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Here you go guys..another story with a HAPPY ending.😆 i'm running out..i have only like 5 more left that have happy endings..the others are all sad ones. this one, personally, is one of my faves..just cuz it's a very simple story. no special things happen..just simple stuff but it's very calming. 😳
Happy Reading.
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-Diya
"Oh god! Yeh sab bhi aaj hi hona tha!" Khanak muttered as she ran out of the house. It was an important day because she had a job interview that day. First she had woken up late and later found out that she didn't have any ironed clothes. Quickly putting on her formals, she grabbed her file and ran out of the house ignoring her mom's scolding. Grabbing her keys out of her bag, she turned the car on and geared into full speed.

All she could think of was the interview and her job. Being a daughter of a rich business man, all Khanak ever dreamt of was to make her own identity. She had learned a lot from her father, whom she considered her idol. Khanak had just completed her studies in an abroad program, and instead of joining the business with her father, she requested that he let her work as an employee in his office. This meant that she was going to go through all of the process that it took a normal person to acquire the job.

'I hope no one recognizes me there' so lost in her own thoughts, she didn't notice when the green light was called until the person behind her honked. She pressed the gas pedal but Khanak hadn't moved an inch when she crashed the backlight of the car in front of her. 'Khanak was shocked' would have been an understatement. All she could do was stare at the car in front of her with the big dent in the back. 'Way to be the most unlucky morning ever! Haye rabba! Why did this have to happen with me?!' Quickly getting out of the car, she walked up to the black Civic that she had run in to.

The owner climbed out of the car and just one look at his face made Khanak's breath quicken. His big brown eyes full of innocence and a tad bit of annoyance; his face was that of a Greek god. The perfect jaw line, his messy black hair and not to leave out the five 'o' clock shadow that made him look all the more better; Khanak didn't realize she was staring. "Umm'hello! Lady back to earth?!" Khanak dazed out of her dream world when he tapped her on the shoulder.

"What were you, drunk and driving? Could you not see I was in front of you?" the man asked, frustrated

Khanak was getting super annoyed at his irritated tone. If only the guy behind her had not scared her to death with that pesky honk, she wouldn't have bumped into this guy.

"Well, if you hadnt noticed, the light had turned green. You should have long been gone. It was your fault for still being at the signal," Khanak replied angrily. The day was just getting worse. Here she was, rushing to get to an interview she was already late to, and now she had an accident on her hands! "Great, things couldn't be going better," she thought to herself.

The man raised his eye-brows, frustration and annoyance clearly showing in his eyes. "Well, excuse me; you're supposed to leave enough space between you and the vehicle ahead of you. Clearly, you did not and you were rushing. Kaunsi train chootne vaali thi tumhari? You are undoubtedly at fault, and you're paying for the damage."

"Yeah right I am! Meri galthi thi hi nahi, tho main kyu karcha utaon?" Khanak said. She was beginning to realize that there was no easy way to get out of this, and if she got any later for her interview, she was sure she was going to lose the job.

After a ton of "tu-tu-main-main," both parties settled that it was Khanak's fault. Khanak decided there was no use trying to fight it out. She just needed to get to the interview, and she had no time for squabbling with a monkey! So she decided to be the "better person" and pay for the damage.

1/2 Hour later

Khanak walked in to her dad's office, still furious that she had to pay for that moron's car. She still saw no fault of her own! She cursed the man all the way as she walked to the room her interview would be held at.

"That dimwit, imbecile, ahh that blockhead! Poora din kharab kar diya! Kitna acha din tha aaj, and because of that fool i'm late for my interview." Khanak continued to bicker.

Khanak knocked on the door, and when she received an acknowledgment, walked in and braced herself for the interview. She had geared herself for every possible question she could be asked, for every challenge this manager would throw at her, but she was NOT prepared for what came next.

"TUM?!" came a loud outburst. Neither of them had known who the first one to shout it out was, but both of them were just as taken aback.

Sweat beads began forming on Khanak's fore-head! "Beta Khanak, thu tho gayi aaj! Tera kuch nahi hone vala," she thought to herself.

The man with the big brown eyes, the perfect jaw line, messy hair, a five o clock shadow and a face of a Greek God rose from his seat and extended his hand out to Khanak. A mischievous twinkle played in his eyes as he said, "Hi, I'm Shaan Khandelwal. Is office ka manager, and tumhara interviewee. And you?"

Khanak gasped! "Meri phooti kismat!" She thought to herself! "Bas isko hi mera interview lena tha? And why does he have the dumb glint in his eye?"

Khanak extended her hand, acknowledged the hand-shake and introduced herself! Shaan asked her to take a seat and the interview went on from there. After about 30 minutes, Shaan stood up and signaled Khanak to the door. Despite starting off on the wrong foot, the interview went quite well.

As Khanak was about to leave, Shaan called out to her which made her stop in her track. "Of-oh! Peeche se nahi tokthe! Itna bhi nahi ata is bandar ko?" Khanak thought to herself. She quickly turned around to face Shaan.

