Originally posted by: *|Heena|*
Was awesome..especially when Shaan said aab main nangaa soo jaoungaa 🤣 ..hope to read more soon
thanks a lot dear😳

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Originally posted by: *|Heena|*
Was awesome..especially when Shaan said aab main nangaa soo jaoungaa 🤣 ..hope to read more soon
thanks a lot dear😳
Originally posted by: mjht_lover
dumb question but what does OS means? its like an alternative story or something? or other story? plz pm me
nice one 👏
thanks a lot😳
Originally posted by: sshriyaa84
@noorya
first of all congratulations.it was really nice that u have taken khanak to office and shown her as a hard working person.It feels good for office goers like me.very nice one.do continue.
thanks dear😳
Helloz Odhinians😃
She couldnt sleep that night thinking about what shaan did n hw it could ended if she didn't ran away. Shaan called her the whole night send messages but she did not replied. Finaly this nightmare ended and a new day came but khanak was still livin her night and told her parents to tell shaan that she is not at home if he comes. And as expected he did came her parents wanted to tell him the truth that she is in her room but lyin to shaan meant it had a serious reason behind so they lied n shaan left. He kept callin her the whole day so she switched off her phone n decide to go for a walk.
She had no idea about where she was goin the only thing she knew was shaan had hurt her…he did a big mistake by playin such a prank on her….after walkin for quite long she found herself near the beach so she sat on a rock still lost in her thoughts n unaware about people around her.
There were not many…a couple was walkin two kids were playin with water and a guy…..she saw him but she was sooo lost in her thoughts that she didn't give him importance or a second look.
The guy in question was non other than shaan…he was lookin sad and bored walkin along the beach n he also saw khanak n started fixing her…he was not sure it was her so walked faster n recognized her. He got surprised to see her there but really happy coz he finaly found her so her goes happily to see her.
Shaan: hey madam! (khanak looks up to find shaan all smiling et her n the first thing which came to her mind was the PRANK n the whole scene! she stood up n started walkin away. Shaan gets confused n follows her) kya hua? Apni zabaan kha gaayi ho kya? (khanak did not respond) arre khanak main tumse baat kar raha hoon….aur btw tum kal raat aayi kyun nahin?? Kitna wait kiya maine tumhara..ek phone nahin kar sakti thi kya? (khanak stoped n face him)
Khanak: tum mujhse pooch rahe ho? TUM kahan the shantanu? Kitna wait kiya maine tumhara aur tumne…tumne uss rahul ko baijha mujhe lene…( shaan gets confused)
Shaan: khanak yeh tum kya bol rahi ho…maine kab rahul ko baijha?
Khanak: stop pretending shaan! Rahul ne mujhe tumhari ghatiya prank ke bare mein bataaya!...tumhe pranks khelna acha lagta hai main samajh sakti hoon lekin tumhe ehsaas bhi hona chahiye kiske saath kaisi mazak karni chahiye!
Shaan: tum pagaal ho gaayi ho kya!...rahul? pranks? Maine kiya kya hai?
Khanak: ohh! So u don't know hun?...kal raat mall ke pass tumne apne dost rahul ko nahin baijha mujhe laane ke liye? aur voh akela nahin tha kisi kartik ke saath tha…upar se dono drunk bhi the…aur yeh sab mujhe daara ne ke liye
Shaan gets irritated now: r u mad khanak! Main rahul ko baijhounga?! arre uss ladke se main theek se baat tak nahin karta tho dost kahan se baan gaaya
Khanak: oh really? tho voh mujhse jooth bol raha tha?
Shaan: arre aur nahin tho kya!...
Khanak: kyun shantanu? voh jooth kyun bolega mujhse?
