur kahan!

Khanak: shaan mera bilkul mood nahin hai and im really tired

Shaan: oye dadimaa itna complain mat kar aur vaise bhi maine apne doston se promise kiya hai ki hum aa rahe hain

Khanak : haan tho tum jao naa mujhe nahin aana

Shaan: theek hai mat jao!...ab main bhi nahin jaounga! (khanak thinks a while n gave up)

Khanak: fine baba chalti hoon

Shaan smiles: good girl'u have only one hour tho jaldi ghar jaake tayaar ho jao

Khanak: ok'

They disconnect the phone n khanak decide to leave n finish the work tomotow at home. She got ready n was waitin for shaan to come but no sign of him and she got a message on her phone n checked it n it was shaan who was sayin that he cant pick her at her home so she has to come near the mall he will be waitin for her. She gets angry but still decide to go just to kill shaan there!...she reached the mall n was waitin for shaan'.it was quite dark n no one was there so she felt kinda scared n worried

Khanak: yeh shantanu bhi naa..kab se uska wait kar rahi hoon'ek tho main itni tired hoon upar se yahan itna andhera hai'ek baar aane de usse phir dikhaounga (she suddenly hears footsteps first she got scared but then thought its shaan so she turns to the person thinking its him) main kab se wait kar rahi hoon yahan aur tum ab'.(she stop talking n got shocked to see rahul a friend of sh n he was not alone one of his friend named kartik was with him)

Ra: hi khanak baby

Khanak: rahum tum?

Ra: ya me'arre pehle bula leti mujhe itna intezaar nahi karvata meri jaan'ooo meet my friend kartik (he smiles checkin her out n she felt uncomfortable n with the bad smell understood they were drunked) tho phir chalein?

Khanak: what?

Ra: arre main tumhe hi tho lene aaya hoon (khanak tought shaan sent him)

Khanak: tumhe shaan ne baijha hai?

Ra: shaan?...of course'shaan ne hi tho baijha hai'ab chalo naa (he holds her hand)

Khanak gets angry: rahul mera haath chodo

Ra: its ok baby main hoon naa main tumhe tumhare best buddy ke pass le jaounga

Khanak: rahul I said leave my hand'now! (he does so)

Ra: ok ok'kush?'ab chalo

Khanak: main tumhare saath kahin nahin jaa rahi just get lost

Kar: hey ladki'hum tere nokar nahin hai jo tu iss tarah baat kar rahi ho just shut up and come with us (he holds her hand tightly)

Khanak: just leave me! (she was struggling but he was holdin her hand very tightly n her duppatta falls n both guys laugh at her)

Ra: arre wah!...teri duppatta ne tho humari baat samajh gaayi ab tum kab samjhogi'

they start getting close to her n she pushes them away but they were quite strong for her coz after all she was a girl'but still she was brave so she slapped rahul n kicked kartik's intimate parts n run away to hide herself. Rahul n kartik wanted to take revenge n were not ready to leave her yet.

Ra: khanak bahar aao! I know ur here somewhere'ziada der tak nahin chupa paogi khud ko (khanak was worried now)

Ka: rahul chodo yaar kahin usne police ko bulaya tho? Usse chorte hain

Ra: shut up! Usne mujhe tappar mara hai Rahul Khanna ko!

Ka: yaar tujhe teri naam ki padi hai main jail nahin jaana chahta aur agar tu jail gaaya tho log tere tappar khane pe nahin tere jail jaane pe hasenge voh bhi ek ladki ki waje se

Ra: hmmm ur right'chalo'par uss se pehle ( he starts to talking loudly) kartik I think iss baar shaan ka prank kuch ziada hi ho gaaya nahin? Hume iss tarah khanak ko daraane kaha'maine tho pehle hi kaha tha ki mamla serious ho sakti hai par shaan ko kaun samjhaaye'uss se bada prankster iss duniya main hai hi nahin'khanak agar tum mujhe sun rahi ho tho yeh jaan lo ki yeh ek joke tha jo tere dost shaan ne humse karvaayi'.ab hum chalte hain hun bye'.

Rahul gave an evil smile to kartik n they left. Khanak heared everythin n could not believe shaan had done something like that'she knew he was a very big prankster but playin such disgustin prank on her was unbelievable'her eyes got moist due to the emotions from anger to fear from fear to disgust n finaly to disappointment'for the first time in 10 years her best friend disappointed her n she was not ready to forgive him'

hopefully it was not that bad😆😆 will post the last part tomorow so till then keep ur chappals to urself im come back tomorow full mentally prepared to get them🤣🤣
(press the like button if u did n would love to read ur reviews😳)
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tvrasika thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ Noorya
Can I make a request? It's very hard to read on white background... can u change that? Thanks.
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Nice one dear! Looks good and I hope you get to update soon. Waiting for the next part. 😃
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Yeh Rahul bhi na, stupid idiot.
And Khanak, don't believe him...
*sigh*
Khanak & Madhavi get along. I like that.

Post the second part soon please. :D
<3

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Was awesome..especially when Shaan said aab main nangaa soo jaoungaa 🤣 ..hope to read more soon
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dumb question but what does OS means? its like an alternative story or something? or other story? plz pm me
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@noorya
first of all congratulations.it was really nice that u have taken khanak to office and shown her as a hard working person.It feels good for office goers like me.
very nice one.do continue.
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Originally posted by: tvrasika

@ Noorya
Can I make a request? It's very hard to read on white background... can u change that? Thanks.

here u go dear sorry for changin it quite late😳
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Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Nice one dear! Looks good and I hope you get to update soon. Waiting for the next part. 😃

thanks a ton dear😃

will update the last part by tonight😉
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Originally posted by: -saBii-

Yeh Rahul bhi na, stupid idiot.
And Khanak, don't believe him...
*sigh*
Khanak & Madhavi get along. I like that.

Post the second part soon please. :D
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😆😆
everythin cant be perfect naa dear😳
but fikar not i only like happy endings😆
and ya as i said the characters are completely different from the original one

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