Shaan was sitting on top of the desk that stood in the middle of the room. For one split second, Khanak lost herself. His skin was so tan, and his hair ' it just swept across his face and gasp, his eyes! Her first impression of him was right, he WAS a Greek God.

As soon as she realized what she was doing, Khanak caught herself. "KHANAK, you're doing it again! STOP STARING," she gave herself a mental scolding.

"You know, tum itni bhi nakchadi nahi ho jitna maine socha tha. You're not all that bad," Shaan said as he smiled slightly.

"What do you mean, itni bhi buri nahi hoon? Ofcourse I'm not buri, I'm perfect," Khanak proudly exclaimed.

When she saw his raised eyebrows and realized what she said, she stopped talking. Shaan watched her as her expressions changed, and after about 5 seconds, they laughed, at the same time.

*Two years Later*

"Tho yeh thi hamari kahani ki shuruat," A gleeful Khanak exclaimed. She looked down at her lap as she watched Diya, their daughter, sleep. She looked as if she had fallen asleep listening to the prettiest fairytale. She had the calmest, most angelic look on her face. A hint of a smile played at the little girl's lips, who had just fallen asleep after listening to her parents' love story. Khanak shifted a little into a man's arm. As she turned her attention to meet eyes with Shaan, she realized she had the perfect life. Shaan tucked Khanak tighter under his arm, and then turned his attention to their daughter. He watched as Diya slept and was baffled at how much she looked like her mother. Shaan put a hand on Diya's head, caressing her hair then turned to Khanak, and with a slight kiss on her cheek said, "I Love you."

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I have three people to credit for this story. First, my friends AnnJan..they helped me finish this story. 😳 And Shini! she came up with a name for their daughter. Thanks guys!

Comment/criticism is appreciated.😳 I hope you "like" it. 😆

Edited by -Nitya- - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Nitya-

Here you go guys..another story with a HAPPY ending.😆 i'm running out..i have only like 5 more left that have happy endings..the others are all sad ones. this one, personally, is one of my faves..just cuz it's a very simple story. no special things happen..just simple stuff but it's very calming. 😳
Happy Reading.
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-Diya
"Oh god! Yeh sab bhi aaj hi hona tha!" Khanak muttered as she ran out of the house. It was an important day because she had a job interview that day. First she had woken up late and later found out that she didn't have any ironed clothes. Quickly putting on her formals, she grabbed her file and ran out of the house ignoring her mom's scolding. Grabbing her keys out of her bag, she turned the car on and geared into full speed.

All she could think of was the interview and her job. Being a daughter of a rich business man, all Khanak ever dreamt of was to make her own identity. She had learned a lot from her father, whom she considered her idol. Khanak had just completed her studies in an abroad program, and instead of joining the business with her father, she requested that he let her work as an employee in his office. This meant that she was going to go through all of the process that it took a normal person to acquire the job.

'I hope no one recognizes me there' so lost in her own thoughts, she didn't notice when the green light was called until the person behind her honked. She pressed the gas pedal but Khanak hadn't moved an inch when she crashed the backlight of the car in front of her. 'Khanak was shocked' would have been an understatement. All she could do was stare at the car in front of her with the big dent in the back. 'Way to be the most unlucky morning ever! Haye rabba! Why did this have to happen with me?!' Quickly getting out of the car, she walked up to the black Civic that she had run in to.

The owner climbed out of the car and just one look at his face made Khanak's breath quicken. His big brown eyes full of innocence and a tad bit of annoyance; his face was that of a Greek god. The perfect jaw line, his messy black hair and not to leave out the five 'o' clock shadow that made him look all the more better; Khanak didn't realize she was staring. "Umm'hello! Lady back to earth?!" Khanak dazed out of her dream world when he tapped her on the shoulder.

"What were you, drunk and driving? Could you not see I was in front of you?" the man asked, frustrated

Khanak was getting super annoyed at his irritated tone. If only the guy behind her had not scared her to death with that pesky honk, she wouldn't have bumped into this guy.

"Well, if you hadnt noticed, the light had turned green. You should have long been gone. It was your fault for still being at the signal," Khanak replied angrily. The day was just getting worse. Here she was, rushing to get to an interview she was already late to, and now she had an accident on her hands! "Great, things couldn't be going better," she thought to herself.

The man raised his eye-brows, frustration and annoyance clearly showing in his eyes. "Well, excuse me; you're supposed to leave enough space between you and the vehicle ahead of you. Clearly, you did not and you were rushing. Kaunsi train chootne vaali thi tumhari? You are undoubtedly at fault, and you're paying for the damage."

"Yeah right I am! Meri galthi thi hi nahi, tho main kyu karcha utaon?" Khanak said. She was beginning to realize that there was no easy way to get out of this, and if she got any later for her interview, she was sure she was going to lose the job.

After a ton of "tu-tu-main-main," both parties settled that it was Khanak's fault. Khanak decided there was no use trying to fight it out. She just needed to get to the interview, and she had no time for squabbling with a monkey! So she decided to be the "better person" and pay for the damage.