Shaan: arre mujhe kya pata yaar…shayad kyunki main usse pasand nahin karta aur voh yeh baat achi tarah se janta hai
Khanak: ya right…apne galati chupane ke liye tum kuch bhi bol sakte ho naa…aur vaise bhi voh kehte hain naa nashe mein insaan sirf sach hi bolta hai aur voh tho itni nashe mein tha ki yeh tak kaha ki usse jail se kita dar hai tho voh tumhari iss disgustin prank ko kaisa chupata…
Shaan raisin his voice: stop it khanak! kuch bhi bolti jaa rahi ho!...kitni baar kahun tumse ki maine aisa kuch bhi nahin kiya hai…arre main tho khud tumhe lene aaya tha par mujhe todi der hui lekin main aaya tha khanak…par tum vahan nahin thi maine tumhara phone bhi try kiya lekin lag nahin raha tha aur…(khanak cuts him)
Khanak: bas karo shaan plzz mujhe aur kuch nahin sun na hai (she wanted to leave but shaan holds her hand n khanak groaned due to the pain caused by kartik yesterday n shaan noticed her hand)
Shaan: khanak tumhare haath ko kya hua?
Khanak: kuch nahin
Shaan: khanak batao yeh chot kaise lagi tumhe…
Khanak: mujhse kyun pooch rahe ho! jaake apne doston se pooch…tumhara mazak kuch ziada hi hua naa iss liye yeh chot aayi mujhe…par yeh tho ek mamuli chot hai kuch hi din mein bhaar jaayega aur dard bhi gaayab ho jaayega…lekin jo chot aur dard tumne mujhe diya hai shantanu voh shayad hi gaayab ho jaaye main kabhi soch bhi nahin sakti thi ke tum aisi harqaat kabhi kar sakte ho
Sayin this she left from there. Shaan tried to call her, meet her but in vain. He even tried to find rahul but his parents said he was out of town n will be back in a week or two. Days pass and till khanak did not talked or forgive shaan for something he hadn't done. He had enough he needed to see his best friend coz he was badly missin her and coz she had to believe him. His mom told him to tell Mehra's that they are givin a party for their marriage anniversary that shaan a lil happy coz at least he had an excuse to see them…to see her.
He entered the corridor n was waitin for the lift when he heard a noise. He turned toward the hall n saw khanak pickin up some files which she dropped by opening the door. Shaan smiles seein her n bends to help her.
Khanak without lookin up: thanks…(she smiles lookin up n seein shaan she instantly lost her smile n snatching the files from his hand she stood up) tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?!
Shaan: voh…tumhare parents se milne aaya tha
Khanak: kyun? Mom dad pe bhi koi koi stupid mazak khelne aaye ho! (Shaan got irritated for bein blamed again n again)
Shaan: damn khanak tum phirse shuru mat ho jao…arre kitni baar boloun ki maine aisa kuch nahin kiya hai (khanak without sayin anything headed towards the stairs) kahan jaa rahi ho lift yahan hai…
Khanak stoped: janti hoon par mujhe tumhare saath ek hi lift mein nahin aana hai
Shaan: stop this nonsense yaar tum 10th floor mein ho itne saare files ke saath stairs se kaise chadogi…
Khanak: tumhare saath jaane se tho better hai
Shaan: khanak plzzz chalo…I promise main tumse baat tak nahin karunga main uncle aur aunty se milke chala jaounga (she thought for a while n gets in the lift. Shaan couldn't bear the silence so he had to speak)
Shaan: dekho khanak plzz mera yakeen karo maine…(she cuts him)
Khanak: shantanu mujhe kuch bhi nahin sun na ok! and I don't even want to talk to u…ever again…(this was it! Shaan had enough of khanak's childish behaviour n not listenin to him so he angrily hits the stop button of the lift and it stops between two floor)
Shaan angrily: tumhe meri baat sun ne hi padegi…(he goes near her blockin her between his arms by keeping them on either side of the lift so cant move anymore. He gets closer lookin into her eyes with anger. Khanak was feelin his heartbeats n was unable to move or react to his closeness) maine kuch nahin kiya hai…rahul ne mera naam kyun liya mujhe nahin pata…par ek baat main janta hoon khanak…ek ladki ke liye uski izaat uski jaan se bhi ziada important hai…aur ek aisi ghiri hui harqaat ko main mazaak ka naam nahin deta…haan main humesha mazak karta rehta hoon par main apne limits janta hoon khanak…karma tho door main aisa karne ki soch bhi nahin sakta aur voh khas kar tumhare saath coz u are my best friend aur main tumhari bohut care karta hoon aur tumhe khona nahin chahta…
