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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
Here's a VM I made on ShaNak. (:
Hope you enjoy it!
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UXBVkQ_y3OY[/YOUTUBE]
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
Nitz,
I am so loving these.
:D

Much love.

PS. You really do know how to write happy endings ;)
So stop stressing my dear.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
soooo sweet & cute Nitya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34

Iam not that gud but let me try ........ (combination of English and Hindi words plz bare with me )

Tashu and her father doesnt give shan a chance to explain himself for ending up marrying khanak , she just walks away with a broken heart ,tears rolling in her eyes , with a betrayl look on her face, leaving behind shattered and devasted shantanu ,even shans parents leave him alone and walk to their rooms , shan goes to after tashu but she wont listen to him at all ,
kahank was left alone near entrance , dadi she asks khanak to come inside and takes her to shans room ,and asks her to take rest as they can talk about this in the morning ....... mean while shan doesnt turn up the whole night leaving khanak wondering where he is (caz basically she is a swweet heart ) .....some days pass khanak realises the pain shan is going through and so
does shan as he is know experiencing he tries to see wat khanak lost , but he is not ready to accept his mistake and yet blame khanak for his present status ,

Khanak goes to meet tasshu :-

M:- tashu baby aap sae milne koi aayi hai
T:- mujh sae ? kaun aaya hai ?
M:- patha nahin, woh apki intezar kar rahi hai
T:- tik hai , tashu sees khanak in their living room and she gets angry
T:- tum yaha kya kar rahi ho
K:- main tumsae milne aayi hu
T:- mujhe nahin hi tum sae milna hai , aur na hi baat karni hai
K:- par mujahe tum sae milka shantanu ke bare mein baat karni hai
T:- worried shan ke baaremein , kya hua shan ko
K:- dekha tum shan ki naam sunthae hi kitni tension(wats word in hindi ) mei aagayi, tum abhi bhi shan sae pyar karthi ho
T:- nahin , shan sae mera koi natha nahin , usne mera pyar aur viswas ka mazak udaya hai
K:- bus itne mein hi tumhara pyaar dagmaga gaya, shan pe barosa hi nahin raha ?
T:- angrly tum kaun hothi ho mujhae pyaar ke bare mein samjane wali
K:- she talk and explains about the situation which lead to their marriage , tashu listens and feels sorry for misunderstanding
shan , she thanks khanak and wonders if shan would like to talk to her, khanak encourages her to call shan and ask him to
meet her .........

Tashu :
Shan main tum sae mil na chahathi hu
Shan :- ha natasha mai tum sae milne ke liye taras raha hu
T:- tik hai mujahe 6 baje coffee shop mein millo
S:- tik hai
T:- Shan mujhae maaf kardo
S:- Nahin natasha, mafi tho mujhae magna chahiye, maine tumhara dil thoda hai
T:- Nahin shan mujhae khene do , main tumhe samajh nahin payi , maine tumhe apne aap ko explain karne ka mauka nahin diya ,
mai kitni pagal thi , papa ki bato pe yekin karliya, naki tum pe aur humhare pyar pe .
S:- Jo bit gaya un bato ko yad karne sae sirf taklif bad thi hai ,par mai kush hu ki tumhe mujhe par aur humhare pyaar par yekin ho gaya...
T:- hesitatingly shan mujhae tum sae kuch kehna hai ,
S:- Ha natasha kaho
T:- Shan , promise karo ki tum naraz nahin hoge ,
S:- yes baby i wont
T:- Khanak came to met me today
S:- Kya Khanak tum sae milne aayi thi , aabh kya chahiye usae (gussae sae )
T:- shan meri baat suno, khanak mujhae sab sach bataya, woh chahathi thi ki mai tumsae milkar baat karu.
S;- wonders whats on khanaks mind .

same day shan asks khanak :
Shantanu :-
Tum Kyu Gayi thi natasha sae milne, irada kya hai tum hara? tum hari wajaha sae maine apna pyaar khoyaga hai ,tum mujha sae badla lena chahathi ho ?? jab tum mujhae sae nafrat karthi ho tho tumhe natasha sae milkar ye jatha ne ki kya zarurat hai ki tum achi ho aur main irresponsible ??

khanak Replies back very patiently :-

YE sach hai ki mai tum sae nafrat karthi hu, mai tumhe saza dena chahathi thi , par mai pyar ki kadar aur izat karthi hu ,maine tumhara aur natasha ka pyaar dekha aur mehsoos bhi kiya hai , pyaar khone ka dard kya hotha hai mujh sae zada kaun jaan saktha hai , par mai tum hari jalthi ki saza mai natasha ko kyu du ?? us ne tho tumhe sache dil sae chaha hai chahe tum kitne bhi laparwa aur gair zimedar ho .... pyaar khoke jeena kya hotha hai main janthi hu .Isi liye mai natasha sae milne gayi thi taki woh sach jan sake ,

Listening to this shan is shocked and for first time he understand her as a person and her pain of loosing suraj.

Mai tumhara suraj tho wapas nahin la saktha ,par agar tumhe kuch chahiye tho bejijak mujh sae keh do,
K:- Mai apne zindagi mein aage badna chahathi hu , apne pairope khada hona chahathi hu, apne balduthae par.
S:- he promises to help her in finding a job for her .....