1/2 Hour later

Khanak walked in to her dad's office, still furious that she had to pay for that moron's car. She still saw no fault of her own! She cursed the man all the way as she walked to the room her interview would be held at.

"That dimwit, imbecile, ahh that blockhead! Poora din kharab kar diya! Kitna acha din tha aaj, and because of that fool i'm late for my interview." Khanak continued to bicker.

Khanak knocked on the door, and when she received an acknowledgment, walked in and braced herself for the interview. She had geared herself for every possible question she could be asked, for every challenge this manager would throw at her, but she was NOT prepared for what came next.

"TUM?!" came a loud outburst. Neither of them had known who the first one to shout it out was, but both of them were just as taken aback.

Sweat beads began forming on Khanak's fore-head! "Beta Khanak, thu tho gayi aaj! Tera kuch nahi hone vala," she thought to herself.

The man with the big brown eyes, the perfect jaw line, messy hair, a five o clock shadow and a face of a Greek God rose from his seat and extended his hand out to Khanak. A mischievous twinkle played in his eyes as he said, "Hi, I'm Shaan Khandelwal. Is office ka manager, and tumhara interviewee. And you?"

Khanak gasped! "Meri phooti kismat!" She thought to herself! "Bas isko hi mera interview lena tha? And why does he have the dumb glint in his eye?"

Khanak extended her hand, acknowledged the hand-shake and introduced herself! Shaan asked her to take a seat and the interview went on from there. After about 30 minutes, Shaan stood up and signaled Khanak to the door. Despite starting off on the wrong foot, the interview went quite well.

As Khanak was about to leave, Shaan called out to her which made her stop in her track. "Of-oh! Peeche se nahi tokthe! Itna bhi nahi ata is bandar ko?" Khanak thought to herself. She quickly turned around to face Shaan.

Shaan was sitting on top of the desk that stood in the middle of the room. For one split second, Khanak lost herself. His skin was so tan, and his hair ' it just swept across his face and gasp, his eyes! Her first impression of him was right, he WAS a Greek God.

As soon as she realized what she was doing, Khanak caught herself. "KHANAK, you're doing it again! STOP STARING," she gave herself a mental scolding.

"You know, tum itni bhi nakchadi nahi ho jitna maine socha tha. You're not all that bad," Shaan said as he smiled slightly.

"What do you mean, itni bhi buri nahi hoon? Ofcourse I'm not buri, I'm perfect," Khanak proudly exclaimed.

When she saw his raised eyebrows and realized what she said, she stopped talking. Shaan watched her as her expressions changed, and after about 5 seconds, they laughed, at the same time.

*Two years Later*

"Tho yeh thi hamari kahani ki shuruat," A gleeful Khanak exclaimed. She looked down at her lap as she watched Diya, their daughter, sleep. She looked as if she had fallen asleep listening to the prettiest fairytale. She had the calmest, most angelic look on her face. A hint of a smile played at the little girl's lips, who had just fallen asleep after listening to her parents' love story. Khanak shifted a little into a man's arm. As she turned her attention to meet eyes with Shaan, she realized she had the perfect life. Shaan tucked Khanak tighter under his arm, and then turned his attention to their daughter. He watched as Diya slept and was baffled at how much she looked like her mother. Shaan put a hand on Diya's head, caressing her hair then turned to Khanak, and with a slight kiss on her cheek said, "I Love you."

-------------------------------------------------------

I have three people to credit for this story. First, my friends AnnJan..they helped me finish this story. 😳 And Shini! she came up with a name for their daughter. Thanks guys!

Comment/criticism is appreciated.😳 I hope you "like" it. 😆



What can i say... What can i say? 😳


Brilliant writing, nitya, LOVED it.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank you sooooooo much for making Happy ending.I really loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this os.Amazingggggggg,superbbbbbbb and mindblowingggggggggggg.Keep writing more os.I m waiting for your other os.

fatima

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Originally posted by: pickachu

Thank you sooooooo much for making Happy ending.I really loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this os.Amazingggggggg,superbbbbbbb and mindblowingggggggggggg.Keep writing more os.I m waiting for your other os.

fatima

why are you thanking me? i should be the one thanking you for the awesome comment. 😳 thank you for the lovely comment...totally made my day.😳 and I'll post another one later this week.
=)
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Hello everyone. again. 😆
I made a little VM-ish kinda thing on KT..so thought of posting here.
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xEu9oRDFt30[/YOUTUBE]
i know it's bad..it's my first one. 😆 that's probably why..i hope to get better with practice. (let's see what happens)
Comment/Criticism is appreciated. =)
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Nice vm on Karan.I really loveeeeeee it.Make some more and also on shanak too.
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reserved hope i dont forget this one
luv
Fatima
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awesome os yaar
plz pm me from next time plzzzz
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read the first one "under the stars"...awwwwwwwwww it was shoo adorable! I can totally imagine her getting frustrated cus our lover boy hadn't yet said the three magical words...aww shoo cute!

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