Sayin this he stared at her for a while lowerin his gaze from her eyes to her lips n comin back to her eyes n he realized hw close he was to her n stepped back. He hits the button again n the lift finaly reached the 10th floor. Khanak gets out of the lift n shaan kept lookin at her hopin she will say something…n she stopped to look at him
Khanak: ek galat baat keh di tumne…main tumhari dost hoon nahin…thi…par ab nahin…shayad humari dosti sirf yahin tak thi…ab tum mere liye ek ajnaabi jaise baan gaaye ho…(sayin this her eyes got moist n shaan felt hurt coz she did not believe him…again…slowly the lift's door closed…)
After what khanak said shaan did not tried to call her again but was still hopin to get her friend back…so he thought to give her some time n maybe everythin will be alright…
The party day came khanak didn't wanted to go but her mom insisted sayin Madhvi wanted to see her coz she was missin her very much so khanak agreed for her sake n for bein polite. She was wearin a light pink churidaar lookin simple yet beautiful n her duppatta got stuck on her neckless…the neckless shaan gave her for their bday. She remembered that day…it was the last time she spend a great time with her friend…last time she laughed n enjoyed bein with her friend…a tear run on her check wiping it she slowly wanted to remove the neckless but stopped in midway n decide to keep it coz it was the last thing shaan gave her symbolizing their friendship.
Everyone was enjoyin the party except shaan. He was wearin a blue jean n a white UB shirt with the first two buttons unbuttoned showin his chest. He was waitin for the Mehra's and specialy khanak…he knew she will come not for him but his parents and finaly after this unbearable wait he saw her and a smile appears on his face…eh almost run to them that happy he was seein her…
Shaan: hello aunty (she smiled n he looked at khanak) hi…(she didn't said anything) heuumm uncle kahan hai?
Mom: beta voh bas kuch hi der mein aa jaayenge ek important meetin thi naa
Shaan: theek hai…chaliye naa bas apka hi wait kar rahe the
(they go inside. Khanak took shaan's parents blessin n wished them n madhvi hugged her)
Mad: thanks for comin beta I missed u soo much
Khanak: I missed u too aunty…aap sab ki bohut hi yaad aa rahi thi
Akshay: really? agar itni yaad aa rahi thi tho milne kyun nahin aayi? Ghar ka raasta bhool gaayi kya?
Khanak lookin at shaan: kuch aisa hi samjhiye akshay bhaya…
Akshay gets confused: kyun?
Khanak: kuch nahin
Akshay: vaise sab se ziada kisko miss kiya??? (teasin her n lookin at shaan) iss idiot ko naa?
Khanak looks with hurt at shaan then at ak n smiles: ussi ko…jisse apne bhoola hai….Khushboo bhabhi…lagta hai aap kuch ziada hi khush hai uss se door hote hue…I think mujhe unhe yeh baat batani chahiye…..(everyone laugh)
Akshay: arre meri maa main bas mazak kar raha hoon…meri band bajane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai…anyways c'mon everyone lets enjoy the party! Lets dance!...mom dad aap dono the pehle dance karoge party aap dono ki hai (a voice comes from behind) "tho phir hum kab dance karenge??"
they turn to find khanak's dad. He wished madhvi n hugged Mr. Khandelwal.
Aksay pushed everyone on dance floor even khanak who really wasn't in the mood but for makin them happy she agreed. While dancing shaan accidently bumped to her n held her by her waist…they stare for a while unaware of what was goin on their hearts..unaware of their feelings…unaware that they were actually enjoyin bein that close…..sudenly khanak came to her senses n shaan released her…without sayin anything she went back to her seat watchin everyone enjoyin n dancing. But every single moment her eyes used to stop on HIM…she couldn't take it anymoren left.
She was in the washroom controlin herself n her tears…she was badly missin shaan n she was unable to see him there in front of her. She closed her eyes n wiped her tears.