Thus begins their journey of friendship

Will continue later ........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
awesome OS gallery
All the OS are very well written
Do write more

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Posted: 15 years ago
#36

This is what happens when I can't go to sleep at night!😳😆 I wrote this like exactly 30 mins ago..and so it probably sucks!

The title has nothing to do with the story..I've just been listening to the teri liye song from the new promo and so i put it as the title too.😆

Tere Liye

It was a regular day at the Khandelwal house. Even after five months of being the house's bahu, Khanak still wasn't accepted by her socialite mother-in-law and the good for nothing Khushboo. Mr. K and Akshay, however, had grown a liking to her, her food having been so delicious, anyone person with the right mind had to give in. Natasha had left the house when Mr.K had thrown a fit about her staying in the same house with the people that betrayed her at the altar. Of course, there was a different reason to it, one that Khanak knew very well.

One thing that had changed though was the relationship between her and Shaan. It was a change that was noted by everyone in the house, resulting in an outburst by Khushboo and Mrs.K, no one really paying heed to them though. Shaan had gone from a phase of absolutely despising Khanak to becoming her friend; with no hidden intentions at that. Although he still reminisced his moments with Natasha, they lacked the same happiness as before. To him, remembering his past life had become a responsibility, just like "loving" Natasha had also become one. And, even Shaan knew it was just a way to convince himself that he doesn't love Khanak. The name itself brought a smile to his face, a smile that reached his eyes, sending a glow that was meant solely for her. There wasn't one thing she didn't do for him. From waking up the 'laadle saab' in the morning to serving him dinner in the evening, everything was done by her. Just the way it should've been. It amazed him to see how she did everything with so much ease, as though she enjoys doing it all. Little did he know that she actually does.

Khanak on the other hand, was going through a dilemma. Her six months were coming to an end, which meant that not only did she have to leave the house, but her ada and bai would get thrown out of the haweli. She seemed so pre-occupied with her thoughts sometimes that even Shaan had pressured her into talking. She had just tossed it off by saying she was tired or exhausted. Having the frequent nightmares about them being thrown out didn't help the poor girl's situation.

-Night time-

Just like any other night, Khanak spread the sheet onto the floor, lay her head on the pillow and indulged herself into a night of sleep. Muttering a soft goodnight to Khanak, Shaan turned the lights off and soon fell asleep as well. It was around three in the morning when Shaan was awakened by the soft cries in the room. Overcome with worry, he quickly walked over to Khanak and sat down where she lay. "Nahi! Mujhe iss ghar se mat nikaliye! Mere ada aur bai...nahi" was all she was saying thru the cries. Not bearing to see her crying, Shaan had tried to wake her up. As though she sensed someone close to her, Khanak quickly got up and wrapped herself in his arms, still in sobs that seeped through his shirt. It was probably a reflex reaction because the next thing Shaan had done was wrap his arm around her and gently smoothed her hair in an attempt to console. That moment, Shaan had realized two things; that he could never bear to see her cry again and the fact that he was in love. Shaan was in love with Khanak. "Mrs.Khanak Shantanu Khandelwal" he whispered to himself, as though it would make it final to him and the world.

That night Shaan had fulfilled two of his vows; the vow that he would protect her from anything and everything and and that he would stand by her side thru sadness and grief.

"Zindagi gawa kar bhi jo zindagi miley,har khushi gawa kar bhi jo ik khushi miley,toh maang loon main tere liye..."

(^^from the new show's title song)


Edited by -Nitya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
That was beautiful!

I can't wait for Mr.K to throw Natasha out of the house. Blah.
& as for Khushboo and Madhavi, well they're just spoilt anyway. LOL.

Loved the night part... Mrs. Khanak Shantanu Khandewal. *sigh*

Much love. <3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
i absolutely loved it nitya!!!👏 is this an OS?😕does that mean it wont be continued?😔
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Superbbbbbbbbbbb os nitya.I hope this happens in drama too.I don't like shaan and natasha romance.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thank you!

Originally posted by: -saBii-

That was beautiful!

I can't wait for Mr.K to throw Natasha out of the house. Blah.
& as for Khushboo and Madhavi, well they're just spoilt anyway. LOL.

Loved the night part... Mrs. Khanak Shantanu Khandewal. *sigh*

Much love. <3



Thank youuuu! *hug* and I will party like crazy the day Natasha leaves. 😆
No one really cares much about the two ladies anyways..so I'm fine with them being in the house. and I enjoy the frequent "oh snap' moments they go through! LOL!

ILY! and thank you once again!


Originally posted by: tofeeees

i absolutely loved it nitya!!!👏 is this an OS?😕does that mean it wont be continued?😔



thank you! *hug* and yea..it's an OS. I'll maybe write another part to it, make him confess.😃 I can't promise though..but I will try.

Originally posted by: pickachu

Superbbbbbbbbbbb os nitya.I hope this happens in drama too.I don't like shaan and natasha romance.

fatima



thank you! *hug* I hope so too..in a better way though, mine was kind of bland-ish. 😆 Shaan and Natasha get on my nerves! she's such a chipku.😡


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