"meri waje se roo rahi ho?" (she looks up n saw shaan)
Khanak: tum yahan kyun aaye ho? mujhe akeli nahin chod sakte!
Shaan: nahin…kyunki main janta hoon ki tumhari iss halat ki waja main hi hoon…tho phir main kaise tumhe chor sakta hoon khanak…
Khanak: plzzz tum khud ko itna importance mat do ok! tum mere liye kuch bhi nahin ho samjhe tum! Kuch bhi nahin…sirf ek ajnaabi ho so for god sake leave me alone! (sayin this she wanted to leave but shaan hold her hand) leave my hand
Shaan: no….
Khanak: maine kaha leave my hand!
Shaan: aur maine kaha no…pehle kabhi problem nahin hoti thi tumhe jab tumhara haath pakarta tha
Khanak: haan kyunki tab tum mere dost the…aur aaj tum mere kuch bhi nahin ho ur only a stranger…aur koi stranger mera haath pakarle mujhe bilkul nahin pasand
Shaan painfully: stranger hun…itna paraaya ho gaaya tumhare liye? aur voh bhi ek aise galati ke waje se jo maine kiya hi nahin…
Khanak: just leave my hand shantanu warna I swear main tujhe marungi
Shaan: tho maaro naa…shayad mujhe maarne se tum toda sa better feel karo so do it
Khanak: haath chodo shaan…
Shaan: c'mon khanak just do it…hit me (khanak gets angry n slaps him)
Khanak: kahata naa marungi! dobara mujhe haath mat lagana
Sayin this she left n shaan's eyes got moist hearin once again the stranger word from khanak…he couldn't believe hw a simple word could change a relationship..hw a lie could change someone's life…
Near the place where the party was thrown was a park n khanak was walkin there cryin silently with the guilt of slappin shaan…two people's lound voice disturbed her…they were laughin mentionnin shaan's name n khanak wanted to know who they were n why there laughin about shaan so she followed the voices n got shocked seein rahul n kartik…that night came back in front of her n she got scared but was still curious enough to find her answer…
Ra: I swear agar uss raat voh khanak ki bachi mujhe mil gaayi hoti naa tho uss tappar ka jawab deta main usse
Ka: tho de diya naa…uss se jooth bol ke (n both laugh)
Ra: haaaaaannnn…mujhse paanga lene chali thi bewakoof
Ka: par ek baat bata yaar…tumne voh shaan ka naam kyun liya?
Ra: coz I hate that guy! jab bhi main uss khanak ko phasane ki koshish karta tha naa tho voh saala beech mein aa jaata! Mujhe dhamki deta tha uss se door rehne ke liye (khanak gets shocked hearin this) im sure voh uss se pyaar karta hai aur dost baan ne ki natak karta tha uske saath…issi liye! issi liye maine jooth bola ki voh uss shantanu khandelwal ki prank ki (khanak could not believe what she just heared…shaan did not lied to her all the time he was sayin the truth and she kept blamin him…tears start rollin down her cheecks n she did not hold them…it was too much for her she couldn't hold them any longer) ab…ab naa hi voh uska dost raha aur naa hi uss se ziada kuch baan paayega (n again both start laughin n khanak got angry seein them enjoyin as it was a joke…then she thought that it actually was…they made a joke of her life…of her friendship…)
Ka: aur uss stupid ladki ne apne best friend ki baat pe yakeen tak nahin kiya…yeh kaisi dosti hui…(khanak had enough she walked toward them n both get shocked seein her…without sayin a word she slapped rahul n look at kartik with anger)
Khanak: theek kaha tumne! main ek bewakoof aur stupid ladki hoon…apne dost ko chor ke maine tum dono ki baat pe wishwaas ki…tum itni ghatiya harqaat kar sakte ho main janti nahin thi…par ab main apni galati sudharoungi (she wanted to leave when raul hold her hand)
Ra: iss baar nahin khanak! iss baar iss tappar ka jawaab dete beghair main tumhe jaane nahin dounga
Khanak: u rascal leave me!
Ra: shut up! (n with his free hand he removed her duppatta n throws it down khanak wanted to slap him again but this time he hold her hand)
Khanak: rahul leave me tum hosh mein nahin ho chodo mujhe!
Ra: tumhe chorne ke liye pakda nahin hai…aisi halat banaounga ki dobara ladke pe haath kya usse dekhne ki himmat bhi nahin karogi
Khanak: rahul leave me! ( but he did not listened her n wanted to kiss her when a voice from behin stopped him…shaan's voice)
Shaan: usne kaha chodo usse
all three of them looked at his direction with different reaction…khanak was happy to see him but rahul n kartik were shocked but still he did not let her go n tightened his grip…shaan goes toward them n stood in front of rahul who was still holdin khanak's hand. He got scared seein soo much anger in shaan's eyes that he couldn't react. Shaan removed himself his hand with soo much strength that rahul couldn't hide the pain. Khanak stood behind shaan still scared but relieved that he was there now. Shaan was still lookin at rahul with fire in his eyes ready to burn him holdin his hand.
Shaan: issi haath se khanak ko chot ponchaya tha naa…maafi maango (rahul was almost cryin due to the pain and did what shaan said)
Ra: khanak im sorry plzz mujhe maaf karo main phir kabhi aisa nahin karunga….ab mera haath chodo varna tooth jaayega
Shaan tightened his grip which make rahul scream: agli baar kisi ladki ko chairne ki koshish ki naa aur khanak ki ass pass bhi nazaar aaya tho haath sach mein tor ke aisi jagah ghoosa dounga ki zindagi mein phir kabhi chal nahin paayega (leavin his hand) chal bhaag yahan se!
without thinking twice both of them run from there. Shaan turns to look at khanak who was still cryin…he bends n took her duppatta n covered her.
Shaan: chalo main tumhe ghar le jaata hoon…(he took a step n heared her cryin which stopped him n he started carresin her shoulders) its ok khanak sab theek hai ab voh log phir kabhi tumhe pareshan nahin karenge I promise
Khanak was still cryin: im sorry…im really sorry…maine tumhari baat ka yakeen nahin kiya…tumpe itna bada ilzaam lagaaya aur tum….tumne kitni koshish ki mujhse baat karne ki…main janti hoon main tumhari maafi ki layak bhi nahin hoon par phir bhi maangti hoon…
Shaan: ssshhhh (wiping her tears) khanak ab roona band karo…important yeh hai ki tumhe sachai pata chal gaayi aur mujhe meri dost…nahin meri best friend wapis mil gaayi (it did not helped him to calm her so he gently hugged her carressin her hair which worked)
Khanak: shantanu tum itne ache kyun ho?...maine kitni buri tarah se tumse behave kiya aur…(closing her eyes feelin guilty) aur tum pe haath bhi uthaya (shaan brokes the hug n makes her face him)
Shaan: haaaann haath se yaad aaya…yaar kitni zor se maara tumne dekho meri gaal abhi bhi laal hai
He shows her his cheeck then smiles lookin at her to cheer her up n khanak without thinking twice about what she was doin caressed his cheeck n just kissed it n hugged him sayin hw sorry she was again…but shaan felt something else…a feelin he never felt before for khanak…this kiss touched his heart…this kiss made his heart beat faster he never felt this way before not even with his girlfriends….a smile appeared on his face n just hugged her back.
Khanak felt safe in his arms n shaan tightened his grip without even realizin it which khanak liked and closed her eyes to enjoy this moment in a better way with the same thing ringing in her ears…"im sure voh uss se Pyaar karta hai"
This night was the patch up of two best friends….at least that's what they thought coz with this new feelin they were developing for each other both had the same question in mind…………………….Are we Only Best Friends?????
END
it was really good... i still cant believe she slapped him!!
*edit*
WOW.
That was amazing.
Khanak slapped him! Whoa.
But, it's an open ending. *sniffles*
But, then again, it's the start of a love story... I like. *sigh*
You have an amazing talent.
Please write more. :)
thanks a lot dear😳...ya she slapped him😆
Originally posted by: p.fashion.d
it was really good... i still cant believe she slapped him!!
and i lovd the way shan saved her....good job .... u shld write more...
thanks dear😳